I've owned a copy of this book for a while. This is the second time reading a Stephen leather book, unfortunately the first one I read I didn't like it. I'm not holding high hopes for this one but you never know I may be surpised.
It started strong before losing me very quickly.
By page 60 I was getting frustrated at the mundane dribbled being mentioned. There's only so many times I can read "she poured herself a drink...she smoked..she ate.."
Than I started noticing how many times names were being mentioned. It sounds stupid, i know. But does every character in every piece of dialogue really need their full name repeated? As a reader, I don't necessarily need to care about their last name being repeated every spoken time, let alone being called "Mrs ..." or "Mr ..." in almost every paragraph.
Sam has a daughter who i think is supposed to be 15/16, but she sounds like she's the parent. That at times it makes it hard to tell whose who when their in the same scene speaking.
With the amount of characters a reader has to follow, it feels extremely hard to keep track of. Since they use a whole character name, it feels as if I'm following thousands rather than maybe no more than ten, which still feels like an insane amount of characters.
As it got closer to the end it began to weave more roads, as the pages thinned it felt as if itd be impossible to finish. Even as i got to the last three pages the story felt as if it was rushing to end.