The Ghost of Crutchfield Hall

by Mary Downing Hahn

In this chilling Gothic tale from ghost story master Mary Downing Hahn, an orphan girl sent to live in Crutchfield Hall finds the place haunted by the ghost of her cousin Sophia, who is bent on revenge.

Twelve-year-old Florence looks forward to a new life with her great uncle and aunt at Crutchfield Hall, certain it’s bound to be better than the grim orphanage she has lived in since her parents’ death. But Florence doesn't expect the ghost of her cousin Sophia, who haunts the cavernous rooms and dimly lit hallways of Crutchfield and concocts a plan to use Florence to help her achieve her murderous goals. Will Florence be able to convince the others in the household of the imminent danger and stop Sophia before it's too late?



Twelve-year-old Florence looks forward to a new life with her great uncle and aunt at Crutchfield Hall, certain it’s bound to be better than the grim orphanage she has lived in since her parents’ death. But Florence doesn't expect the ghost of her cousin Sophia, who haunts the cavernous rooms and dimly lit hallways of Crutchfield and concocts a plan to use Florence to help her achieve her murderous goals. Will Florence be able to convince the others in the household of the imminent danger and stop Sophia before it's too late?

Genres: Horror, Middle Grade, Ghosts, Paranormal, Mystery, Historical Fiction, Young Adult

153 pages, Paperback

First published September 6, 2010

About the author

I grew up in a small shingled house down at the end of Guilford Road in College Park, Maryland. Our block was loaded with kids my age. We spent hours outdoors playing "Kick the Can" and "Mother, May I" as well as cowboy and outlaw games that usually ended in quarrels about who shot whom. In the summer, we went on day long expeditions into forbidden territory -- the woods on the other side of the train tracks, the creek that wound its way through College Park, and the experimental farm run by the University of Maryland.

In elementary school, I was known as the class artist. I loved to read and draw but I hated writing reports. Requirements such as outlines, perfect penmanship, and following directions killed my interest in putting words on paper. All those facts -- who cared what the principal products of Chile were? To me, writing reports was almost as boring as math.

Despite my dislike of writing, I loved to make up stories. Instead of telling them in words, I told them in pictures. My stories were usually about orphans who ran away and had the sort of exciting adventures I would have enjoyed if my mother hadn't always interfered.

When I was in junior high school, I developed an interest in more complex stories. I wanted to show how people felt, what they thought, what they said. For this, I needed words. Although I wasn't sure I was smart enough, I decided to write and illustrate children's books when I grew up. Consequently, at the age of thirteen, I began my first book. Small Town Life was about a girl named Susan, as tall and skinny and freckle faced as I was. Unlike her shy, self conscious creator, however, Susan was a leader who lived the life I wanted to live -- my ideal self, in other words. Although I never finished Small Town Life, it marked the start of a lifelong interest in writing.

In high school, I kept a diary. In college, I wrote poetry and short stories and dreamed of being published in The New Yorker. Unfortunately, I didn't have the courage or the confidence to send anything there.

By the time my first novel was published, I was 41 years old. That's how long it took me to get serious about writing. The Sara Summer took me a year to write, another year to find a publisher, and yet another year of revisions before Clarion accepted it.

Since Sara appeared in 1979, I've written an average of one book a year. If I have a plot firmly in mind when I begin, the writing goes fairly quickly. More typically, I start with a character or a situation and only a vague idea of what's going to happen. Therefore, I spend a lot of time revising and thinking things out. If I'd paid more attention to the craft of outlining back in elementary school, I might be a faster writer, but, on the other hand, if I knew everything that was going to happen in a story, I might be too bored to write it down. Writing is a journey of discovery. That's what makes it so exciting.

Reviews

[Miranda Reads · Rating 3 out of 5]

Recommended by -- Ivonne Rovira -- thank you so much!!

"Go along then, Florence. ... pray you'll be happy in your new home."

Florence Crutchfield spent the last few years in an orphanage but her great-uncle and great-aunt have found her at last. At first she's excited to have family again...but things quickly sour.

Her aunt detests her because Florence closely resembles her deceased cousin (Sophia), the manor she lives in feels expansive and empty but above all, there's a sinister reason for her unease:

A chill raced up and down my spine, and my scalp prickled. "Is someone there?" I whispered fearfully.
I heard a faint sound like muffled laughter.

