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The Angelaeon Circle #1
Breath of Angel
Melaia, a young priestess, is drawn into an ancient feud between immortal brothers who destroyed the Wisdom Tree with its stairway to heaven, stranding angels in the world of humans. For the Tree and its stairway to be restored, the debt that sparked the ancient feud must be paid, and the payment, Melaia discovers, involves her own destiny.
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Karyn Henley
172 books90 followersI write young adult fiction about embracing uncertainty and discovering who you are. To me, life is story and story is life, and figuring out each is a process of exploring paths and seeing where they lead. In my novels, I explore losing what you thought was your path but finding another way, questioning taken-for-granted beliefs, and holding on when you think you can't. I love nature, travel, and pondering the mystery we call God.
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March 20, 2013
Book Info: Genre: Fantasy/Christian Fiction
Reading Level: Young Adult (15 and up)
Recommended for: Fans of fantasy stories, YA readers, others who enjoy a good, clean fantasy
Trigger Warnings: Murder, violence
My Thoughts: In my original review, I mentioned that this would possibly be appropriate for readers as young as 12, but re-reading it, I'm thinking maybe slightly older. I was remembering the sorts of books I read at age 12, but I was reading at about the level of an 18-year-old when I was 12, so... However, there is no swearing or sex (although there are mild sexual situations) in this book.
I mention in my original review (placed at the bottom) that I was surprised to learn this was considered Christian fantasy. As I reevaluated this book, part of that surprise came clearer: it is apparently perfectly okay in this world to take lovers without being married, even the priestesses. Personally, I think that's just fine, but it sort of surprised me to notice it.
I really like the characters in this book, and their individual mannerisms, such as Pym's interesting oaths, and Livia's stiffness. I also found a comment that really brings home to me the difference between a strong female character and one of the new “spunky” types that annoy me so much. Jarrod says to Meleia, “It's one thing to be determined and steadfast. It's another to be bullheaded and willful.” That cuts right into the crux of the matter, I think. Too often writers make willful and bullheaded characters, intending that they be “spunky” but they come off as just annoying. It's much harder to write a steadfast and determined heroine, but I think Melia is moving that way by the end of the book. I still enjoyed it a lot and wouldn't hesitate to recommend it. I will be reading the rest of the series over the course of the week.
Disclosure: I received a copy of this book from the Amazon Vine program in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own. My original review is below.
Series Information: Breath of Angel is book 1 in the Angelaeon Cycle, published in June 2011.
Book 2: Eye of Sword, published in June 2012 (to be reviewed soon)
Book 3: Throat of Night, published in March 2013 (to be reviewed soon)
Synopsis: The stranger’s cloak had fallen back, and with it, a long, white, blood-stained wing.
When Melaia, a young priestess, witnesses the gruesome murder of a stranger in the temple courtyard, age-old legends recited in song suddenly come to life. She discovers wings on the stranger, and the murderer takes the shape of both a hawk and a man.
Angels. Shape-shifters. Myths and stories—until now.
Melaia finds herself in the middle of a blood feud between two immortal brothers who destroyed the stairway to heaven, stranding angels in the earthly realm. When Melaia becomes a target, she finds refuge with a band of angels attempting to restore the stairway. But the restoration is impossible without settling an ancient debt—the “breath of angel, blood of man,” a payment that involves Melaia’s heart, soul, and destiny.
My Original Review: Posted 6/21/2011:
My Synopsis: Melaia is a young priestess in Navia, in training to take over as high priestess when the current high priestess—Hanamel (Hanni)—steps down. Three younger novice priestesses tend the temple as well—Iona, who is 14; Nuri, who is 12; and Peron, who is six. One evening when Melaia is outside, a thin, disheveled-looking man staggers into the courtyard. As is the custom of the temple, she offers him rest and succor, but before he can get inside he is attacked—viciously—by a hawk, which fatally wounds him. While preparing his body for burial, Melaia discovers he has wings—he is an angel. She is astounded, because she thought angels were just a myth. Soon another man comes into the temple, threatens the priestesses and disturbs the body—saying very odd things indeed. When Hanni and Benasin—a friend and advisor to the Overlord—arrive, just in the nick of time, they are able to drive him off.
But Melaia's adventures are just beginning—she is summoned to the Overlord, who ends up selling Benasin's harp to a kingsman as a gift for the King—and throws Melaia in as an extra bonus. She finds herself on the way to Redcliff, the kingdom's seat. Then things start to get really weird …
My Thoughts: I don't want to outline any more of the plot, so as to avoid spoilers. Suffice it to say that Melaia learns that what she thought she knew was mostly wrong—even about herself. She matures significantly in the course of this, the first book in the series. The second book, Eye of the Sword: A Novel (The Angelaeon Circle), is due out in 2012, so be on the lookout for that.
I was much impressed by the story-telling ability of this author—the story flowed smoothly, transitions were clean and the characters were well-developed and interesting. Apparently this book is classified as Christian fiction, but I'm not sure why—while the religion espoused in this novel is monotheistic, it is not much like Christianity. But this book is clean—no swearing, no sex—and safe for people who are bothered by such in the books they read.
I can recommend this book for anyone from 12 on up—under 12 I think it might be a bit scary, but it depends on the young person him- or herself. It's also a book that older readers can enjoy—an adventure, good vs. evil, right vs. wrong—all that great epic stuff is here, but done in a fairly unique way. Check it out!
Reading Level: Young Adult (15 and up)
Recommended for: Fans of fantasy stories, YA readers, others who enjoy a good, clean fantasy
Trigger Warnings: Murder, violence
My Thoughts: In my original review, I mentioned that this would possibly be appropriate for readers as young as 12, but re-reading it, I'm thinking maybe slightly older. I was remembering the sorts of books I read at age 12, but I was reading at about the level of an 18-year-old when I was 12, so... However, there is no swearing or sex (although there are mild sexual situations) in this book.
I mention in my original review (placed at the bottom) that I was surprised to learn this was considered Christian fantasy. As I reevaluated this book, part of that surprise came clearer: it is apparently perfectly okay in this world to take lovers without being married, even the priestesses. Personally, I think that's just fine, but it sort of surprised me to notice it.
I really like the characters in this book, and their individual mannerisms, such as Pym's interesting oaths, and Livia's stiffness. I also found a comment that really brings home to me the difference between a strong female character and one of the new “spunky” types that annoy me so much. Jarrod says to Meleia, “It's one thing to be determined and steadfast. It's another to be bullheaded and willful.” That cuts right into the crux of the matter, I think. Too often writers make willful and bullheaded characters, intending that they be “spunky” but they come off as just annoying. It's much harder to write a steadfast and determined heroine, but I think Melia is moving that way by the end of the book. I still enjoyed it a lot and wouldn't hesitate to recommend it. I will be reading the rest of the series over the course of the week.
Disclosure: I received a copy of this book from the Amazon Vine program in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own. My original review is below.
Series Information: Breath of Angel is book 1 in the Angelaeon Cycle, published in June 2011.
Book 2: Eye of Sword, published in June 2012 (to be reviewed soon)
Book 3: Throat of Night, published in March 2013 (to be reviewed soon)
Synopsis: The stranger’s cloak had fallen back, and with it, a long, white, blood-stained wing.
When Melaia, a young priestess, witnesses the gruesome murder of a stranger in the temple courtyard, age-old legends recited in song suddenly come to life. She discovers wings on the stranger, and the murderer takes the shape of both a hawk and a man.
Angels. Shape-shifters. Myths and stories—until now.
Melaia finds herself in the middle of a blood feud between two immortal brothers who destroyed the stairway to heaven, stranding angels in the earthly realm. When Melaia becomes a target, she finds refuge with a band of angels attempting to restore the stairway. But the restoration is impossible without settling an ancient debt—the “breath of angel, blood of man,” a payment that involves Melaia’s heart, soul, and destiny.
My Original Review: Posted 6/21/2011:
My Synopsis: Melaia is a young priestess in Navia, in training to take over as high priestess when the current high priestess—Hanamel (Hanni)—steps down. Three younger novice priestesses tend the temple as well—Iona, who is 14; Nuri, who is 12; and Peron, who is six. One evening when Melaia is outside, a thin, disheveled-looking man staggers into the courtyard. As is the custom of the temple, she offers him rest and succor, but before he can get inside he is attacked—viciously—by a hawk, which fatally wounds him. While preparing his body for burial, Melaia discovers he has wings—he is an angel. She is astounded, because she thought angels were just a myth. Soon another man comes into the temple, threatens the priestesses and disturbs the body—saying very odd things indeed. When Hanni and Benasin—a friend and advisor to the Overlord—arrive, just in the nick of time, they are able to drive him off.
