Henry Green, he of the one-word title. So I automatically set my buzz-alert and dutifully marked each time the word Living appeared. And the various meanings buzzed: living, as in breathing, existing; living, as in a standard of behavior; living, as in employment, making a living.
So I found these notes in an intentionally strange language (more on that later), but a buzzer kept going off the way a spouse's alarm clock will go off even when she isn't there, and you have no clue how to turn the damn thing off. It was:
Pigeons.
Pigeons. Pigeons. Pigeons.
If you think about it, what can be more proletarian than a pigeon? And this is a very proletarian tale, about foundry workers in 1929 Birmingham, England. Yet there are also women in this tale, and they too seek a living, and living. So it is Lily Gates who first sees the pigeons.
Here pigeon quickly turned rising in spirals, grey, when clock in the church tower struck the quarter and away, away the pigeon fell from this noise in a diagonal from where church was built and that man who leant on his spade. Like hatchets they came towards Lily, down at her till when they were close to window they stopped, each clapped his wings then flew away slowly all of them to the left.
That's the way to do foreboding.
So Lily dreams of escape from the dreariness, the lack of living, perhaps to India then, eastward to tea plantations, and dolphins and tropical fish. But no; instead it's a train to Liverpool with Bert Jones, who may not be the right man, and we're told this:
When we think--it might be a flock of pigeons flying in the sky so many things go to make our thought, the number of pigeons, and they don't fly straight. Now one pigeon will fly away from the greater number, now another: sometimes half the flock will follow one, half the other till they join again. So she thought about tombstones and how sculptor made it pay showing so many spoiled ones in his window as it might be. . . . So, as pigeon when she had watched out of kitchen window had flown diagonally down in a wedge and then recovered themselves, as each one had clapped his wings and gone slowly away, so she drew back at him, her mind unbound, and said to him: "Why look it's raining."
Who's the pigeon, you no doubt are wondering. Lily's not done:
Sitting at window-sill of her grandad's window she overlooked Birmingham and the sky over it. This was filled with pigeon flocks. Thousands of pigeon wavered there in the sky, and that baby's raucous cry would come to her now and again. So day after day and slowly her feelings began to waver too and make expeditions away from herself, though like on a string. And disturbed her hands at sewing.
That's not Lily's baby, Lily doesn't know if she wants a baby. That's the neighbors' baby, of Mr. and Mrs. Eames. At book's end they all go for a stroll, Lily pushing the baby in a pram. They are beckoned down an alleyway by a pigeon fancier, what they call it. Another occupation, a way of making a living.* He's trying to sell some pigeons.
When he came back he put grain onto the hood of the pram and one by one pigeon fluttered off the roof onto the hood of this pram. As they did so they fluttered round heads of those people in the yard, who kept heads very still. Then the fancier put grain onto the apron of the pram in front of the baby and one pigeon hopped from hood down onto the apron right in front of the baby. This baby made wave with its arm at the pigeon which waddled out of reach. Mrs. Eames looked at its fierce red eye and said would it peck at her daughter but fancier said not on your life. Soon all were laughing at way this one pigeon, which alone dared to come onto apron, dodged the baby which laughed and crowed and grabbed at it. Soon also they were bored and went all of them into his house. . . . Lily did not go, but stood like fascinated. . . . Suddenly with loud raucous she rushed at the baby, and with clatter of wings all the pigeon lifted and flew away, she rushed at baby to kiss it.
And continuing with avian symbolism, here might just be the best paragraph I read all year:
"You don't want me," she said and she went paler. "Don't want me," she said and she began crying. Large tears came down from eyes down her still face. He turned. He saw these and as the sun comes out from behind clouds then birds whistle again for the sun, so love came out in his eyes (at the victory, at making her cry) and he whispered things senseless as whistling birds. Lastly he said, "and what would I do if you weren't coming!" She clung to him--aching tenderness--and she thought how could he be so cruel.
I hinted above that Green employed an odd structure, what he called his "experiments with the definite article." It was off-putting at first, like baby talk, or the way older movies would have Native Americans speak English in caricature. But Green continued, "I wanted to make that book as taut and spare as possible, to fit the proletarian life I was then leading. So I hit on leaving out the articles. I still think it effective, but would not do it again." I thought it worked well, complementing for me the harsh Birmingham dialect.
In an unusually helpful Introduction (by Adam Thirlwell) to this novel, Green is quoted: To create life in the reader, it will be necessary for the dialogue to mean different things to different readers at one and the same time.
That's the beauty of this book I think, that engagement with the reader, something I found lacking in recent reading of Flaubert. Stated otherwise: this is what I like. And it doesn't matter if I'm wrong.
Not everyone sees the pigeons.
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*Like you, I will be awaiting the inevitable publication of The Pigeon Fancier's Daughter.