Ok so this is the second time I have had to type out this review, which is making me feel even less charitable towards it than I was when I started this. This book barely gets three stars. More like a 2.5, maybe less. There are times I wanted to throw it across the room and only the fact that it isn't actually my book stopped me. Arrrrgghhhhh.
My first problem can be found before you even open the book. The blurb states that the marriage of Henrietta Maria and Charles I 'becomes one of the greatest love matches in history'. Yet the ENTIRE PLOT OF THIS BOOK REVOLVES AROUND HER AFFAIR WITH ANOTHER MAN! You CAN'T call it a love match if the only person she professes to love in a romantic manner is not the man she is married to! Maybe this is more a problem with me applying modern values to a time when they simply don't apply. After all you could probably count on one hand the number of Kings who remained faithful to their wives. However, I would assume that most readers would share these views and therefore have a fundamental problem with the plot.
Second is Henrietta herself. She is thoroughly unlikeable. Her relationship with Charles does not come across as love at any point, in fact at one point she compares him and her feelings towards him as parallel to those she feels for one of her dogs. A dog. She compares the King of England to a dog, at a time when it was genuinely believed that Kings were chosen by God and second only to God himself. Seriously? As for Charles himself, he wasn't a particularly pleasant character. Far to easily lead by Buckingham, and then by Henrietta herself. He seemed in parts to be utterly devoted to Henrietta but it seems that it really was a case of out of sight out of mind for as soon as Henrietta leaves for Holland for her protection, their relationship reverts back to its early days and he later takes a mistress.
Harry is very charming and devotes his entire life to Henrietta. He comes across as a genuinely good man (overlooking the Eleanor Villiers incident). Which only serves to raise more issues with Henrietta. She treats Harry abominably, allowing and encouraging him to have feelings for her when she is a married woman and allowing him to sacrifice any chance at having a family of his own whilst he watches her marital bliss and frequent pregnancies from her side. It is cruel. Although the pair do eventually consummate their relationship it is almost twenty years after they first met. And she railed against him for sleeping with Eleanor and played hot and cold with him for twenty years, the poor man.
There is also a problem of characters simply disappearing. Once they have outlived their usefulness to the plot they vanish never to be seen or heard from again. Kate Villiers, complained to Henrietta about Harry's refusal to marry Eleanor and is never heard from again. Lucy Hay, betrays Henrietta by revealing Charles intended coup of parliament and disappears. Mall Stuart nee Villiers, who is in the majority of the book and is a pretty central character, lands in France, is helped up the cliff/hill when they reach shore and vanishes. Gone, nothing, no mention of what happened to her or where she went in the last hundred pages, maybe she was still there and Henrietta simply never bothered to notice her again. I don't know. This simply comes across as laziness from the writer which beings me onto my next point.
The last third of the book seems to be the victim of lazy writing. There are discrepancies in the characters ages which could easily have been fixed during editing but clearly weren't. The point where a writer has given up the will to live and no longer cares about the subject/characters etc. The short chapters for the Civil War years come across more like history lessons at school 'this battle was fought at this place, the parliamentarians are in control of these sections, this is the political situation, negotiations.' There is very little feeling in these parts it is a recital of facts. The ending is incredibly vague. Did Henrietta and Harry finally have a relationship once she left the convent (yes, the ever thoughtful and caring Henrietta upon hearing of the execution of the husband she doesn't love, runs away from the man she professes to love in order to hide in a convent, surrounded by nuns who are forbidden from allowing Harry to come and see her, that's true love)? What happened to her children (hello Wikipedia)? Oh wait, I forgot, Charles is the only one that matters since he became King of England and information on him is so easily accessible. Grrr.
Overall I would not recommend reading this book. I have to believe that there are better books about Henrietta Maria out there and if not, any aspiring historical fiction writers should get on that sharpish. There are just too many problems with this one, at least for me. That being said, the writing style could have been worse and did make it a relatively quick book to read given that it comes in at just under 600 pages and some chapters were up to 80 pages long.
Having typed all this it is tempting to lower my rating even further...