But Melaia's adventures are just beginning—she is summoned to the Overlord, who ends up selling Benasin's harp to a kingsman as a gift for the King—and throws Melaia in as an extra bonus. She finds herself on the way to Redcliff, the kingdom's seat. Then things start to get really weird …
My Thoughts: I don't want to outline any more of the plot, so as to avoid spoilers. Suffice it to say that Melaia learns that what she thought she knew was mostly wrong—even about herself. She matures significantly in the course of this, the first book in the series. The second book, Eye of the Sword: A Novel (The Angelaeon Circle), is due out in 2012, so be on the lookout for that.
I was much impressed by the story-telling ability of this author—the story flowed smoothly, transitions were clean and the characters were well-developed and interesting. Apparently this book is classified as Christian fiction, but I'm not sure why—while the religion espoused in this novel is monotheistic, it is not much like Christianity. But this book is clean—no swearing, no sex—and safe for people who are bothered by such in the books they read.
I can recommend this book for anyone from 12 on up—under 12 I think it might be a bit scary, but it depends on the young person him- or herself. It's also a book that older readers can enjoy—an adventure, good vs. evil, right vs. wrong—all that great epic stuff is here, but done in a fairly unique way. Check it out!
April 11, 2011
I'm a huge fan of clean young adult paranormal books! I just love them!! The "clean" part is what makes them hard to find. I'm very much impressed by Karyn Henley's writing. This is only the 2nd book I've read on the subject of angels, but I found it very unique and very much unpredictible. And clean! Even though Breath of Angel is labeled as Christian, it had no Christian elements to it, so it can be enjoyed by everyone. The angels in this story are just as unreal as werewolves and vampires.
I immediately got caught up in the story and couldn't wait to find out what happened. While the story does have an ending, this is a series that will conclude as it continues. There's definitely a cliff hanger, but it's not so bad that you will be mad. :)I don't know when the next one comes out, but I hate that I don't already have it in my hands.
I mentioned earlier that this book is unpredictable. I don't mind predictable stories one bit, and I thought I had this one figured out pretty quick. Nope! I kept getting surprised over and over. So, for those of you who like surprises in your stories, this is a book for you.
There are a lot of characters mentioned throughout the story. If you don't pay close attention, you might get a bit lost with all of them. I don't want to really say anything about the characters, though, because you should definitely figure out for yourself who is "good or bad." If you like young adult paranormal books AT ALL, I highly recommend Breath of Angel!
I immediately got caught up in the story and couldn't wait to find out what happened. While the story does have an ending, this is a series that will conclude as it continues. There's definitely a cliff hanger, but it's not so bad that you will be mad. :)I don't know when the next one comes out, but I hate that I don't already have it in my hands.
I mentioned earlier that this book is unpredictable. I don't mind predictable stories one bit, and I thought I had this one figured out pretty quick. Nope! I kept getting surprised over and over. So, for those of you who like surprises in your stories, this is a book for you.
There are a lot of characters mentioned throughout the story. If you don't pay close attention, you might get a bit lost with all of them. I don't want to really say anything about the characters, though, because you should definitely figure out for yourself who is "good or bad." If you like young adult paranormal books AT ALL, I highly recommend Breath of Angel!
February 24, 2011
I think the base idea of this book is a good one. There were parts I really liked and there were parts I really didn't. I felt like there were huge gaps where I didn't understand why something was happening. I felt like the relationship between Trevin and Melaia was weird, not realistic. I didn't feel any connection between them. There were so many characters that I didn't get a chance to feel connected to any of them, even though I wanted to.
I read a lot of books so I guess in comparison, this book just fell short for me. All the right ideas were there, I think, it was just how it all came together that didn't work for me.
I read a lot of books so I guess in comparison, this book just fell short for me. All the right ideas were there, I think, it was just how it all came together that didn't work for me.
May 29, 2011
The stairway to Heaven is not just a Led Zepplin song anymore. This baby is for real, and someone has closed it down, with no expectation as to when the DO NOT ENTER sign will be taken down. The souls are stuck on Earth with only one direction to go - down.
Melaia is a priestess trained in healing. She never thought witnessing a murder would turn her whole world upside down. Soon after this fateful murder, she is bought for the king of the land. These two evens may seem a far cry from one another, but we will soon learn all parts of Melaia's fate are intertwined. She and her talents could prove useful to bring the king out of the melancholy that has gripped his heart. The kingdom is without a fully functioning king, and there is hope that Malaia will be able to cure him with the help of a special harp.
On her way to the castle she is amazed to learn that the man who in essence "purchased" her, is stirring feelings she never considered before. As a priestess, she is allowed to have lovers and a partner, but she never thought that path was one she cared to travel down. Trevin has her completely baffled and causing knots to twist and turn in her stomach. Should a priestess get so tongue-tied over a man? And a man that she doesn't even know that she can trust! This confusion only adds to the list of mounting worries that are piling on as the seconds tick by.
Oh yea- one thing I forgot to mention so far is the angels. When the stairway was destroyed, angels were trapped here on Earth with no way to return to their rightful place. Over the years many of them have settled down, almost content to live a human-like existence. Dreia, the guardian of the stairway, has perished, and without her, the fate of the gates to Heaven is uncertain. How does Malaia fit into this equation? Why was she pulled from her Temple and into the midst of all the conflict? Malaia is more involved than she could have ever dared to imagine. Her faith, courage, and luck will be tested at every turn. She can only pray that she makes it through alive.
The angel story has become more popular in the last year or so, with all sorts of variation of angels and their abilities, talents, and hierarchies. This book has a very clear cut and defined organization to the angels, but some of the explanations to the angels and why some of them behaved in certain ways was unclear. It was interesting how only some of the angels had wings, while others did not possess one of the most distinguishing features most people would attribute to angels.
The characters were likeable. Some of the relationships came off slightly two-dimensional. There is a love story going on in the background, but I had a hard time feeling the relationship blossom and grow. The passion, romance, and intrigue just seemed to be missing from this relationship. The lead protagonist, Malaia, was a very strong character. I enjoyed her stubbornness and her possession of self-identity. She always knew what she stood for and who exactly she was.
This is the first novel in a series. I did enjoy this story enough to look forward to the continuation. This book has me vested enough in the plot line to want to know what happens to the smallest drak (these creatures will give you chills). I am hoping the characters in the next installment show their true colors and give that extra spice and excitement that seemed a bit lacking in this book.
If you are looking for a good, interesting angel book, pick up a copy of this when it is released This June, you or your special young adult will love the escape into this developing new world. Thank you WaterBrook Press for sending me the advance copy to read and review. I am looking forward to book number two!!
Melaia is a priestess trained in healing. She never thought witnessing a murder would turn her whole world upside down. Soon after this fateful murder, she is bought for the king of the land. These two evens may seem a far cry from one another, but we will soon learn all parts of Melaia's fate are intertwined. She and her talents could prove useful to bring the king out of the melancholy that has gripped his heart. The kingdom is without a fully functioning king, and there is hope that Malaia will be able to cure him with the help of a special harp.
On her way to the castle she is amazed to learn that the man who in essence "purchased" her, is stirring feelings she never considered before. As a priestess, she is allowed to have lovers and a partner, but she never thought that path was one she cared to travel down. Trevin has her completely baffled and causing knots to twist and turn in her stomach. Should a priestess get so tongue-tied over a man? And a man that she doesn't even know that she can trust! This confusion only adds to the list of mounting worries that are piling on as the seconds tick by.
Oh yea- one thing I forgot to mention so far is the angels. When the stairway was destroyed, angels were trapped here on Earth with no way to return to their rightful place. Over the years many of them have settled down, almost content to live a human-like existence. Dreia, the guardian of the stairway, has perished, and without her, the fate of the gates to Heaven is uncertain. How does Malaia fit into this equation? Why was she pulled from her Temple and into the midst of all the conflict? Malaia is more involved than she could have ever dared to imagine. Her faith, courage, and luck will be tested at every turn. She can only pray that she makes it through alive.
The angel story has become more popular in the last year or so, with all sorts of variation of angels and their abilities, talents, and hierarchies. This book has a very clear cut and defined organization to the angels, but some of the explanations to the angels and why some of them behaved in certain ways was unclear. It was interesting how only some of the angels had wings, while others did not possess one of the most distinguishing features most people would attribute to angels.
The characters were likeable. Some of the relationships came off slightly two-dimensional. There is a love story going on in the background, but I had a hard time feeling the relationship blossom and grow. The passion, romance, and intrigue just seemed to be missing from this relationship. The lead protagonist, Malaia, was a very strong character. I enjoyed her stubbornness and her possession of self-identity. She always knew what she stood for and who exactly she was.
This is the first novel in a series. I did enjoy this story enough to look forward to the continuation. This book has me vested enough in the plot line to want to know what happens to the smallest drak (these creatures will give you chills). I am hoping the characters in the next installment show their true colors and give that extra spice and excitement that seemed a bit lacking in this book.
