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Do you believe in a place outside human knowledge-a place where myth and legend collide-where the unthinkable is the mundane?

There is a thin veil between reality and make believe. When you take a moment, and push the veil aside, perhaps you will see this place. It is not a place of the imagination, for everything you see here is real.

Nothing is what it seems. Noises are not what you think. Nothing is off limits. No place is safe.

In The Endlands, you might find yourself lost in the past, or trapped in the future. You might find yourself amidst vampires and werewolves, or in a most peculiar lost and found department.

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12 authors.

Cristin Martin

David Stubblefield

Janelle Garcia

Craig Wessel

Tamara Wilhite

Nathan Palmer

Jordan Benoit

Jairus Reddy

Jennifer Chapman

Christina Estabrook

17 short stories of the strange and bizarre.

320 pages, Paperback

First published January 11, 2011

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Author 10 books76 followers
August 14, 2011
The thrill uncertainty brings is nothing to the terror of the known.

The Endlands brings you to the borders of the some of the most thrilling, haunting, and demented places the world has to offer. The past, present, and future all holds secret horrors just waiting for the unsuspecting, the trusting, and the gullible.

There are 17 stories in here to invigorate your nightmares and taint your view of the moonlight. The things that go bump in the night are hungry, and they will not restrain themselves because you say "please." Stories of death, mutilation, experiments, dismemberment, and all sorts of unmentionable thrills lay in wait between the covers.

I really enjoyed this book. I flew through the stories, anxious to see what place the next story would take me. The stories ranged from graphic and gory to imaginative and discreet. Most of these stories gave me goosebumps at one point, but there were a few that fell short in comparison of the rest of the collection. I won't say which was my least favorite, because I do not want to taint your ideas of any of the stories, but I will tell you the ones that were my favorite on the creepy scale:

Room 422
A Night in Polidoria
Glass Prison
Into the Small Hours
THEY

Not saying that the rest of the stories are great, but these are my favorites out of the collection. There were a few that I had to rub my arms to erase the chills that had a race to my shoulders. A few of them let me down at the end. I'm not saying I'm hard to please, but maybe I am. Some of te stories had me ready to flip the lights on and call my mommy, but I reach the end and thought, "REALLY??"

If it weren't for those tragically poor endings on a few of the stories, this would have easily been a four star rating, but judging the book as a whole, I give this a good solid, 3 star rating and a high recommendation that you read the book. You may enjoy the endings I didn't care for, and I promise you you will find a handful of the stories worthy enough to made you tuck your feet up so they aren't dangling over the edge of the bed....
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January 7, 2011
I read the entire book. I enjoyed the read. Each story is completely different and gives you a new feel with each one. The mix of drama mystery and sci/fi was a great and welcomed change with each story. I thought the stories were all well written. My personal Favorite without giving away any details was The Best BBQ on the Interstate by Jennifer Chapman. I was on the edge of my seat with a need to know feeling the entire story...
I also liked the story They ; by Vincent Hobbes... The story flowed off the pages and the characters were likeable and real and drew me into the story. Phases of Normal; was another favorite of mine. I read the story and it made me think of what the future could hold if humanity keeps going the way it is.
Every story in this book was original and a great read. Each story had something to bring to the table and I would recommend this Book to anyone who loves to read and hates to be board.
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9 reviews2 followers
August 30, 2011
Ok, here are my thoughts so far:

I am trying hard not to give too much away...

Room 422 (Patrick Greene)
“We’ve run out of time,”
The short story Room 422 is a great opening for this book. It appears to be a story about an expectant couple, but setting the theme of the book, there is another dimension to this couples future. A very strong short story, telling just enough and leaving you in that lace where you work out the possibilities in your head.

A Night in Polidoria (Cristin Martin)
Eh, I see this one as filler. I hate to say that about any story/book because everyone of them has a purpose and this one I’m sure has its fans. But an oversaturation of the subject matter in the last few years has left me indifferent. I did get into the story, and the writing is good. But it seemed predictable. But if I look at the book like a bowl of snack mix, this one will be with the bits left in the bowl after the parties over.

Flying Fish (David Stubblefield)
Starting off a little slow, this story caught me off guard. I really liked it. This one can truly be called an original, I can’t even think of a book even slightly similar. I love stories that make you go back and reread the last chapter to truly absorb what just happened. The writing is good, easy to follow and challenging enough to race you through the pages. While I think it is perfect in short story format, I kept thinking about the next phase in the main characters’ lives long after finishing.