The more time Florence spends at Crutchfield Hall, the more she is convinced that someone (or something?) is watching her. Waiting for her. Always out of reach, always teasing her. Taunting her.

When Florence tries to explain to Mrs. Dawson, the cook has fierce words for her.

"Neither your uncle nor your aunt wants to hear stories about children you may or may not have seen in the garden. ... You hear me, miss. Keep that talk to yourself."

But things keep happening, and soon Florence becomes more than afraid. She's terrified.

The longer she stays in Crutchfield Hall, the more convinced she is that Sophia is behind it all - and that Sophia wants something more than life. And what Sophia wants, Sophia gets.

This was a fabulously spooky middle grade book! I don't normally gravitate towards horror, I know (I am SUCH a coward) but I figured I could handle a middle grade book after my goodreads friend recommended it to me.

And I'm really glad she did! I was thoroughly spooked (but not scared) throughout - I liked our main character and thought she was quite fun to watch throughout the story.

The mystery/scariness was definitely stronger at the beginning than the end (though, I'm the kind of person who is more scared of the unknown - and once I start getting details about the creatures/haunts, they become significantly less spooky).

I do feel a bit confused by the limitations of ghosts in this story - I couldn't quite tell what was/wasn't allowed for specters and I remember thinking, 'someone, just tell me the rules already!' but maybe keeping things deliberately vague was supposed to increase the scariness.

I am curious - anyone else get slight Secret Garden vibes - with James bedridden, orphaned Florence exploring the grounds on her own, and the imposing manor home? It wasn't totally a 1:1 remake, but there were definitely hints of it in there for me.

All in all, this was 3 stars for me but if I was younger, I could see it being much scarier (and ranking 4 stars).

[Zoë!]

I ate this shit up when I was 10

[Mohadese · Rating 2 out of 5]

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[☠Kayla☠ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Honestly I wasn't all that into this book. I love Mary Downing Hahn! But this book just wasn't it for me. I'll admit it was a bit creepy and I did enjoy it but it wasn't the best book I've read from her. It definitely had a Victorian feel to it that I absolutely loved but I felt there could have been more to the story. Also the synopsis gives to much away. Going into this story knowing vaguely what it's about is the best way to approach it.

[Zyra · Rating 3 out of 5]

not as dark & scary as i wanted, but definitely a quick read.

[✦BookishlyRichie✦ · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 STARS!!!

This was pretty creepy! I read it along with the audio book and the narrator was perfect, I think that's why I enjoyed it so much. I'd never read anything by Mary Downing Hahn before but have been getting recommended her for years. I'm glad this was first of hers because it was so atmospheric and spooky and took place in the Victorian era, which is one of my favorite eras. My one issue with this book is that I think it could've been a lot darker and a twist would've been perfect, but that's just my opinion. I think I will be reading more of her books very soon, especially if they are THIS creepy. :)

- Richard

[Diana · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 Stars → Spooky Victorian ghost story aimed at middle grade readers. I enjoyed it, though I think the ending could have been better. There were lessons that could have been learned by the adults and kids regarding how the vengeful spirit was treated while living.

[L.E. Fidler · Rating 2 out of 5]

i love mary downing hahn for creating my most favorite childhood book wait till helen comes and was hoping to begin gathering some of her other efforts for fiona's library, but this one is just disappointing.

imagine, if you will, The Secret Garden, Turn of the Screw, Jane Eyre, and the last scene from the movie Carrie and you'll pretty much have this one all taken care of.

there is nothing new under the sun, but there is at least some effort, usually, in masking it. here, we have the story of florence, an orphan, saved from her tedious fate at mrs. medleycoate's school for unfortunate children by a long-lost uncle. she, predictably, comes from wealth, goes to live in a huge estate in the country, with her aunt, her uncle, her pale and sickly cousin who spends all of his time lying in bed, not to be visited by the more actively living, and the ghost of her other cousin sophia.

right.

this novel is not nearly as creepy as it needs to be, nor is it as engaging. flo-rida is about as charming as a pair of white socks. she's precocious, mrs. medleycoate's orphanage seemingly stocked to the brim with most of the time's most potent classics (including Pride and Prejudice and Great Expectations which Flo has read several times each).