If you are looking for a good, interesting angel book, pick up a copy of this when it is released This June, you or your special young adult will love the escape into this developing new world. Thank you WaterBrook Press for sending me the advance copy to read and review. I am looking forward to book number two!!
June 23, 2017
Also see the review on my blog.
Breath of Angel started off quick and smooth. Not even five pages passed before the murder occurred and not ten before angels were announced. It was very prompt and captured my interest right off the bat.
As I continued, however, I found myself slowly losing interest. Even with such an excellent hook, it couldn't keep my attention for very long. There was nothing wrong with the story itself -- on the contrary, I've always been a fan of both angel and shape-shifting stories -- but it was written in the most drawn out way. I had to really force myself through it.
Before I checked, I had thought that Karyn Henley was a brand new author. This had to be her very first book, so she just needs some practice. But I was in shock after discovering that Henley had already written over 100 titles! Admittedly, many of them are novels for young children, but still. To her credit, I did receive an advanced copy, so the final product may be different from the one I read.
The plot was enjoyable! I love reading Melaia's character. She's very strong and brave, and I always admire a tough female lead. I also love her power to see the soul of a dying body and return it via music. This was very well described, and is actually one of my favorite ideas in the book. The romance was also written subtly and beautifully.
I am giving Breath of Angel three stars because the story was really good. It had a lot of potential, but the author didn't carry it out in a manner that kept my interest. I recommend this for those who love other-world fantasy, but more importantly those who are willing to push through the tough spots.
Breath of Angel started off quick and smooth. Not even five pages passed before the murder occurred and not ten before angels were announced. It was very prompt and captured my interest right off the bat.
As I continued, however, I found myself slowly losing interest. Even with such an excellent hook, it couldn't keep my attention for very long. There was nothing wrong with the story itself -- on the contrary, I've always been a fan of both angel and shape-shifting stories -- but it was written in the most drawn out way. I had to really force myself through it.
Before I checked, I had thought that Karyn Henley was a brand new author. This had to be her very first book, so she just needs some practice. But I was in shock after discovering that Henley had already written over 100 titles! Admittedly, many of them are novels for young children, but still. To her credit, I did receive an advanced copy, so the final product may be different from the one I read.
The plot was enjoyable! I love reading Melaia's character. She's very strong and brave, and I always admire a tough female lead. I also love her power to see the soul of a dying body and return it via music. This was very well described, and is actually one of my favorite ideas in the book. The romance was also written subtly and beautifully.
I am giving Breath of Angel three stars because the story was really good. It had a lot of potential, but the author didn't carry it out in a manner that kept my interest. I recommend this for those who love other-world fantasy, but more importantly those who are willing to push through the tough spots.
May 18, 2011
Breath of Angel by Karyn Henley was an interesting read. This young adult fantasy is about a young priestess, Melaia, who is thrown into a life of angels, malevolents, and shapeshifters. Previously fabled tales become reality, and she is thrust into the destiny she was born to follow.
I liked the story world of this book and was instantly caught up in the the opening scene. There were many characters and I got confused every now and then by the constant movement of the characters throughout the story. I bogged down in the middle of the book, but the story picked up toward the end and once again, I was caught up in the plot.
I think anyone who enjoys fantasy would enjoy this tale. It has adventure and danger, with a hint of romance, and it came to a satisfying conclusion.
I liked the story world of this book and was instantly caught up in the the opening scene. There were many characters and I got confused every now and then by the constant movement of the characters throughout the story. I bogged down in the middle of the book, but the story picked up toward the end and once again, I was caught up in the plot.
I think anyone who enjoys fantasy would enjoy this tale. It has adventure and danger, with a hint of romance, and it came to a satisfying conclusion.
March 12, 2011
Breath Of Angel is the first book in the Angeleon Circle series. I enjoyed reading this book and I look forward to reading the other books that will be coming out in this series.
Once I got stated reading this book it was hard to put it down. I just wanted to keep reading further... There were a couple of area's in the book that I got a little lost on but for the most part I thought it was enjoyable.
* I have participated in an ARC Tour of Breath Of Angel for review threw Around The World ARC Tours Blog. By receiving a loaned copy it in no way obligates me to write a good or bad review. I am an honest reviewer and my reviews are based on my own opinion and written only by me.*
Once I got stated reading this book it was hard to put it down. I just wanted to keep reading further... There were a couple of area's in the book that I got a little lost on but for the most part I thought it was enjoyable.
* I have participated in an ARC Tour of Breath Of Angel for review threw Around The World ARC Tours Blog. By receiving a loaned copy it in no way obligates me to write a good or bad review. I am an honest reviewer and my reviews are based on my own opinion and written only by me.*
April 9, 2012
Melaia, a young priestess, discovers a stranger in the temple courtyard who upon her approach is attacked and killed by an abominably large black feathered bird. When she takes the body into the temple she finds that the stranger isn’t human at all – he is an angel and his bloodied, but once white wings attest. This is when she recognizes that most of what she has been taught about the world wasn’t half of the truth. Angels exist!
Breath of Angel
by Karyn Henley
Waterbrook
June 2011
Melaia is soon on a whirlwind adventure where she finds out the truth of her parents (she thought she was an orphan,) and the truth about angelic forces in the world – forces for good and forces for evil. And most importantly, she finds that she is a part of an ancient prophecy that will restore the stairway to Heaven that was destroyed by a now immortal human jealous of his younger brother. To restore this stairway and allow the angels to travel back to Heaven and to the worlds beyond, she must collect three magical harps within the next year and a half. Of course, this wouldn’t be a Waterbrook title without romance and typically the romantic interest of our heroine is a roguish swordsman who Melaia never really knows if she can trust.
As far as a fantasy romance for young adults goes this books finds itself solidly in the camp of what passes now for popular fiction. In fact, it has so much in common with its secular siblings that one has to wonder – as I did – if the author was even writing to Christians as the imprint suggested. Heres why: this book is chaulk full of unorthodox and heretical ideas about angels.
Open the first page and you find a completely fictional hierarchy of angels, called the “Angelaeon,” which sorts so-called types of angels into castes. Some of the names Christians will be familiar with through their reading of the Bible, like Thrones, Cherubim, Seraphim, Archangels and of course Angels. Others are better known by their English translations, like Wheels (called Ophanim in this book) or are words taken from the New Testament and applied to angels, even when the New Testament may not actually do that, like Kuriotes (from the Greek “to have dominion” used four times in the New Testament, like in Colossians 1:16, but not as a proper name or actual title of an angelic being. For instance, consider Ephesians 2:1 2 Peter 2:10 and Jude 1:8 where the word means “authority” but not in reference to an angel.) All this to say that Henley is massively invested in – and the book’s main focus in on – her version of angels.
Why is it a problem for a Christian book to have angels in it? Just because we take the name of someone from the Bible doesn’t mean we are free – as Christians who believe that scripture is sacred – to change the character of the actual Biblical characters.
Consider this example: A man in a dusty fedora, with a brown leather jacket and a whip on his hip is searching for clues to find a long lost treasure. Along the way he fights Nazis and enemies on horseback trying to stop him. His name? John the Baptist.
That not only doesn’t make any sense it is just plain isn’t John the Baptist! Likelwise, the “angels” in Henley’s book aren’t the angels of the Bible either. They are – to use a fantasy term – better described as elves and magicians who have the names of angels.
Consider how Henley’s angels differ from real angels: Henley’s “angels” routinely have sex and children with humans (in fact several of the main characters are half human- half angels.) Angels in the Bible, for those who understand how to rightly interpret the Word instead of reading their biases into the text, do not have physical bodies, are not human, do not have sex or even have a sex (meaning there are no female or male angels), and certainly don’t get married and live with their human spouses. Henley’s angels also sleep around. One of the main “angels” in the story, Dreia, has children with two different humans and certainly wasn’t married to the first one. Henley’s “angels” can’t travel to and from the presence of God without the use of a magical tree stairway. Furthermore, on several occasions the “angels” refer to this world as one of many worlds (which is much more akin to Mormonism than Christianity!) Henley’s “angels” refer to the stars for information instead of communicating with God.
Bottom line, Henley’s theology is a mess. And as a Christian author it is her responsibility to convey truth without stumbling readers. Consider that this problem of angel focus, called “angel worship” by Paul in Colossians, was a problem from the start of the church: “Do not let anyone who delights in false humility and the worship of angels [disqualify/cause you to turn away from God/lose your salvation] you. Such a person also goes into great detail about what they have seen; they are puffed up with idle notions by their [unspiritual/fleshly] mind.” Readers of this review may be tempted to say that I cannot know Henley’s heart – and they are right! But I can know by her fruit what kind of tree she is. And she is far too focused on angels, real and imagined.