Limbo, Population 458 (Vincent Hobbes)
Ok, this one is a creeper, the first of the stories to make me reminisce about the Twilight Zone. The hair on the back of my neck started standing up as I was nearing the end. At first I was distracted by my dislike of the character Sara, but that lessened with the balance of the strong and introspective John, realizing that all these characteristics are needed to place them in the town that is as much a character in this story as the married couple. Very well written.

Finders Keepers (Janelle Garcia)
When I read a story like Finders Keepers I wonder how the author got to this place. Do you put yourself in the story, as the main subject and flesh out (may be a bad phrase to use) the setting around yourself? Do you write as if you are observing outside of it, as if an unseen presence in the room? In this story I can’t imagine where it came from. The subject of a lost and found office and the object people leave behind while traveling could go in so many directions, but I never saw this one coming. Short and searing.

Loose Ends (Craig Wessel)
I enjoyed the subject of this (very) short story. It is indeed from another end of possibilities, but I’m not sure how it flows with the other short stories as a whole. While most of the others are organic and other worldly in a way, this one was more in line with forces of technology. The writing was wonderful and easy to be drawn into; the subject was great and the idea unique. I guess I’m on the fence, liked the story but not sure how it fit together.

To Read or Not to Read (Vincent Hobbes)
I had to stop myself from jumping ahead to do the review for this one. I think by far, I favored this one. The possibilities for To Read or Not to Read could go further than a short story. This is the one story from this book I can see as a full novel or as a screen play even. The characters are fleshed out and real with just a small amount of information given, the description of the shop was just enough to feel I was in it and the pace kept me on the edge of my seat. At first I was put off by the name, but after reading it over again (and a third time) it either grew on me or was cemented, because now it is To Read or Not in my head. I’ve always been the kind of person who loves dusty used book stores and now I’ll be that woman peeking around corners for hidden reading rooms too. I want to visit this bookstore! Loved it.

Phases of Normal (Tamara Wilhite)
As a woman and a mom, this story made me wiggle around in my seat while I was reading. The concept is intriguing, I am a fan of reading dystopian books and could see this expanded to be the result of what could happen if mankind tried to reverse a downward spiral of excess and hate. Or maybe a socialist societies way of equalizing and control? Well written.

Propaganda (Nathan Palmer)
I’m not sure how I feel about this one, its one of those stories where you might try to self examine who the monsters really are-which side are you on. And it is an easy call if you only look at the subject overall. But it wouldn’t make a strong full length story, but in a collection of short stories it is well read. I guess like the story Loose Ends it felt off from the others-in a different way. But I tend to lose my concentration when reading a story that repeats a word to often, the use of They is very liberal in this story.

off to reread the rest...

I hope this works, I just realized last week my continued review did not post....


King of the Jungle (Jordan Benoit)
Not a story I would pick up on my own, but enjoyable. I won’t give much away, but I think I could see what was coming half way through-but maybe that was the writers’ intention. I haven’t read a straight forward hunter/prey type book in a long time, but I think the tension could have been pushed up a little more. For someone who likes her hunt more psychological than physical, my attention would dip here and there. But the inevitable twist always helps end a story on a high note. I could see reading more from the author, unless it’s a hunting manual.

The Hour of the Time (Vincent Hobbes)
Oh boy, how I love dystopian stories right now. But I can’t say that this story falls into that category. Another creeper, and I hope to give nothing away before anyone reads it. I skipped around and read this one early on and found myself going back to it a couple of times. During a party I gave a quick synopsis of it to a few friends and everyone had a different reaction, as I expect most will who read it through. I love the concept, and although I could see it in a longer form, I love it as a short story. Because I love the idea of a short story staying in my head like an idea, a thought that pops back in there at unexpected times, you carry it around with you. I have read plenty of novels that I enjoyed and think of from time to time, but a short can have staying power, the whole story stays with you. This one comes to mind at the oddest times, just last week while waiting in an endless line at a popular farmers market I kept checking my number as the woman behind the counter called out which was next, I chuckled and thought “good thing its extra sharp cheddar I’m waiting for.” I love that, it makes some stories immortal to different people, and I would love to creat something like that.

