Submission

by Kimberly Zant

To Jimmy, it had been nothing more than a challenge—break the bank's cutting edge computer security just to prove he could. To his mother, Stephanie, it was Armageddon. Fortunately for her, the Thornes—Gavin, Bret, Jared, Jessie, and Luke—weren't interested in advertising the fact that a kid had breached their security. They were ruthlessly determined to collect their pound of flesh, however—hers.

Genres: BDSM, Erotica, Menage, Romance, Reverse Harem, Smut, Erotic Romance

200 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2008

Reviews

[Praj · Rating 1 out of 5]

Is it a vibrating cow? Is it a fog horn? It’s a MILF gone wild!!!!!

[315 · Rating 4 out of 5]

I like the guys in this book more than I did in the book Surrender. Again the guys weren't much more than surface, but I still felt for each one. There wasn't a single throw away male like in the other books. I think the author didn't just have the guys there to increase the number of partners that I felt in the others.

I didn't care for Steph's actions for the game changer and the pure acceptance of the guys reaction to the results. I felt that was forced, did they come looking for her knowing the situation, because it was all just so okay. That wasn't really satisfied to my level of understanding. However these were books written for fun, and not to make the reader feel some deep connection.

[Kathryn · Rating 4 out of 5]

Stephanie has stepped forward to protect her son. Little does she know that she is walking into the arms of 5 men. Similar in style to the previous story (Surrender)Ms. Zant has written a bit more erotic, a bit more hot, and with some toys. Different gorgeous men, larger equipment on some of the men, and extra lovemaking. The author ends this story with a nice slice of "who and what you do in your life, and how you do it isn't anybody's business but your own".

[JenMcJ · Rating 1 out of 5]

Ugh!

[Amanda]

Didn't finish...

[New Dawning Bookfair · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a cute story,(If a story about submission can be cute) about a woman who gets conned into being a submissive for her bosses and their cousins, who are technically her bosses, too. If you ignore the absurdity of the premise and just go along it's kind of a fun read. Maybe a four star. Unfortunately, the publisher let the author down, because the editing flat sucks. Among other things there must have been thirty or forty missing words. I'm not that fussy, but c'mon. I doubt this story was even proof read.
Sorry Kimberly, Three Stars and be glad it isn't two.

[Sassyoh · Rating 4 out of 5]

I thought this was a great read. It was still a little tame for my taste, but passed the time wonderfully.