Before writing this review I read her website and personal blog. What did I find but blog post after post about angels, fictional stories about angels, and so on. Where did she get her ideas on angels? Extra Biblical sources like 1 Enoch – a first century B.C. scroll rejected by all Christian orthodox faiths (except for Ethiopian Orthodox church,) that is purported to be from Enoch (great-grandfather of Noah) but was written thousands of years after Enoch “walked with God: and he was not; for God took him,” (Genesis 5:22-29). A quick check of her Angelology page references Zoroastrianism, Kabbalah, Gnosticism and more, which fits into a larger narrative that speaks to how Henley views angels. One that is certainly not orthodox, regardless of whether or not she is writing a Christian book.
This overemphasis on, and unorthodox definition of angels and the binding of Biblical statements about angels with mythology and fantasy is a mistake that Christians ought to know better than to make. I cannot in good faith recommend this book.
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Breath of Angel
by Karyn Henley
Waterbrook
June 2011
Melaia is soon on a whirlwind adventure where she finds out the truth of her parents (she thought she was an orphan,) and the truth about angelic forces in the world – forces for good and forces for evil. And most importantly, she finds that she is a part of an ancient prophecy that will restore the stairway to Heaven that was destroyed by a now immortal human jealous of his younger brother. To restore this stairway and allow the angels to travel back to Heaven and to the worlds beyond, she must collect three magical harps within the next year and a half. Of course, this wouldn’t be a Waterbrook title without romance and typically the romantic interest of our heroine is a roguish swordsman who Melaia never really knows if she can trust.
As far as a fantasy romance for young adults goes this books finds itself solidly in the camp of what passes now for popular fiction. In fact, it has so much in common with its secular siblings that one has to wonder – as I did – if the author was even writing to Christians as the imprint suggested. Heres why: this book is chaulk full of unorthodox and heretical ideas about angels.
Open the first page and you find a completely fictional hierarchy of angels, called the “Angelaeon,” which sorts so-called types of angels into castes. Some of the names Christians will be familiar with through their reading of the Bible, like Thrones, Cherubim, Seraphim, Archangels and of course Angels. Others are better known by their English translations, like Wheels (called Ophanim in this book) or are words taken from the New Testament and applied to angels, even when the New Testament may not actually do that, like Kuriotes (from the Greek “to have dominion” used four times in the New Testament, like in Colossians 1:16, but not as a proper name or actual title of an angelic being. For instance, consider Ephesians 2:1 2 Peter 2:10 and Jude 1:8 where the word means “authority” but not in reference to an angel.) All this to say that Henley is massively invested in – and the book’s main focus in on – her version of angels.
Why is it a problem for a Christian book to have angels in it? Just because we take the name of someone from the Bible doesn’t mean we are free – as Christians who believe that scripture is sacred – to change the character of the actual Biblical characters.
Consider this example: A man in a dusty fedora, with a brown leather jacket and a whip on his hip is searching for clues to find a long lost treasure. Along the way he fights Nazis and enemies on horseback trying to stop him. His name? John the Baptist.
That not only doesn’t make any sense it is just plain isn’t John the Baptist! Likelwise, the “angels” in Henley’s book aren’t the angels of the Bible either. They are – to use a fantasy term – better described as elves and magicians who have the names of angels.
Consider how Henley’s angels differ from real angels: Henley’s “angels” routinely have sex and children with humans (in fact several of the main characters are half human- half angels.) Angels in the Bible, for those who understand how to rightly interpret the Word instead of reading their biases into the text, do not have physical bodies, are not human, do not have sex or even have a sex (meaning there are no female or male angels), and certainly don’t get married and live with their human spouses. Henley’s angels also sleep around. One of the main “angels” in the story, Dreia, has children with two different humans and certainly wasn’t married to the first one. Henley’s “angels” can’t travel to and from the presence of God without the use of a magical tree stairway. Furthermore, on several occasions the “angels” refer to this world as one of many worlds (which is much more akin to Mormonism than Christianity!) Henley’s “angels” refer to the stars for information instead of communicating with God.
Bottom line, Henley’s theology is a mess. And as a Christian author it is her responsibility to convey truth without stumbling readers. Consider that this problem of angel focus, called “angel worship” by Paul in Colossians, was a problem from the start of the church: “Do not let anyone who delights in false humility and the worship of angels [disqualify/cause you to turn away from God/lose your salvation] you. Such a person also goes into great detail about what they have seen; they are puffed up with idle notions by their [unspiritual/fleshly] mind.” Readers of this review may be tempted to say that I cannot know Henley’s heart – and they are right! But I can know by her fruit what kind of tree she is. And she is far too focused on angels, real and imagined.
Before writing this review I read her website and personal blog. What did I find but blog post after post about angels, fictional stories about angels, and so on. Where did she get her ideas on angels? Extra Biblical sources like 1 Enoch – a first century B.C. scroll rejected by all Christian orthodox faiths (except for Ethiopian Orthodox church,) that is purported to be from Enoch (great-grandfather of Noah) but was written thousands of years after Enoch “walked with God: and he was not; for God took him,” (Genesis 5:22-29). A quick check of her Angelology page references Zoroastrianism, Kabbalah, Gnosticism and more, which fits into a larger narrative that speaks to how Henley views angels. One that is certainly not orthodox, regardless of whether or not she is writing a Christian book.
This overemphasis on, and unorthodox definition of angels and the binding of Biblical statements about angels with mythology and fantasy is a mistake that Christians ought to know better than to make. I cannot in good faith recommend this book.
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May 10, 2013
Melaia, a teenage temple priestess, has been raised to believe that angels no longer live in the human realm. Witnessing the murder of an angel--at the hands (talons) of a shapeshifting hawk-man, no less--shakes her perception of her world. When the region's overlord barters her harp-playing for a sack of gold, Melaia is uprooted from her cloistered temple life and sent on a journey to play the harp for the king. Along the way, she'll learn more than she ever wanted to know about "the affairs of angels" and about her own heart.
This is an intriguing fantasy world with some original concepts, especially the draks--birds with human hands and human souls, through whose eyes the villain can spy on whomever he chooses. Can they regain their human forms? Melaia still doesn't know, but by the end, she has a personal interest in finding out.
Not much is resolved in this series opener. The primary antagonist is immortal, after all. He'll be back. Melaia's maybe-sort-of-romance has barely bloomed. She's embraced her destiny but not accomplished her mission yet. The book is actually one setup after another, and the author's knowledge flows beneath that of the characters. She has much more planned for them. And personally, I'm fine with the open-endedness here.
Ms. Henley knows her way around a sentence, and her characters do sound like they belong in another, older world. I'm most interested in Trevin, the young, ethically compromised kingsman who lost a finger as a child and, until he meets Melaia, has lost his hope that the world can be a good place. I'd also like more page time with Jarrod, the snappish but dependable warrior/historian.
Unfortunately, the novel doesn't deliver in some crucial ways. The convoluted mythos was tough to follow, and I've read a fair amount of speculative fiction. The actions of the characters are simple enough, but half the time, the explanation of their motives left me thinking, Oh ... hm ... okay then? rather than, Oh, right, that makes sense. And I have to say it: these immortal angels tend to behave like twenty-something humans.
The main character is probably the least interesting person in this book, yet we are restricted to only Melaia's point of view. On top of that, the point of view is written too shallow for me to connect with her. I hear her thoughts, but I don't think them with her. I'm told how she feels, rather than experiencing her world through her senses. If only this book had been written in deep point of view, I would really have enjoyed it. As it is, the narrative distance leaves me with an emotionally sterile reading experience.
Still, I'm curious as to what will happen next (and how Trevin lost his finger). Hopefully, in the second book, Ms. Henly will deepen her characters' motivations and fully submerge in their point of view. If she does, I'll keep reading.
This is an intriguing fantasy world with some original concepts, especially the draks--birds with human hands and human souls, through whose eyes the villain can spy on whomever he chooses. Can they regain their human forms? Melaia still doesn't know, but by the end, she has a personal interest in finding out.
Not much is resolved in this series opener. The primary antagonist is immortal, after all. He'll be back. Melaia's maybe-sort-of-romance has barely bloomed. She's embraced her destiny but not accomplished her mission yet. The book is actually one setup after another, and the author's knowledge flows beneath that of the characters. She has much more planned for them. And personally, I'm fine with the open-endedness here.
Ms. Henley knows her way around a sentence, and her characters do sound like they belong in another, older world. I'm most interested in Trevin, the young, ethically compromised kingsman who lost a finger as a child and, until he meets Melaia, has lost his hope that the world can be a good place. I'd also like more page time with Jarrod, the snappish but dependable warrior/historian.