Thanksgiving (Jairus Reddy)
Ok, this could be really happening! No, you know it isn’t, or is it? Ha, really I just love stories of double, sinister realities. And I love that it’s all in our government, who better to be the monsters? When I first started reading this story I thought it was going in the direction of one of my favorite novels, Never Let Me Go by Kazuo Ishiguro, but so not that outcome. I can’t believe a person who can barely clean her own cuts is saying this, but it may need more gore. I read this one as more of a monster/demon story than a high tension and jump out from around the corner story. So I expect a level of flesh tearing or fighting, I think there could have been a little more. Not gratuitous gore, just letting the monsters be monstrous. The writing is easy to read, I have a hard time sticking with a story when the author gets choppy during chase scenes. But this has a smooth flow that carries you through it. I know someone would point to V or others, but I could see this one developed more and in a longer form or dare I say it, on screen. Or maybe that’s the writing-it gives a good visual.

Into the Small Hours (Patrick Greene)
Oh I hate these stories, and I love them. You know the stories that make you start looking behind you when you walk up the stairs to bed, look at shadows out of the corner of your eye, the short stories that embed in the back of your mind. I have been traveling recently and one night when I was laying in bed in a hotel this story came to my mind. Great. So then I couldn’t fall back to sleep, and I even started listening to sounds outside of my room. Great. So I’m lying there not sleeping thinking of how anything could be on the other side of the door, those people are all strangers and I’m alone and could just disappear. Great. I love it!

The Dragon of Delinar (Vincent Hobbes)
I went through a time where I seemed to be gravitating toward medieval and Arthurian time subjects, ok I read a book or two. But I do like when a story is more of an alternate place but has these aspects, almost modern medieval. I guess I should try steampunk. Anyway. I liked this story, I did, but I spent a little too much time thinking it didn’t fit with the theme of this anthology. They I got to the end and realized I missed the best parts, the little clues that are in the story that get you to the ‘I knew it!’ moment at the end. So I had to walk away and go back to it. Very solidly written and for a short story with many miscellaneous characters, they are well developed. But it leaves you hanging. What’s going to happen to him?! How could it end there? Another hate/love tactic in a story, the most startling moment in the last few lines, love it.

The Best BBQ on the Interstate (Jennifer Chapman)
Ok, lets just get it out of the way, ewwww. Oh, and mmmmm, I love barbeque.
Wow, what a story. This was one of my favorites. It has all the elements needed to make you start turning to the next page as your racing down the one you’re still reading. I was attached to the characters and could feel the environment, smell the air. I loath to give any of the fun away, but I’m sure everyone will put it together. What a story, I don’t know much about butchering, but I guess this is just possible enough to give me the chills the next time I go to that great BBQ place off the road in Austin. I am glad (in a weird way) that the little girl ins in the story, her character seemed like another element to add to the tension, and the backwoods feeling of “they have kids around during this?!” Great story, and another I wished lasted a lot longer but loved as a short.

Glass Prison (Christina Estabrook)
Now I will add mirrors to my list of possible sinister objects. This is an eerie story, and the thought of the person you trust the most being in question always adds tension. I’m already checking the shadows around my office; the author did an excellent job making them into one of the characters. And it’s such a great fear element to be trapped, and in something that could be in full sight.

THEY (Vincent Hobbes)
To be honest, I read this one first. I just picked it because of the simple title. I think I ended up judging the overall tone of the book from this story, the subject of each story fitting with this one. Not a mistake, but not the best way to approach them. This is the story that you read thinking you know what’s going to happen, then reassess on each turn. Then it jumps out at you, catching you almost off guard but still saying ‘I knew it.’ The reason this story is one of my favorites would be the focus on the characters. Each character is a real person, fleshed out just enough to pull you in a little and that’s important when you get to the last few paragraphs. I also enjoy the lack of description of the bad guys, it is just classic horror. Not knowing what they are up against almost makes it a different kind of scary. Almost a campfire story to tell sitting in the dark, to give everyone a long sleepless night. Enjoyed it.

Overall, I really liked this book. I’ve suggested to a few people that share my interests. The individual stories hold up on their own and most could be discussed in a book club (I brought up a few of them at a party, and wow, what a conversation that became.) A few would be great as longer formats and I would be in line to buy the stand alone. I look forward to following a few of the writers, I have a feeling they will be bringing us great books in the future.
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1,293 reviews308 followers
July 14, 2011
Vol. 1 of “The Endlands” is a delight for lovers of the weird side of story-telling. The creator of this anthology is said to have been a fan of Rod Serling and The Twilight Zone, and that is definitely obvious in the story choices. Featuring short stories about everything from strange creatures masquerading as politicians to body-snatching demons, from cannibals to flying whales (yes, you heard me right!), the stories included in this anthology are sure to include something to please any lover of horror fiction or the macabre. The story settings range from fantasy, science fiction, near-future dystopianism, magical reality and to the just plain weird.

