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207 pages, Hardcover
First published January 1, 2011
This book shines brightest when the author can indulge his talent for arresting images and inventive accessories to golden-age horror tropes. Like Ray Bradbury, Peter Crowther is a natural storyteller whose style is simultaneously vivid and accessibly conversational.
Where this book stumbles is in dialogue and pacing. In sharp contrast to his prose, Crowther's idiomatic dialogue feels overly self-aware and unnatural—alternately cutesy and awkward. It's easier to get over the hump of accepting ghoulies and ghosties and long-leggedy-beasties (and hook-nosed witches) than it is to get over that jarring feeling that real people don't sound like this! But this is an ostensibly stylistic shortcoming, so your mileage may vary.
The truly unfortunate problem—truly unfortunate because it's so easily fixable—is that it's a 60k-word book that ought to have been told in 30k words. Literally 75% of the book is prologue, setting the scene and establishing the conflict, padded with unimportant characters fed to the victim chipper-shredder. These characters exist completely apart from any of the protagonists, with lives and experiences that in no way affect the evolution of the underlying narrative. Their sole purpose is to establish the mechanisitic qualities of the threat that the heroes face—which is necessary enough... but not at the cost of 75% of the story's run-time. A little editorial economy would've served this story well.
In the end, By Wizard Oak is serviceable Halloween read, but it could've been really fun...