Unfortunately, the novel doesn't deliver in some crucial ways. The convoluted mythos was tough to follow, and I've read a fair amount of speculative fiction. The actions of the characters are simple enough, but half the time, the explanation of their motives left me thinking, Oh ... hm ... okay then? rather than, Oh, right, that makes sense. And I have to say it: these immortal angels tend to behave like twenty-something humans.
The main character is probably the least interesting person in this book, yet we are restricted to only Melaia's point of view. On top of that, the point of view is written too shallow for me to connect with her. I hear her thoughts, but I don't think them with her. I'm told how she feels, rather than experiencing her world through her senses. If only this book had been written in deep point of view, I would really have enjoyed it. As it is, the narrative distance leaves me with an emotionally sterile reading experience.
Still, I'm curious as to what will happen next (and how Trevin lost his finger). Hopefully, in the second book, Ms. Henly will deepen her characters' motivations and fully submerge in their point of view. If she does, I'll keep reading.
May 18, 2011
I recently finished reading Karyn Henley's "The Angeleon Circle Book One: Breath of Angel" and I must admit that after having read only the first few chapters I wasn't so sure that I should have kept on reading (at first), however perseverance and an open mind can pay off if you give things a good chance, especially when it comes to this book.
"Breath of Angel" is the story of a young priestess named Melaia who seeks, and needs, to find her destiny in the midst of angels and others. Melaia's story first begins though when an angel is murdered...a hawk man flies into the skies...blood covered feathers...and from there the story continues to deepen and twist and turn over time. I have a feeling that you will be as drawn into the story as I was, if you give it a chance and continue to read on.
The first few chapters seemed to move a bit too quickly for me, and it seemed rather vague on details at times, but after a while I found myself more interested and invested into Melaia and the other characters. I mean I wasn't expecting detailed character origins anything like what Tolkien wrote many many years ago or anything, however, I wish that I had been a little more thoroughly introduced to the characters in the story within the first chapter instead of being thrust into the midst of a courtyard murder and no name faces to contend with.
Although, I do admit that after I had read past chapter 7 I knew that I needed to persevere on and give this book a chance and continue to read this book through...and I was right! This book was really good in the end. It had a great rise and fall to the story.
The story concepts and characters were really well laid out (after a while into the novel after I gave it a chance) and carried throughout the story quite well. I absolutely loved the idea of a story of an ongoing war between angels and malevolents, a blood feud between two brothers and about the stairway to heaven that was destroyed and is destined to be restored that I found within this book. This story was exciting and mysterious...and just how I like my Fantasy novels! I must warn you that you can't help but want to search out every scripture on angels after having read this book, seriously!
Honestly, I am ready to read Book 2 in The Angeleon Circle already, while eating apricots of course!
{{I received this book for FREE from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review.}}
"Breath of Angel" is the story of a young priestess named Melaia who seeks, and needs, to find her destiny in the midst of angels and others. Melaia's story first begins though when an angel is murdered...a hawk man flies into the skies...blood covered feathers...and from there the story continues to deepen and twist and turn over time. I have a feeling that you will be as drawn into the story as I was, if you give it a chance and continue to read on.
The first few chapters seemed to move a bit too quickly for me, and it seemed rather vague on details at times, but after a while I found myself more interested and invested into Melaia and the other characters. I mean I wasn't expecting detailed character origins anything like what Tolkien wrote many many years ago or anything, however, I wish that I had been a little more thoroughly introduced to the characters in the story within the first chapter instead of being thrust into the midst of a courtyard murder and no name faces to contend with.
Although, I do admit that after I had read past chapter 7 I knew that I needed to persevere on and give this book a chance and continue to read this book through...and I was right! This book was really good in the end. It had a great rise and fall to the story.
The story concepts and characters were really well laid out (after a while into the novel after I gave it a chance) and carried throughout the story quite well. I absolutely loved the idea of a story of an ongoing war between angels and malevolents, a blood feud between two brothers and about the stairway to heaven that was destroyed and is destined to be restored that I found within this book. This story was exciting and mysterious...and just how I like my Fantasy novels! I must warn you that you can't help but want to search out every scripture on angels after having read this book, seriously!
Honestly, I am ready to read Book 2 in The Angeleon Circle already, while eating apricots of course!
{{I received this book for FREE from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review.}}
June 17, 2011
3.5 stars
Breath of Angel is a unique story with an enjoyable plot set in a fascinating time. It's a story I was really drawn to not just for it's mythology, but because of it's middle age feel to it and it's paranormal elements with Angels, magic, and Shape-shifters.
The story starts off with action as the main character, a young priestess named Melaia, witnesses the death of an Angel. From there her journey into discovering who he is, and who she really is shrouded in deception, lies and betrayal. Melaia herself is a fabulous character that I enjoyed getting to know her. She's a very strong, courageous heroine who's torn on following her destiny. She also has a fascinating ability to save a person's soul when they're dying by playing an enchanted harp. The harp and Melaia's ability are two of the unique things I liked about the story, as it's all tied into the story's mythology.
The setting is fabulous. I loved the old world feel to it and the vivid description of the land really brought the setting to life. I really liked the cast of strong, well grounded characters, the sweet romance and the constant action through out the story. Even with all the elements I loved about the story I still feel torn with it. There were times when a lot of things were going on that I felt connected with the story and there were times when the plot slowed down a bit I lost a little bit of interest and I felt there were a few things thrown into the story to keep the plot moving that threw me off and were a bit confusing. Over all there are a lot of things I liked about the story. My curiosity with wanting to find answers to some of the character & plot twists had me finishing this book in one sitting. Breath of Angel is a fun, clean cut read that fans of fantasy would enjoy. I'm anxious to see what it's in store for Melaia and the rest of the characters in the next book in the series.
Breath of Angel is a unique story with an enjoyable plot set in a fascinating time. It's a story I was really drawn to not just for it's mythology, but because of it's middle age feel to it and it's paranormal elements with Angels, magic, and Shape-shifters.
The story starts off with action as the main character, a young priestess named Melaia, witnesses the death of an Angel. From there her journey into discovering who he is, and who she really is shrouded in deception, lies and betrayal. Melaia herself is a fabulous character that I enjoyed getting to know her. She's a very strong, courageous heroine who's torn on following her destiny. She also has a fascinating ability to save a person's soul when they're dying by playing an enchanted harp. The harp and Melaia's ability are two of the unique things I liked about the story, as it's all tied into the story's mythology.
The setting is fabulous. I loved the old world feel to it and the vivid description of the land really brought the setting to life. I really liked the cast of strong, well grounded characters, the sweet romance and the constant action through out the story. Even with all the elements I loved about the story I still feel torn with it. There were times when a lot of things were going on that I felt connected with the story and there were times when the plot slowed down a bit I lost a little bit of interest and I felt there were a few things thrown into the story to keep the plot moving that threw me off and were a bit confusing. Over all there are a lot of things I liked about the story. My curiosity with wanting to find answers to some of the character & plot twists had me finishing this book in one sitting. Breath of Angel is a fun, clean cut read that fans of fantasy would enjoy. I'm anxious to see what it's in store for Melaia and the rest of the characters in the next book in the series.
February 21, 2011
Sixteen-year-old Melaia is a young priestess, being trained to someday take over as High Priestess of the temple where she has grown up. There are many stories about angels and immortals, but Melaia has always believed those stories to be nothing more than myths. She never believed angels and immortals really existed, until the day she witnesses a murder in the temple courtyard. The victim is an angel, and his murderer a man who can shift between his human form and the form of a hawk. Against her will, Melaia has been drawn into a war between angels and the evil hawk man, who stole immortality and destroyed the Wisdom Tree and the stairway to heaven.
Before long, Melaia must leave her home for the first time and travel to the city of Redcliff, where the king lives. She is told she is being sent as a priestess, to try and heal the ailing king with the music she plays on a magical harp. Away from home for the first time, Melaia doesn't know who she can trust. She doesn't want to be involved in this war, but she learns it is not just the angels that are at risk, but her homeland too, as the evil hawk man will stop at nothing to gain more power. And it may be her destiny to save them all.
Breath of Angel is very different from the many angel novels published recently. It's high fantasy, rather than the usual urban fantasy, set in an invented world with a rather Medieval culture. High fantasy is a genre I really like and would love to see more of. I thought the author did a good job at describing the fictional world and all the different ranks of angels and immortals. There was a little romance and I would have liked there to be more, but there are going to be two more books so hopefully that will be developed more later on. I recommend this book if you love fantasy novels but are tired of all the modern paranormals and would like to read something different.
Before long, Melaia must leave her home for the first time and travel to the city of Redcliff, where the king lives. She is told she is being sent as a priestess, to try and heal the ailing king with the music she plays on a magical harp. Away from home for the first time, Melaia doesn't know who she can trust. She doesn't want to be involved in this war, but she learns it is not just the angels that are at risk, but her homeland too, as the evil hawk man will stop at nothing to gain more power. And it may be her destiny to save them all.