The writing is nicely done – it is obvious that each of the authors has experience and talent in spades. I tried – oh how I tried! – to read it slowly, to savor the stories, but I kept finding myself shredding through the virtual pages as fast as I could, eager to find the twist that would make this story stand out, excited to find what disturbing item I would find on the next page, in the next story. I highly recommend this book, full of wonderfully disturbing little gems of stories. Don’t miss it!
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419 reviews35 followers
February 13, 2011
these book are great you got to believe in ghost fairy tale and folk tale
they are a bunch of small novel in one book i was awed by the book i read it in less than 2 day
the story keep you on y our toes t her is some in i really like the one is the tribe send
the best hunter out to kill the monster well he does and he kills i would think is 2 bears
but he hear noise in the cave and then he see his buddies hanging on stick he does not know who
this thing is can you figure it out Mr Hobbes has one in the book the hour of time and that
one i give 5 stars to it the guy thought he was late he was never late for noting
and then wait in line to be called and then when he does get called he is taken to room
i will not say what happen but it not what i thought it would be great book and keep you
on the toes
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Author 19 books108 followers
December 29, 2010
Room 422 (Patrick Greene)
A Night in Polidoria (Cristin Martin)
Flying Fish (David Stubblefield)
Limbo, Population 458 (Vincent Hobbes)
Finders Keepers (Janelle Garcia)
Loose Ends (Craig Wessel)
To Read or Not to Read (Vincent Hobbes)
Phases of Normal (Tamara Wilhite)
Propaganda (Nathan Palmer)
King of the Jungle (Jordan Benoit)
The Hour of the Time (Vincent Hobbes)
Thanksgiving (Jairus Reddy)
Into the Small Hours (Patrick Greene)
The Dragon of Delinar (Vincent Hobbes)
The Best BBQ on the Interstate (Jennifer Chapman)
Glass Prison (Christina Estabrook)
THEY (Vincent Hobbes)
23 reviews
February 14, 2011
I recently received this book as a giveaway from GoodReads.

The Endlands was an enjoyable collection of short stories from several authors. All of the stories are written in the style of The Twilight Zone.

The only negative I can say about the book is that it went by so quickly. It left me wanting more.
Author 39 books175 followers
April 11, 2011
I have to admit that I have a strong bias for old things: old music, artwork, stories, movies, buildings, etc.. Although there are many wonderful contemporary tales available for consumption, I find myself yearning for the stories of yesteryear, in particular classical horror.

I grew up watching shows like The Twilight Zone and The Outer Limits, staying up way past my bedtime as a kid to greedily devour every creepy episode that played on my television set in the wee hours of the morning. I’d always lamented that to get my literary fix of the equivalent of these landmark TV shows, I was limited to reading H.P. Lovecraft or the old dime novels or pulp magazines of the 50’s and 60’s. Just when I had given up hope that I would ever read a contemporary novel that would carry on the tradition that Rod Serling and Lovecraft pioneered, I was graced with a copy of The Endlands by Vincent Hobbes.

This wonderfully conceived anthology contains several short stories written by various talented authors including Mr. Hobbes. I am made speechless by the prolific writing and excellence of the stories contained within the pages of The Endlands. There are no throwaway tales. Each story is masterfully written, ranging from the supernatural to the macabre, all evoking a sense of wonder or terror. What impresses me most about this book is that unlike most contemporary horror novels, The Endlands doesn’t rely on cheap gimmicks or excessive gore to terrify the reader. This is good old-fashioned horror in the classic mode. The psychological terror of the tales in this book will leave any reader with goose bumps.

The stories contained within The Endlands range from horror, paranormal, fantasy, and sci-fi, but are all meant to shock and stimulate the senses. Though I consider all of the stories in this book to be noteworthy, I have to say my personal favorite was 'To Read or Not to Read' by Vincent Hobbes. This story sums up what The Endlands is all about.

It’s been a while since a book impressed me this much. The Endlands is a book you won’t soon forget. I recommend this book to any reader who loves to be scared and isn’t afraid to wonder what may happen when they turn out the lights.

5 Stars
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1,608 reviews34 followers
June 7, 2011
I received this book for free from the Goodreads first reads program.
I have been enjoying reading this collection of short stories. I don't read many story collections, but I am realizing how much I like them. A short story doesn't take much time commitment and can be finished in one sitting. It is perfect if you have a busy life and don't have much time to sit and read. You can finish a short story quickly and get all the emotional payoff of reading a longer novel. Here are my thoughts on some of the stories.

