I bought this book for fifty cents off the clearance rack of my local public library, so I wasn't expecting Pulitzer material. But this is easily one of the bottom five worst books I've read, maybe even worst ever. The writing was clumsy, overly wordy, overly complicated, and exhausting to read. If you took the cut text from Fifty Shades of Grey and a bad episode of CSI and threw them in a blender, you'd end up with something similar to this.
But the quality of the prose, or lack thereof, is not why I disliked this book so much. That certainly didn't help, but books can be entertaining without necessarily being well-written. Not only was the prose bad, this story was thrown together with so little regard for pacing, plausibility, or character development, I found myself flipping back through to make sure I hadn't skipped something somehow. (Seriously, the protagonist and the love interest spend an entire chapter melodramatically arguing about pistachios, but each independently decide in the space of about two pages that they've fallen desperately in love with each other.)
Nikki is the stereotypical bland mass-market female romance hero: successful high-powered career but feels unfulfilled because she hasn't seriously dated anyone, she has a supportive and supposedly much prettier than her rich best friend who is also apparently clairvoyant for some reason, spends a lot of time staring at herself in the mirror musing about how "plain" she is even though based on her physical description she'd clearly be considered conventionally attractive, the whole predictable package. (Also apparently these women live in an alternate universe where literally anything and everything that could ever happen to you is a professional liability. Nikki is a doctor, and she and her friend talk incessantly about "OMG can you IMAGINE what this would do you to if it got out at work?? Your career would be OVER" when all she did was start dating someone she met online, or read a novel that includes some adult content, or you know, narrowly escape a serial killer. HOW DARE YOU have almost been the victim of a violent crime at the hands of a psychopath Nikki!! YOU'RE FIRED!)
And that's before we even get to the love interest, who is A COMPLETE CREEP and really takes the cake for reasons why this book was garbage.
This is supposed to be a romance between the escaped victim of a serial killer and the detective trying to catch the killer. And that romance is supposed to be sweet and cute and we're supposed to root for them to be together. But Thomas, the love interest, does SO MANY absolutely disgusting, controlling, boundary-challenged, and abusive things, I thought there would be some crazy plot twist by which he turns out to be the one who is trying to kill her. Here is a by no means exhaustive list of the awful things he does:
- aggressively berates and threatens her in a grocery store because she took an item he wanted
- takes a topless photo she took of herself to send to her online boyfriend which was turned over to the police as evidence and keeps a copy for himself without asking her
- when he decides he has to take her out of the city to protect her from the killer, he puts her in his car while she's unconscious and drives several hours away to some random "safe house" without any other people or police officers present
- packs a bag for her while they're hiding out and purposefully doesn't pack her any underwear (They ARE NOT in a relationship or even hooking up when he does this)
- constantly refers to her as his property and threatens to kill anyone else who comes near her, both internally and out loud
- he's always yelling, insulting, and snapping at her for absolutely no reason and expects her to put with it because "he just has a gruff personality"
- when she wants to leave the safe house they're holed up in, he LOCKS THE DOOR, CUTS THE PHONE LINE, AND PHYSICALLY RESTRAINS HER FROM LEAVING despite her repeated assertions that she wants to go home, and after he imprisons her, the book spoils the one good moment of emotional resonance there could have been by choosing this moment for them to have a heart to heart about how this serial killer killed Thomas' daughter years ago, and after telling her that he says "Now do you understand why I can't let you leave?" Seriously, this guy uses a sob story about his dead daughter to manipulate her into accepting the fact that he just kidnapped her and is holding her against her will, and she APOLOGIZES, and for what, having the audacity to tell this insane detective that she'd rather not stay out here in this supposed safe house locked in with him 24 hours a day when literally no one else knows where they are and there are no other cops around to protect her, which is his supposed reason for doing this, and we're supposed to like this guy?
- She goes away for the weekend with her friend, and he breaks into her apartment and waits for her there, and when she comes home he screams at her, demanding to know where she was and who she was with and why she didn't call him, and accuses her of cheating on him (They have been hooking up at this point, but it has not been established that they are in a relationship or that he had any expectation of anything more than a physical relationship)
And I'm not kidding, that really just scratches the surface. I cannot possibly say enough bad things about this book. Don't waste your time or money on this.