I think what threw me most about this book was that the main character, Isobel Petty, was supposed to be Mary Lennox. Her background, family life, and looks were taken word for word from The Secret Garden, as were several memories of Isobel’s that were scattered throughout the book.
And yet Isobel herself was nothing like Mary Lennox, so the comparison was irritating. I couldn’t work out why the author was so blatantly plagiarising The Secret Garden when she could just as easily have written Isobel an original, or even similar, backstory, without stealing direct quotes from The Secret Garden. Or why, if this was meant to be about Mary, she had changed the main character’s name and personality.
This is meant to be the story of Isobel (Mary’s) journey from India to England after her parents died. On the way, she witnesses a murder, and befriends two other children on the boat to solve it.
The murder and how they solve it is not brilliantly done. The children don’t go about it in any way that makes sense (we’re about two thirds of the way through the book before it occurs to any of them to think about motive), and their detective work is very muddled.
Every couple of pages they stop to have a meal, which just got boring. Even the main character mentions several times that they have to keep stopping to have meals, but that was mainly because the author kept jumping forward in time to right before a meal. So the children would talk briefly, then have to have a meal. Then time would jump forward to the next day or the evening, and it would be right before mealtime again. It felt like so much of the book was padded out with the kids going to a meal, and it felt like a repetitive way to try and advance the story.
The characters of the three children were interesting and well-drawn, and I really liked all three of them and how different they were. But the rest of the story felt poorly written. As if the author had written three great characters, but didn’t know how to write a murder mystery, so just had them bumbling round talking about different people on the boat until they stumbled on the answer when the murderer revealed himself.
If you want well-written murder mysteries for kids, I recommend the Murder Most Unladylike series. Unfortunately, The Secret Detectives was not up to scratch.