Loose Ends - an interesting concept. The story was very short but also a little poignant.
To Read or Not To Read - a fun story to read. The ending was funny, in a dark humor sort of way. I like stories about people who like to read. This also seemed like a cool and unique story.
Phases of Normal - an interesting tale of a future where everyone tries to be the same.
King of the Jungle - the ending was a little predictable.
A Night in Polidoria - I just wondered why anyone would stay in that town.
Thanksgiving - I love stories about the reporter finding out that what is happening is way bigger than previously thought.
The Best BBQ on the Interstate - this one was fun to read. But a little too easy for me to guess the ending.
Glass Prison - I think my favorite of all the stories. I got a real sense of character.

I did read the entire book. I enjoy this genre and read quite a bit. Maybe I have read too many books, because it was easy to predict where most of the stories were going. I think that cut down on the "shock" factor of many of the endings. This would be a great book for someone who hasn't read a lot of horror stories, and who's mind doesn't automatically jump to what would make for a scary ending. Many of the stories were well written and it would be enjoyable to read more from the authors.
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91 reviews14 followers
March 1, 2011
I received this book as part of a Goodreads First Reads giveaway. I appreciated the unique mix of stories that the book contained. Even reading in broad daylight, some were quite scary, especially because a few of them did not seem that far out there. I will certainly be locking doors and leaving lights on tonight, pretending I don't hear any unusual noises.

The stories I enjoyed the most were:
-"To Read or Not to Read" by Vincent Hobbes (Really great story idea!)
-"Into the Small Hours" by Patrick Greene (Awesome!!!)

Least Favorite were:
-"Finders Keepers" by Janelle Garcia
-"Glass Prison" by Christina Estabrook
-"Limbo, Population 458" by Vincent Hobbes (Seemed similar to "You Know They Got a Hell of a Band" by Stephen King, but not as enjoyable)

Best Twist:
-"The Dragon of Delinar" by Vincent Hobbes
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37 reviews18 followers
January 4, 2011
As a publisher, this was one of the hardest projects I have ever put together. Sifting and reading hundreds of manuscripts, multiple times, made the final product very satisfying. I love the mix between horror, fantasy and just weird stories that wound up making the cut. I truly believe Rod Serling would appreciate the homage Mr. Hobbes paid to The Twilight Zone by creating this anthology.
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Author 44 books1,592 followers
May 7, 2011
A wonderful collection overall. Like many anthologies, some of the stories were not as good as the rest, but I found this to be a great tribute to Rod Serling.
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51 reviews37 followers
August 9, 2011
Normally shorts stories aren't my favorite type as I feel like their missing something, but with horror stories it doesn't happen so much. Here's a mini summary about each story and an overall opinion at the end.

Room 422 (Patrick Greene)

A man in a hospital waiting to give birth to their baby, or perhaps not.

This story was great although short, when I read the last sentence I thought wow that would

be a great book on it's own.

A Night in Polidoria (Cristin Martin)

Polidoria is a hunted town, the people who live there don't go out after dark, they eat

a lot of garlic and meals were blessed by a priest. The nails in their walls are made of

silver and hidden they have bottles of holly water and wooden stakes.

This is the home of Diana, a seventeen year old girl who's world is about to turn upside down.

This story was interesting, although Diana is a bit to trusting, you would of thought that

living where she does she would be less trusting.

Flying Fish (David Stubblefield)

Okay so flying wales in this one :)

It was interesting to read an intriguing as I wondered what would actually happen if Whales

somehow started flying.

Limbo, Population 458 (Vincent Hobbes)

A husband and a wife travelling on the road. The wife needs to use the bathroom and they

stumble upon a quiet old town. Maybe to quiet.

It was a really good story, I can't say much about it without giving anything away. But really

creepy.

Finders Keepers (Janelle Garcia)

Beth works for the lost and found in Hotel Sunny Days.

Okay so I wont give anything more away, truthfully I didn't think much of this story. I mean it

was gory and unsettling but I think it was missing a plot. Although it's well written.

Loose Ends (Craig Wessel)

A very short story about a man named Cain. Or not.

To Read or Not to Read (Vincent Hobbes)

Shelby is a young woman who enters a bookshop, but not everything is what it seems.

My favorite, I really wanted to be in that bookshop and I couldn't see why it was horror

until I read the end that is.