Breath of Angel is very different from the many angel novels published recently. It's high fantasy, rather than the usual urban fantasy, set in an invented world with a rather Medieval culture. High fantasy is a genre I really like and would love to see more of. I thought the author did a good job at describing the fictional world and all the different ranks of angels and immortals. There was a little romance and I would have liked there to be more, but there are going to be two more books so hopefully that will be developed more later on. I recommend this book if you love fantasy novels but are tired of all the modern paranormals and would like to read something different.
July 4, 2011
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BREATH OF ANGEL was a neat story. While reading int he beginning I wasn't quite sure what I thought about the whole concept of Melaia being a priestess and the introduction of the angels but it ended up flowing together pretty well. I enjoyed the mixture of modern and old, It wasn't really one way or the other but ended up being its own time and it blended the world together well. Melaia grew up wanting to travel but didn't think it would happen until she was pretty much sold to the king and sent off to another area. I felt Karyn did a good job of describing the places in the book so you could picture them as Melaia traveled. One of the things I had issues with was the flow of the plot. I felt kind rushed and scrunched at times and stretched and drawn out at other times like things had to be cut or filled to fit as needed. I also felt there was a lot of different things going on that kinda made some things unbelievable. I would give you examples but there would be some major spoilers in them so I will just leave it at that. I enjoyed the different type of characters. There were angels, Nephilim, shifters, as well as some other creatures no one has ever used before called a Drak which is a bird like creature with human hands, the human hands being from the person that the Drak was made form. Kinda creepy but fits the book well. All together BREATH OF ANGEL really was a neat and different take on how Angels came to be on earth with different myths that kept me interested. I would like to see what comes next in Melaia's life.
BREATH OF ANGEL was a neat story. While reading int he beginning I wasn't quite sure what I thought about the whole concept of Melaia being a priestess and the introduction of the angels but it ended up flowing together pretty well. I enjoyed the mixture of modern and old, It wasn't really one way or the other but ended up being its own time and it blended the world together well. Melaia grew up wanting to travel but didn't think it would happen until she was pretty much sold to the king and sent off to another area. I felt Karyn did a good job of describing the places in the book so you could picture them as Melaia traveled. One of the things I had issues with was the flow of the plot. I felt kind rushed and scrunched at times and stretched and drawn out at other times like things had to be cut or filled to fit as needed. I also felt there was a lot of different things going on that kinda made some things unbelievable. I would give you examples but there would be some major spoilers in them so I will just leave it at that. I enjoyed the different type of characters. There were angels, Nephilim, shifters, as well as some other creatures no one has ever used before called a Drak which is a bird like creature with human hands, the human hands being from the person that the Drak was made form. Kinda creepy but fits the book well. All together BREATH OF ANGEL really was a neat and different take on how Angels came to be on earth with different myths that kept me interested. I would like to see what comes next in Melaia's life.
May 5, 2011
My Review:
Melaia is a 16 year old girl who is training to become High Priestess. Her life is simple and sheltered at the temple with the other young priestess in training. She is satisfied with her role, until the day a stranger arrives at the temple and she witnesses his murder by a hawk. Or so she thought . . . until the hawk turns into a man.
“Breath of Angel” is a coming of age type story mixed with the struggle between good and evil. Melaia is mixed up in the middle, even more than she can possibly imagine. Her High Priestess tells her to stay out of the affairs of Angels, but somehow she finds herself so deeply involved in their struggle with the malevolent angels, that her life is irrevocably changed in a matter of days. She meets both friend and foe along her journey, and begins second guessing her ability to discern which is which.
This book is definitely not a “light read,” but I really enjoyed the concept, characters and struggles from beginning to end. The story left me wanting more – which is always good! Though most of the wording in the book had a nice easy flow, there are some places where I felt I needed to go back and re-read to make sure I could understand what the author was trying to say. For that reason, I give this book a 4 out of 5. I love the characters, the idea of the story line and am anxious to see what happens in the next book.
posted 5/5/11
*I received a copy of this book, free from Blogging for Books, for the purpose of reading and posting a review. I was in no way influenced by the author or publisher ~ all reviews I post are my own and my honest opinion!
Melaia is a 16 year old girl who is training to become High Priestess. Her life is simple and sheltered at the temple with the other young priestess in training. She is satisfied with her role, until the day a stranger arrives at the temple and she witnesses his murder by a hawk. Or so she thought . . . until the hawk turns into a man.
“Breath of Angel” is a coming of age type story mixed with the struggle between good and evil. Melaia is mixed up in the middle, even more than she can possibly imagine. Her High Priestess tells her to stay out of the affairs of Angels, but somehow she finds herself so deeply involved in their struggle with the malevolent angels, that her life is irrevocably changed in a matter of days. She meets both friend and foe along her journey, and begins second guessing her ability to discern which is which.
This book is definitely not a “light read,” but I really enjoyed the concept, characters and struggles from beginning to end. The story left me wanting more – which is always good! Though most of the wording in the book had a nice easy flow, there are some places where I felt I needed to go back and re-read to make sure I could understand what the author was trying to say. For that reason, I give this book a 4 out of 5. I love the characters, the idea of the story line and am anxious to see what happens in the next book.
posted 5/5/11
*I received a copy of this book, free from Blogging for Books, for the purpose of reading and posting a review. I was in no way influenced by the author or publisher ~ all reviews I post are my own and my honest opinion!
April 12, 2011
At sixteen, Melaia is living a happy life, though she has no family except for the other priestesses living in the temple. Then suddenly her world is turned upside down. She is thrown into a world of angels and magic and must try to learn who is an ally and who is an enemy before it’s too late. Throw in a little teen love angst (not enough to take over the book) and you have a decent story.
There are only a few negatives to this book, and they’re minor.
The story is only told from Melaia’s point of view, so we’re kept in the dark about the other character’s motives and feelings. This is pretty typical, and I’m reading several paranormal series right now and they all use the first person narration, so it’s not necessarily a bad thing. I’m just impatient and want to know what’s going on elsewhere.
There are almost too many characters introduced in this first book. I have to wonder if the author was trying to get everyone in at the beginning or if there will be even more people and creatures coming as the series progresses. I’ll keep reading the series, because I did enjoy it, but even right after finishing the book, I couldn’t tell you who half the characters were or which group they belonged to.
I did enjoy the plot, though, and the dialogue and story flowed smoothly. This book has a lot of twists that will keep you guessing until the end. I’m looking forward to the second book.
I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review. All opinions are my own.
There are only a few negatives to this book, and they’re minor.
The story is only told from Melaia’s point of view, so we’re kept in the dark about the other character’s motives and feelings. This is pretty typical, and I’m reading several paranormal series right now and they all use the first person narration, so it’s not necessarily a bad thing. I’m just impatient and want to know what’s going on elsewhere.
There are almost too many characters introduced in this first book. I have to wonder if the author was trying to get everyone in at the beginning or if there will be even more people and creatures coming as the series progresses. I’ll keep reading the series, because I did enjoy it, but even right after finishing the book, I couldn’t tell you who half the characters were or which group they belonged to.
I did enjoy the plot, though, and the dialogue and story flowed smoothly. This book has a lot of twists that will keep you guessing until the end. I’m looking forward to the second book.
I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review. All opinions are my own.
February 25, 2013
I bought this book because I won the 3rd book in the series on the Goodreads First-Reads Giveaways and I usually prefer to read the whole series instead of just part of it. Wasn't sure what to expect and even considered just reading the third book and not buying the first two. I'm so glad that I did purchase the first two to read and so far the story is so much better than I could have ever hoped for. The author does an amazing job bringing the story to life and building up the characters as well as the world they live in.
"Breath of Angel" is the first book in the Angelaeon Circle series and it definitely makes you want to see what happens next. The author effortlessly builds a story about love, trust, friendship, mystery, tragedy, and intrigue. This book had everything. It has a great story line that beautifully blends together the beginnings of a romance, loads of action, adventure, mystery, and even a bit comedy.
I highly recommend this book and I already know everyone who reads it will fall in love with Melaia and her quest to protect her loved ones, find the angelic harps, and to restore the angel's stairway home while completing her mother's work. I know I fell in love with this story and can't wait to start the second book. If it's even half as good as the first one I already know I'm not going to be able to put it down. "Breath of Angel" is a major page turner everyone will enjoy and you'll be dying to know what happens next at the end of the book just like I am.
"Breath of Angel" is the first book in the Angelaeon Circle series and it definitely makes you want to see what happens next. The author effortlessly builds a story about love, trust, friendship, mystery, tragedy, and intrigue. This book had everything. It has a great story line that beautifully blends together the beginnings of a romance, loads of action, adventure, mystery, and even a bit comedy.
