The Witch Haven was one of my favorite books of last year, and I have been so desperate for the sequel ever since I read it! Simon and Schuster was kind enough to send me an ARC of The Witch Hunt after I expressed to them my excitement for the release, so thank you so much to S&S for the review copy in exchange for an honest review!
In some ways, I found what I loved so much about book one here in book two. But, I also think that this book could have used a lot more revision before being considered a satisfactory, ready to publish sequel.
What is it that I loved so much about book one? The friendships. The relationship between our heroine, Frances, and her two best friends, Maxine and Lena, was the central love story of The Witch Haven. Was there romance? Of course. But the pure, unconditional love between Frances, Maxine, and Lena, was truly the point of the story. Did I get that in book two? I did. But not to the same degree, which was disappointing. The first half of the book, where the trio reunites and spends the most time together, was perfect. I loved every second of it, the prose itself was lovely and I immediately became just as obsessed with their friendship as I was when reading Witch Haven. But then, it felt like Smith kind of forgot about the dynamic that she herself wrote. Frances started going off and doing things by herself, keeping secrets, and distancing herself from her friends. It didn't make any sense considering Frances has always viewed her friends as people who make her feel less alone, people who are more than willing to shoulder her burdens with her. It was aggravating and a complete 180 from the dynamics established in book one and Frances' characterization.
There was a lot more romance in this book than the first, which really didn't do the book any favors. The main love story of the book should have remained the one between the girls, because that is where all the depth and development is. Frances and Oliver have very little chemistry, and their scenes together felt awkward and forced. The love between them did not come naturally the way it did between Frances and her friends. It felt like Frances was having to convince herself and the readers that her and Oliver belong together. I was and still am team Finn, he was a more interesting character than Oliver and him and Frances had chemistry between them. I liked Oliver, but he felt very two dimensional and superimposed into the story.
I think that where the story went the most wrong, is Finn. His reintroduction into the story was lackluster, book one set up such a good reunion with him and it fell flat. It was uneventful and boring. Then, Smith set up a really good redemption arc for him, and then squashed it in the matter of a few pages. I mean seriously, that ending was a joke. I never disliked Finn, I have read FAR worse "villains" than him that get a complete and satisfactory redemption arc. I think that Smith made a character and a character arc too ambitious for her to handle, because Finn had the most potential out of anyone in this story and it was just completely wasted. Finn deserved better. I understand Frances could never forgive him, but he was not beyond forgiveness of himself and could have easily moved on from the story and Frances and started a new life. Genuinely left a bitter taste in my mouth from all the potential thrown out the window.
And when it comes to the ending of the story, talk about underdeveloped and unsatisfying. The final act occurs in a little over 15 pages. That's it. The plot and Frances herself are so full of plot armor and inconsistent writing I had to roll my eyes. Frances is literally about to sacrifice herself in front of her boyfriend, best friends, and parents, and they all just cry and ask her not to instead of, oh, I don't know, actually doing anything at all to stop it. It doesn't make any sense. These people that love and adore her just stand there while she's about to kill herself? Then, of course, Finn steps in and ruins his own development. I absolutely hated the last few chapters of this book. It wrapped up SO fast and SO perfectly. And honestly, it really caught me off guard. I loved the first half of the book. I was happy with where the story was headed and where the character development was going, but once I hit the 65-70% mark, it was almost like I was reading a completely different story.
So, Frances gets her happy ending with a boy I don't think anyone is actually convinced she's in love with. She also swears to never keep secrets again, but then the book ends with her keeping a HUGE secret from everyone, that Finn is still with her, haunting her, and she actually still spends a lot of time with him. Finn is damned to an eternity of waiting for Frances only to never have her. And Frances' story ends very bittersweet because when she's awake, she's with the supposed love of her life, and when she's asleep, she's with Finn. But she's the only one who will ever know this. Meaning all her character development in this book meant NOTHING because she's still doing the exact thing she swore to never do again?!? Do you see why I am unsatisfied and confused? Is this truly how this story ends? Again, I think that Smith set herself up a story and an arc that ended up being way too much for her to handle.
There are things I loved about this book. The prose is gorgeous, I think Smith writes beautifully. I really enjoyed Frances as a main character, and I still love her relationship with Maxine and Lena, two wonderful side characters that I was so glad to see got to live their best lives at the end of the story. Finn was a great character too, no matter how badly his arc was ruined by Smith. And the book was pretty entertaining and funny at times.
But overall, this book needed a lot of development and suffered from continuity errors. It was a pretty disappointing sequel once the book got into the last half, and I don't think it is going to make any fans of The Witch Haven happy.
The Witch Hunt - 3 stars.