Phases of Normal (Tamara Wilhite)

This one was a bit complicated to follow for a short story, as it's about genetics and how to

make the perfect human.

Propaganda (Nathan Palmer)

At first this seemed like a paranormal story, as the author describes a young soldier on his way

to kill some monsters. Or not?

King of the Jungle, (Jordan Benoit)

A hunter goes to the forest to find a man eating monster, only to find much more.

The Hour of the Time (Vincent Hobbes)

About a man who hates being late.

Thanksgiving (Jarius Reddy)

A feast for thanksgiving involving human clones? Spooky

Into the small hours (Patrick Greene)

This one was interesting, It was about a man staying in a hotel who has a night visitor.

The Dragon of Delinar (Vincent Hobbes)

The Kingdom of Delinar lives in peace for now.

The best BBQ in the Interstate (Jennifer Chapman)

Henry is a trucker and on a trip he picks up Steve who promises to show him the best barbecue in the interstate.

Now this one was very creepy and likely to give you nightmares next time you go to a barbecue.

Glass Prison (Christina Estabrook)

Sarah and Jack live in a old house. But soon Sarah starts seeing shadows.

A really good story.

They (Vincent Hobbes)

Mike, Brian, Kelly and Taylor are on the way to vacation, but a storm makes them get lost.


Overall I really enjoyed this book as it had fantastic authors and stories.

I give it 4 out of 5.

See you all next time.

Nathiel
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Author 11 books9 followers
April 27, 2011
I feel like my opinion is biased, being a part of the project and all. But when I’m helping put together a project you don’t know what the final product will look like. You work hard, and put together what you think everybody will enjoy. That being said, I could never imagine this book coming to life like it has. There are twelve minds that have come together to give twelve different sides of horror, or the unknown. Some you can really read into and try to find a deeper meaning. Some are just purely fun and exciting. I give it five stars, not because I have a story in this anthology, but because I think it is a creative gathering of horror that covers all parts of the genre.
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450 reviews6 followers
August 2, 2011
This collection of 17 stories run the gamit from a used book store which is hiding an unusual secret to a group of friends stranded in a world full of flesh-eating zombies.

Rather than the usual gorefest found in today's horror novels, these stories read more like episodes of The Twilight Zone with more creepy than gore within. I am not generally a short-story fan, but these were well-written and many left me wanting them to not end.

A great new collection!
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37 reviews
July 12, 2011
Great collection. Noticed this is volume 1. Looking forward to volume 2.
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1,243 reviews82 followers
August 27, 2022
The proliferation of self-published / small-press books is a mixed bag. While it's good that more people can get their writing out for public consumption, there is a definite loss of quality that accompanies the increased ease of exposure. There are multiple factors contributing to the problem, including authors bypassing the use of agents, editors, and other gatekeepers of quality. Horror fiction seems particularly vulnerable to this problem, but that might just be the availabilty bias influencing my perception since I read a fair amount of horror. This book is a good example of the problem. From a high level, there were 2 stories in this collection that I thought stood out from the rest, the remainder ranging from poor, to mediocre, to almost good but seriously flawed.

I liked the first story Room 422 despite it being based on a variation of a fairly common idea in genre fiction, that of the sudden, widespread species jump. This idea is frequently presented as evolution but the mechanism almost always violates the way evolution actually works, and this story is no different. The horror aspect is in the characters' reactions to the newly emerging "superior" not-quite human babies, not with anything horrific about the babies per se.

The other stand-out was The Best BBQ On The Interstate which succeeded for me, despite my having guessed immediately from the title that it was going to be about cannibalism, something that pretty much any fan of horror would guess from the start, and despite several other problems. The BBQ was not on the interstate, but was instead far off the standard roads, being literally at the end of a dirt road. The idea that the victims were marinated in a barrel before having been slaughtered would not work. To have the meat properly marinated, they would need to be killed, slaughtered, and butchered first and then the resulting cuts of meat would need to be marinated, so this story failed on a basic culinary level. Yet I did enjoy the story just enough to make it memorable.

Some examples of problems with this book that irritated me:

From King Of The Jungle: "He felt awful for having to take its life, but he did so only in self-defense." This annoyed me because Odisi was invading the home of the "beast". He took the hunt there so it was not by any measure "self-defense".

From Into The Small Hours: "Yep, just a guy on his way back to his room with some ice. No big ordeal." The common phrase is "no big deal". This phrasing sounds jarring and weird, and not in a good way. A good editor could have fixed this problem. To make it worse, the ending of this story was a lame fade to black. Nothing happened.