I highly recommend this book and I already know everyone who reads it will fall in love with Melaia and her quest to protect her loved ones, find the angelic harps, and to restore the angel's stairway home while completing her mother's work. I know I fell in love with this story and can't wait to start the second book. If it's even half as good as the first one I already know I'm not going to be able to put it down. "Breath of Angel" is a major page turner everyone will enjoy and you'll be dying to know what happens next at the end of the book just like I am.
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June 4, 2011"Fantasy is not meant to answer questions, but to pose them. Fantasy is meant to show us what we’re dealing with and send us on a further journey when we close the book and turn to our real lives." from Karyn Henley's blog. She has succeeded. Breath of Angel is a book you can read if you just want a good story or if you want to delve deeper, there are questions to be answered. Melaia is a young priestess, like many young girls, is in the process of becoming a woman but yet still very much a naive child. Through this book, she finds out she is more than she thinks she is and has a destiny that only she can fulfill, if she chooses to fulfill it. If she chooses to follow her own path, others will pay the price, but the choice is hers. There are many dangers along the way and lots of surprises.
Karyn Henley is a gifted storyteller with an awesome website which does a great job of explaining a lot of the background behind this book, as well as . Anyone reading this book should check out http://www.karynhenleyfiction.com/Kar... for glossary, map and more information about angelology. However, you do not need this information to enjoy the story! You can also find a link on the welcome page that will lead you to where you can download the first chapter.
I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review.
Karyn Henley is a gifted storyteller with an awesome website which does a great job of explaining a lot of the background behind this book, as well as . Anyone reading this book should check out http://www.karynhenleyfiction.com/Kar... for glossary, map and more information about angelology. However, you do not need this information to enjoy the story! You can also find a link on the welcome page that will lead you to where you can download the first chapter.
I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review.
July 31, 2011
3 1/2 stars :) I was sucked into the pages of this book right away and I read it mostly in one evening, I had to go to sleep so I finished it the next day. The characters are a bit stiff at times, but then ever so often you get to glimpse inside and see their true natures. Angels, be them good or bad populate this book. Bad angels seems like a strange concept, but then again Satan was the Son of the Morning and he isn’t exactly sweet and cuddly.
The ending I didn’t really go for and so that is why I rated it only 3 ½ stars. Some things fell into place a bit too easily and neatly for my taste. This is the first in the series and so the unresolved parts will get resolved in the next book or the next after that and I hope less neatly. I think that the main character has been through enough, but with her destiny she has more on her plate and so that maybe the reason for the neat packaged ending in this first book.
Deceiving, guilt, love, murder, death, magic and the like fill these pages and I hope that the next one keeps the pace this one set. I hope all the characters struggle as much as Mellie, a young girl thrown into a mess that was created way before her birth and yet she is the one left to sort through the wreckage left by others to save the world she loves. This has the potential to be a great series and I could even see a movie in its future, if the next books are as interesting and fast moving as this one.
The ending I didn’t really go for and so that is why I rated it only 3 ½ stars. Some things fell into place a bit too easily and neatly for my taste. This is the first in the series and so the unresolved parts will get resolved in the next book or the next after that and I hope less neatly. I think that the main character has been through enough, but with her destiny she has more on her plate and so that maybe the reason for the neat packaged ending in this first book.
Deceiving, guilt, love, murder, death, magic and the like fill these pages and I hope that the next one keeps the pace this one set. I hope all the characters struggle as much as Mellie, a young girl thrown into a mess that was created way before her birth and yet she is the one left to sort through the wreckage left by others to save the world she loves. This has the potential to be a great series and I could even see a movie in its future, if the next books are as interesting and fast moving as this one.
May 16, 2011
Breath of Angel, book 1 of The Angeleon Circle, by Karyn Henley, was almost everything I hoped it would be! In this fantasy novel, Henley does a masterful job of creating her world, her characters, and her storyline. From the first pages, I was hooked.
Melaia, a young priestess discovers the legends she is charged with remembering through song are not simple myth. In fact, the ancient battle between good and evil continues its epic struggle in her land. She is drawn into the middle of the age old battle and learns her role is more than simple priestess. Her destiny is intertwined with the salvation of her world. And she must learn who she can trust, as her heart is pulled between her duty, her destiny, and her desires.
I look forward to the continuation of the tale with bated breath! My only criticism is that I will have to wait for book 2...
I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading fantasy. It was a clean, easy read, suitable for even middle school children. My thanks to Waterbrook Press for offering this book for review. It will be available for sale on June 21, 2011 and can be pre-ordered at amazon.com.
Karina Harris; author of "Second Chance" a Summers Saga Novel
Melaia, a young priestess discovers the legends she is charged with remembering through song are not simple myth. In fact, the ancient battle between good and evil continues its epic struggle in her land. She is drawn into the middle of the age old battle and learns her role is more than simple priestess. Her destiny is intertwined with the salvation of her world. And she must learn who she can trust, as her heart is pulled between her duty, her destiny, and her desires.
I look forward to the continuation of the tale with bated breath! My only criticism is that I will have to wait for book 2...
I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys reading fantasy. It was a clean, easy read, suitable for even middle school children. My thanks to Waterbrook Press for offering this book for review. It will be available for sale on June 21, 2011 and can be pre-ordered at amazon.com.
Karina Harris; author of "Second Chance" a Summers Saga Novel
May 17, 2011
In the end this turned out to be a fairly entertaining book although it took me a couple of tries to get into it. You are immediately tossed into Melaia’s world where myth and fantasy are revealed as reality.
There are a lot of characters, perhaps too many, and a substantial amount of series information packed into a relatively small book, which occasionally left me wondering if I had missed something early on. By the end I felt I was getting a grasp on the world of The Angeleon Circle series and I was intrigued enough to wonder what comes next.
I think this book will appeal to many young adults and adults who enjoy books filled with fantasy and shape shifters. An added plus is that this book’s content was not overly violent or sexually suggestive making it an okay read for advanced younger readers intrigued by the whole shape-shifter theme.
I only gave this 3 stars because of my rough start with it; but now I’m interested in seeing where this series progresses in the next book.
~Disclosure: I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for the purpose of completing this review. The Blogging for Books program does not require positive reviews and as always all opinions expressed in this post are my own.~
There are a lot of characters, perhaps too many, and a substantial amount of series information packed into a relatively small book, which occasionally left me wondering if I had missed something early on. By the end I felt I was getting a grasp on the world of The Angeleon Circle series and I was intrigued enough to wonder what comes next.
I think this book will appeal to many young adults and adults who enjoy books filled with fantasy and shape shifters. An added plus is that this book’s content was not overly violent or sexually suggestive making it an okay read for advanced younger readers intrigued by the whole shape-shifter theme.
I only gave this 3 stars because of my rough start with it; but now I’m interested in seeing where this series progresses in the next book.
~Disclosure: I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for the purpose of completing this review. The Blogging for Books program does not require positive reviews and as always all opinions expressed in this post are my own.~
June 12, 2011
Angels, magic, and myths? Right up my alley! I liked this book. The plot is complicated enough to keep my interest, but not too much that I couldn't follow it. The book unfortunately has that slightly unpolished book newer authors typically have. Nothing horrible, but just the occasional awkward phrase.
More than anything, this book NEEDS a glossary. I think almost any book involving more than 5 main characters could use one, but especially if they all have names like Pym and Paullus and Peron. It could also really use a map. The directions may seem clear in the author's head, but not in mine!
There were also several plot points that needed more explaining. For example, what was with all the Comain's disappearing? Where are they going/why is this included? Why/how/what about the trees echoing Melaia's thoughts? Can they actually speak to her or not? How did Trevan know who Melaia's father was? Or Livia for that matter!
I hope most of these points will be cleared up in future books (this is planned to be part of a trilogy.) But in all, it was an intriguing premise, and I enjoyed it both times I read this!
More than anything, this book NEEDS a glossary. I think almost any book involving more than 5 main characters could use one, but especially if they all have names like Pym and Paullus and Peron. It could also really use a map. The directions may seem clear in the author's head, but not in mine!
There were also several plot points that needed more explaining. For example, what was with all the Comain's disappearing? Where are they going/why is this included? Why/how/what about the trees echoing Melaia's thoughts? Can they actually speak to her or not? How did Trevan know who Melaia's father was? Or Livia for that matter!
I hope most of these points will be cleared up in future books (this is planned to be part of a trilogy.) But in all, it was an intriguing premise, and I enjoyed it both times I read this!
June 22, 2011
After reading this book, I find myself squinting at people’s backs, wondering if they’re hiding a set of angel wings. This is an interesting read, raising all kinds of questions and stirring up lots of ‘what if’ types of thoughts.
