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Nurse 911 with patient Good Guy with a Gun by Philip Kaplan











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Patient: Good Guy with a Gun
Legal Guardian: Philip Kaplan
Rating: ★★
Insurance: Paperkutz
Symptoms: rifle rumination, host hazing
Diagnosis: righteous revolver rage




Patient Description:

Nurse911:
The last case was a dangerous one; quarantine for the patient was arranged immediately. Good Guy with a Gun was blistered with writing illness that could escalate if not treated immediately. It's a story about a game show that lacked logical flow and fell flat with its plot. Wayne's personality may have been designed with humor in mind, but it doesn't survive when he starts to lecture about guns. He orchestrates the play as a bland pro-gun commercial. Nadal also laughs out loud more than I think a normal human being would, making his character unbelievable. Why does Betty Jo say "I'm not qualified to make a decision" when asked who she thinks is the honest contestant? The hiccups in sense continue throughout the piece. To the legal guardian's credit, I personally don't understand the jokes. I don't know much about gun culture and consequently, didn't appreciate the satire that's bustling within. The bottom line is that the technical flaws would deter both people who are and aren't familiar with guns. The emergency room is ready for you, Doctor.
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Published on March 04, 2018 18:04 Tags: gameshow

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