From The Dragon Of Delinar is this example of poor writing: "the volume of the belch meant the greater the compliment." I hope it is obvious why that sentence is crap. This story also ended with the whimper of "Our plane took off from Philadelphia this morning. Did we crash?" which was both obvious and not at all horror, and barely even dark, or suspenseful. I'm beginning to think maybe my expectations for this anthology were misguided.

And finally a couple minor quibbles from Glass Prison: Sparrows in a birdbath are described as "gently washing their feathers" to which I noted that a better word might be "vigorously". Having spent many hours watching birds in my yard, gently is never a word I would pick for the way they flutter around in the water. Secondly this sentence: "I'm not the only person in the world who has reoccuring nightmares.". The correct word here to convey what was happening with the character is "recurring". Both are actual words, but they do have distinct meanings, and the author's choice here was incorrect in the context of the story. Once again this book needed better editing.

Enough of my rambling. I know it's difficult to write original and surprising horror. This collection was probably not as bad as I'm making it out to be, but for me, it failed to make much of an impression.
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November 3, 2011
Imagine a place just a little removed from reality, a place where nothing is as it seems, and where anything could be just around the corner. Imagine no more: The Endlands is here.

The birth of a baby in the average hospital becomes distinctly un-average when the woman gives birth to a baby with large, black eyes, bat-like ears and a form of telepathy. Thousands of such births are happening all over the world at the same time, as if God is introducing the newest species of mankind.

A trucker picks up a hitchhiker who takes him to an out-of-the-way place with the best barbeque ever. Waking up after being drugged, the trucker finds himself in a barrel of barbeque sauce. A sign on the wall says that all meat must marinate for 24 hours, before being cooked and served to the public.

A soldier has been taught, nearly from birth, that his homeland has been overrun with demons and vampires, who engage in all kinds of unholy rituals. Most of them have been liquidated, but not all. The soldier is going to a certain house to investigate a report of such activities. He bursts in, and kills the family inside, including children and a baby. Only then does he realize that they were human all along, and the only thing they had going against them was being Jewish.

In a seacoast town, whales suddenly start rising out of the water, like giant zeppelins. At first, it is very cool, attracting the world's media. It becomes un-cool when the whales swoop down on people and feed on them.

Charlie is one of those who is chronically early for everything. He has received his summons from the government, one with severe penalties for non-compliance. It seems as if the world is conspiring to make him late; the traffic is heavier than usual, he has a hard time finding a parking space and he must wait at the front desk to be checked in. Finally, he gets to the right room, and sits there alone, when the gas is turned on.