What I noticed most about Henley’s writing is that she’s a winner at dialogue. I loved the conversations between characters. Sometimes snappy, other times witty, always delightful.
The character that most intrigued me was Trevin. Trustworthy or not? By the end of the story, I’m still not sure. Good thing there will be several more books to follow and hopefully that will be cleared up. Personally, I’m hoping he turns out to be ‘da man’ who captures Melaiea’s heart.
Make no mistake. This is a fantasy. Not sure how accurate the theology is, but it makes for an action-packed tale. Getting into the story is somewhat tricky, especially since people’s/angel’s names are all foreign. But once you’re hooked, you’re hooked.
I look forward to the second installment of The Angelon Circle.
What I noticed most about Henley’s writing is that she’s a winner at dialogue. I loved the conversations between characters. Sometimes snappy, other times witty, always delightful.
The character that most intrigued me was Trevin. Trustworthy or not? By the end of the story, I’m still not sure. Good thing there will be several more books to follow and hopefully that will be cleared up. Personally, I’m hoping he turns out to be ‘da man’ who captures Melaiea’s heart.
Make no mistake. This is a fantasy. Not sure how accurate the theology is, but it makes for an action-packed tale. Getting into the story is somewhat tricky, especially since people’s/angel’s names are all foreign. But once you’re hooked, you’re hooked.
I look forward to the second installment of The Angelon Circle.
June 20, 2011
A young adult fantasy with a medieval feel, "Breath of Angel", was a fantastic read! Henley constructed a story that contains everything that makes a fantasy work: priestesses, priests, nobility, hawk-people, angels, shape shifters, and spirits. She also developed a story that will please not only young adults, but everyone that loves a good fantasy.
Full of suspense that will keep you wanting to read more, and a cast of characters that are amazing, "Breath of Angel" was certainly one book I didn't want to put down. If it hadn't been for the need of sleep, I'm certain I would have read it through in one sitting. I had to know what was going to happen next.
"Breath of Angel" is the first book of The Angeleon Circle series. I cannot wait for the next one to come out - tomorrow would not be soon enough! This novel has made it to my favorites list and I'm looking forward to reading more of Henley's books. She has written over more than 100 titles, so I'm sure I can find something to keep me busy until then.
Full of suspense that will keep you wanting to read more, and a cast of characters that are amazing, "Breath of Angel" was certainly one book I didn't want to put down. If it hadn't been for the need of sleep, I'm certain I would have read it through in one sitting. I had to know what was going to happen next.
"Breath of Angel" is the first book of The Angeleon Circle series. I cannot wait for the next one to come out - tomorrow would not be soon enough! This novel has made it to my favorites list and I'm looking forward to reading more of Henley's books. She has written over more than 100 titles, so I'm sure I can find something to keep me busy until then.
April 22, 2011
Disclaimer: I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review
Breath of Angel was a great fantasy story and a strong setup for future stories in its world. Melaia, a young priestess, finds herself entangled in the secret struggle among angels, who have remained mostly hidden from the normal populace. She soon is carried off into adventure and ends up with more responsibility in the secret war than she had bargained for.
The mythology and backstory for the setting of this book is quite strong, and I will be curious to see what comes next in the series. I especially liked the eerie depiction of the draks, vulture-like creatures made from human souls that bear their former inhabitants' hands instead of talons.
There were parts of the book that felt a little bit hasty in development of character relationships or the unfolding of events, but it is a minor criticism and didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment of the story. 4 stars!
Breath of Angel was a great fantasy story and a strong setup for future stories in its world. Melaia, a young priestess, finds herself entangled in the secret struggle among angels, who have remained mostly hidden from the normal populace. She soon is carried off into adventure and ends up with more responsibility in the secret war than she had bargained for.
The mythology and backstory for the setting of this book is quite strong, and I will be curious to see what comes next in the series. I especially liked the eerie depiction of the draks, vulture-like creatures made from human souls that bear their former inhabitants' hands instead of talons.
There were parts of the book that felt a little bit hasty in development of character relationships or the unfolding of events, but it is a minor criticism and didn’t take away from my overall enjoyment of the story. 4 stars!
February 25, 2011
BREATH OF ANGEL by Karyn Henley is an interesting inspirational young adult fantasy.It is Book One in the "Angeleon Circle" series.It is written with details and depth. It has myths,angels,magic,shape shifters,murder,destiny,ancient debt,harps,and world trees.A feud between two immortal brothers who has destroyed the stairway to heaven,causing angels to be stranded in the earthly realm."The breath of angel,blood of man",the payment that involves the heart,soul and destiny of Melaia.This is a story that any young adult who enjoys fantasy,myths and destiny will enjoy.It is fast paced and a quick read.I won this book from WaterBrook Press and was under no obligation to review.For more details on this book visit Water Brook Press and Doubleday Religious Publishing Group and My Book Addiction and More.
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April 17, 2011
This book is the first in the Angeleon Circle. This was an incredible book. It was an extremely quick read that was very enjoyable.
I really liked the characters a lot. There were quite a number of characters though. At first, it was a little tough keeping track of who’s who. However, after a little while I picked up each one.
Karyn Henley really did a great job creating a setting. I really felt like I was right there with them. I could picture it all in great detail.
All-in-all, I can’t wait until the next book in the series comes out.
In conjunction with the Wakela's World Disclosure Statement, I received a product in order to enable my review. No other compensation has been received. My statements are an honest account of my experience with the brand. The opinions stated here are mine alone.
I really liked the characters a lot. There were quite a number of characters though. At first, it was a little tough keeping track of who’s who. However, after a little while I picked up each one.
Karyn Henley really did a great job creating a setting. I really felt like I was right there with them. I could picture it all in great detail.
All-in-all, I can’t wait until the next book in the series comes out.
In conjunction with the Wakela's World Disclosure Statement, I received a product in order to enable my review. No other compensation has been received. My statements are an honest account of my experience with the brand. The opinions stated here are mine alone.
June 5, 2011
First off, I thought that this book was really good! I was a little skeptical at first - I was expecting this to be another one of those vampires fantasy books that seem to be flying off the shelves these days. It's nothing like those! This isn't your typical fantasy book. I could not put it down once I got started. I kept wanting to read and read to see what happened next in Melaia's quest to restore The Wisdom Tree! The storyline and the characters were great. I enjoyed watching Melaia coming from her humble beginnings as a priestess to settling in her destiny. I really liked the mythical creatures as well, like the draks, birds with human hands. Not only is it a great story, but it also leaves you with a few things to think about. You learn Melaia's lessons about friendship and trust along with her. Not only does this book entertain, but it inspires as well.
April 2, 2011
Breath of Angel. This is some of the new fantasy that has been coming out lately. We have Angels and Shape-Shifters along side mortal man. I have to say I have a hard time following stories like this. Why? Well I have to get my head wrapped around a whole new dimension in each book. Each author rewrites what the 'rules' are. I mean we all knew vampires could not be in the sun, right? Then along comes Twilight and the rules have changed. If you stick with a series then you have time to adapt to their world. But with each new one comes a new world. Sadly by the time I figured out most of this one the book was half finished. But it is Book One of the Angeleon Circle so I have hope to visit it again. And this time I will not be a guest but a friend.
April 13, 2012
I am not finished with this book yet and I can already tell you it is REALLY good. I got it for Easter with a book mark inside it with my name on it. I may be wrong, but their seems to be a little rommance in this book. It has a map of the places in the book and it really helps.
You people who try to find the bad in EVERY thing you read, try this book out and try to find the GOOD things instead of the bad. I, for one, get really ticked off people take a good book and make it seem horrible. It makes it really hard to figure out weather or not I want to read a book.
The author of this book does a good job of describing. I love the "blood stained wing" part. I can say that the front could be better, but you can't judge a book by it's cover.
You people who try to find the bad in EVERY thing you read, try this book out and try to find the GOOD things instead of the bad. I, for one, get really ticked off people take a good book and make it seem horrible. It makes it really hard to figure out weather or not I want to read a book.
The author of this book does a good job of describing. I love the "blood stained wing" part. I can say that the front could be better, but you can't judge a book by it's cover.
August 31, 2013
A Quickie Review
Though I appreciate Christian fiction, this whole angels/Nephilim trend needs to stop. Not only is a a mere knock-off of the vampire and zombie stories that are popular worldwide, but these books about said otherworldly creatures are terrible. This one in particular is such a mess, I don't even know what to make of it. Shape the culture, people; don't imitate it!
Score: 1/5
Though I appreciate Christian fiction, this whole angels/Nephilim trend needs to stop. Not only is a a mere knock-off of the vampire and zombie stories that are popular worldwide, but these books about said otherworldly creatures are terrible. This one in particular is such a mess, I don't even know what to make of it. Shape the culture, people; don't imitate it!
Score: 1/5
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