Setting/World Building: 4/5
Main Character: 4/5
Other Characters: 3/5
Plot: 3/5
Writing: 3/5
Triggering/Issues: 4/5 (Some sexism)
AVERAGED TOTAL:
3/5 out of 4, rounded to 3.
This wasn't a bad book... it just also wasn't a great book? I think it really was a solid 3.5 stars, and it was definitely the last 1/4th of the book that brought it up to that. The beginning really dragged. It was mostly just them walking through the dessert and getting to court. At first, I liked the way the two MCs were pining for one another, because I thought it was going to lead to a good reunion, but no... they reunite, and then they went right back to not talking to each other and keeping secrets like they always do.
I mean, I like a bit of angst in a relationship story, but I hate when it just feels kind of forced, and doesn't make much sense. You both spent like 200 pages longing for each other, missing each other, wanting to fix things. Why on earth when you got back together would you just go back to lying and keeping things back again? It's even a line in the actual book: "All the old distance of last winter lay between them still; nothing had changed since the day he'd sailed away." Yes, and do you know how annoying that is, Calwyn?
To be honest I think besides the slow pace of the beginning, the romance was what knocked it down a bit for me. I understand Darrow is mysterious and all, but he's also kind of a jerk about it. Yet somehow, it always ends up being Calwyn's fault for "not trusting him", even though, you know, never telling her anything doesn't exactly make you worth trusting.
Anyway, it's a good world at least, and I do like the magic, and of course I'm gonna read on to see what happens in the third book. (Although, I saw a spoiler about something that does happen and I know I'm not gonna like it.)