Da** you Harlequinn! No wonder I have moved on from reading all those books from you.
Cheesy romance, cheesy plot, cheesy hero, cheesy heroine, cheesy string of characters.
Lame lame lame.
Max just found out that his ex-girlfriend, Gillian had a child with him. And he forced her to marry him all in one day. All in Chapter 1. Yep, all in Chapter 1.
And this came from a man who said he does not believe in marriage and having kids. Yeah, right! Where is your principal now Max? It seemed to evaporate towards thin air when you saw your ex-girlfriend and your child.
Max, the super alpha male, the one who can't commit, suddenly wants to marry and settle down? Bwahaha.. you must be joking. And then suddenly he talks about life time commitment for his child, he played with the kid, he even took care of the kid. This Max has turned to be a perfect daddy in one night? I think I am going bonkers.
Gillian, Gillian, Gillian. Let me say, I just want to strangle you. Ohhh, your heart flutters when you saw him. You think it is not a good idea to marry Max, but suddenly you feel helpless and you have to marry him because he said so? Hey girl, the author wrote you as head strong and independent. Where have it gone? To the moon?
And not everything is solved by sex. Why both of you are talking to each other like robots are beyond my imagination. Excuse me author, could you please learn about character development and give them both heart and soul before you started penning the story?
I have read a much shorter novel than this, that have much more soul than your book.