I would be completing first draft of Fight(Struggle 2) and I am looking for 2-3 pre-readers/Beta Readers that can give feedback with regards to...

1) Characters - stay consistent and grow as appropriate.
2) Scenes, places, and etc all work
3) Laws of Nature/etc are honored (that is laws of the given universe)
4) Pacing
5) Plot holes/logic jumps
6) Over all opinion
7) Consistency, Consistency, Consistency

Cool If you have read Struggle 1 as well.

I am NOT looking for line editing, typos, grammar, spelling, etc. I will not turn that down, but I know they are in there, as the book not gone to editing yet.

This will enable you to read Struggle before anyone even know about it. If you feel you can help me please fill out this form. http://bit.ly/PABeta . This information will be kept private and will be used for determining Beta Reading participants only.