These are not specifically science fiction, or fantasy, or horror stories, but the sort of stories that could easily be made into episodes of "The Twilight Zone" TV show. In fact, the book is dedicated to Rod Serling. These stories will give the reader a kick in the psyche, and they are very good.
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February 4, 2012
I was fortunate enough to receive a free copy of this book. I had a feeling it was going to be good and after reading, It’s one of the best books I have ever read. Right from the beginning of the first story I was hooked. I was always anticipating what would happen next and it always delivered every time. After I read one I kept thinking each story just keeps on pulling me in. A lot of the stories have a “Twilight Zone” influence, essence and take on them especially Mr. Hobbes’ and being a fan of Twilight Zone I caught on and appreciated all of them to their fullest. One part I thought was interesting was either I knew exactly what was going to happen or I knew nothing of what was going to happen which of course had me satisfyingly shocked most times. Each author brought their own creative genius to their stories and all were well written, had good flow throughout and made you feel for the characters. Shocking, strange and bizarre would be three words to best describe most of the stories in the book. I loved how everything seemed normal and then slowly and gradually a twist or turn for the worst starting happening and it got me at the edge of my seat. The best part of reading the book was the mystery aspect. Reading and wondering oh dear god what’s going to happen and then when you find out the feeling is just as crazy as not knowing. I enjoyed all of the stories in the book and would definitely read it again. It’s very well written, thought out, have spine chilling or creepy gripping plots and are all excellent short stories and tales. I strongly recommend this book to anybody who likes the strange and bizarre or appreciates a good shock. Overall, an amazing and fantastic book.
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August 23, 2011
This is another indie book and I thouroully enjoyed reading it. I love short stories and the book was a good price . it had seventeen stories and it had twelve authors. The book was dedicated to rod sterling of the twilight zone and it was soon obvious why. Each story was a pleasure to read and I really can say I enjoyed all of them although some were much better than others. This isn’t a typical hhorror anthology but a series of stories that are each very different and many that end in that classic twilight zone end. The first story room422 was a good start and the writer did a great job. A night in polidoria I enjoyed and it was next and it was a different sort of vampire story. Other notable stories are thanksgiving about a man trying to film a group of politicians that aren’t human. Finders keepers was another good one about a lost and found that has some really strange objects turned in. like I said all the stories was good even though some seemed much better than others. Still the creator of the project vincent hobbes did a good job of putting this together. There is a great flow to the book and his stories are very good and well written. I felt I could connect to his character in the hour of the time. It was dystopian and I really thought his character was great. Also to read or not to read, which is my favorite story in the book, could have been a novel itself. Overall mr hobbes did a great job gathering excellent writers in a style fvery much with the tone of twilight zone or a Hitchcock stories. I read nightmares and dreamscapes alongside this book and never once tought of putting it down. I would recommend this and good work from all the writers and the publisher who published it.
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84 reviews64 followers
January 31, 2012
It is always refreshing to read something from new authors, or authors I've never read before. This book of short stories was a true delight and exciting to read from beginning to end.
Of course, as with any short stories collections, there are high points and there are low points. This collection has very few low points, although if they were written in a bit greater detail, I think they would've worked themselves into a very good story. The story "Flying Fish" is one among these stories. Written beautifully, but unfortunately, there was just not enough. There to really interest me.
Some of my favorites in this collection were "Room 422", "Glass Prison", "They", and "Thanksgiving". Out of all of the stories, I really would have loved to see more detail and structure to "Room 422". Although not terribly original, this had an interesting concept and plot, and with some more meat to the story, I really think this could have been the best in this collection.
All in all, I thoroughly enjoyed this book, and I look forward to getting my hands on volume 2!
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1,384 reviews33 followers
October 6, 2011
Pitched as an hommage to The Twilight Zone, The Endlands is an anthology of short stories that try to evoke the creepy twist endings the television series was known for.

It's fun.

Creepy hotels, creepy hospitals, creepy sunsets, creepy wildernesses, creepy snowstorms, creepy small towns, creepy whales, creepy jungles, creepy bookstores, creepy clowns, creepy laboratories, creepy appointments, well, maybe they're aren't creepy clowns. I'm not sure how they got in the list ...

None of the stories here are "Time Enough at Last," but that's okay with me. Short stories are not given the attention they once were during the pulp publishing heyday ... electronic publishing is making novel length (and longer, don't people write stand alone books any more?) works the norm.

I hope to see more from this collection writers in the future.
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158 reviews16 followers
December 4, 2011
Vincent Hobbes, you are one helluva talented author. My favorite stories from this collection are Limbo, Population 458 and The Dragon of Delinar. The beginning of The Dragon of Delinar was amazing, I would love to read a full length Fantasy novel from you. Don't even get me started on how phenomenal the ending was, the story was simply perfect! Limbo, Population 458 left me wanting to know more; it's one of those stories that I will simply never forget.

As for the other stories, I didn't enjoy them as much as I did with Vincent Hobbes pieces. Most of them felt incomplete, especially stories such as Flying Fish by David Stubblefield and Finders Keepers by Janelle Garcia. Without Vincent Hobbes' pieces, I would definitely give this collection 3 stars.
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22 reviews1 follower
November 9, 2011
The books has a twilight zone feel to it.

A collection of bizarre short stories.

The up side. There were stories I just didn't want to end. I got so caught up in the characters and the story.

On the down side...I did find some stories that missed the mark.

Overall The Endlands is an interesting read.
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635 reviews13 followers
October 13, 2011
Nicely done anthology, some stories are better than others which is to be expected. My personal favorites were Room 422, Lost and Found, To Read or Not to Read, In the Small Hours, Best BBQ on the Interstate, and They. I was especially impressed with Patrick Greene (Room 422 and In the Small Hours) - looking forward to reading more by him.
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September 25, 2015
I downloaded this for free on Amazon. A great book of short stories. Vincent Hobbes is especially entertaining to read. I felt as though I'd gone back in time to when a book would let me use my imagination and some of the stories creeped me out.
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34 reviews14 followers
November 24, 2011
I enjoy the collection of short stories that this book has to offer.
I usually don't read books from indie authors but now I'm trying to let them in as I would love to read something different for a change, more original. Overall,it is an interesting read.
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March 12, 2011
I have just won this book from First Reads. A good read. Interesting stories. Good variety of stories. Thanks.
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