i'll say it again...

right.

for someone who reads as much as she claims to, flo lacks imagination and drive, finding herself a willing participant in sophia's evil post-death schemes to kill her brother and live again.

the end just sort of...ends...i can't explain it. the evil aunt moves off to live in another place, away from the painful memories of the sophia who never really existed but on whom she endlessly doted and away from the living child she can't bear to look at in sophia's stead. blech. sophia lingers on, not really showing herself for the last 20 pages, leaving the reader with the vague impression (particularly in the last scene) that she's biding her time, regrouping for her next all out assault on the duo of flo and jamie.

whatever.

i didn't care.

and that's the biggest bummer of them all.

[Jazmin Arroyo · Rating 4 out of 5]

Have you ever wanted to explore a haunted house? Of course I think you know what kind of genre this book is already, mystery and fantasy. Overall i think this is an interisting story.

This book is taken place in an old creepy mansion that is also known as Crutchfield Hall. This book all started of as orphan named Florence transitioning from an orphanage to a mansion. Finding out that her cousin was sick and she couldnt even interact with him was a big dissapoitment for her, she had no idea why he was in that condition now trying to figure out why he was ill she had no idea what she was getting into. It all started off as her hearing little things and the feeling that someones watching her overall thinking its her mind playing tricks on her. She finds out that its not her consience even though their was some obsticales to face like her crabby old aunt and the mysteries that were hidden very deep in the house. After many events that happened including meeting her cousin aka Sophias brother. *SPOILER ALERT* Sophia is The Ghost of Crutchfield Hall. This conflict is "person vs. person' because in this book its character against another character, I think this because Florence is against Sophia. The theme of this book is Florence trying to help liberate the house from Sophia.

A major event that changed Florence was when Sophia told her at the that she hated her brother because she always felt that her brother took all the love and attention, this changed Florence in an emotional way. The setting adds to the story helping it have a more uneasy feeling or scary feeling to the story. Florences motivation to conquer the obsticals she needed to take on was helping her cousin live safely and worry free. These are some imporatnt parts of the story, that you would need to know.

I was facsinated with most of this story because it was very mysterious and creepy just how I wanted it too be thats my opinion because most of this book is about a ghost haunting her house not being able to leave the real world. I wasnt too satisfied even though it was a good book i always thought of the authors stories being great not just okay how this one was. I thought the ending fit the book really well because it made sense how all the problems and it tied up the story realy well. These are some of my opinions on this book.

I rated this book four stars because I was amazed with her story but I think she could've added a little bit more to the plot to make it more detailed and a little bit more interisting. I would recommend this book too any person that likes mystery or scary books or a creepy kind of book. Now that ive explained all this too you will you dare to step a foot in a haunted house?

[Emily Theroux · Rating 5 out of 5]

I thought that this was a good book. I finished it in two days becouse it was so good and I just couldnt stop reading. In this book a girl named Florence is an orphan, and then her uncle takes her in. At her new home she finds out that her cousin Sophia died not to long ago. Then she finds that her cousin James is sick and she cant even go into his room. Then she starts to see Sophia even though she is dead. Sophia tells Florence that she can wear her old dress and she even does her hair, then she tells her to go into James room. When she goes into James room he throws books at her becouse he thinks she is Sophia. He tells her how Sophia died and how now she wants James to pay for it. I loved this book and thought it was very good and suspensful. I wish she had made a better ending but I still liked the book alot. I thought it could have told more about what had happend after the end though. Sometimes I wanted to get to the point in the book but I think that is why I didnt want to stop reading the book. Some people would not like this book becouse it can be creepy or scary, but I still thought it was a good book.

[Amber J (Thereadingwitch) · Rating 3 out of 5]

I try to express only my most honest opinion in a spoiler-free way. Unfortunately, there is still always a risk of slight spoilers despite my best efforts. If you feel something in my review is a spoiler please let me know. Thank you.

It was a quick, fun read. I didn't find it particularly scary though. But I can see how younger children would. I introduced Hahn's books to my 12-year-old niece and she loves them. If I run across more of her books I'll read them, but I won't actively search for them. I think these would have been books I would have loved in my tween days, but I've certainly outgrown them now.

[Ravi · Rating 5 out of 5]

کتابی که توی دوساعت می‌شه تمومش کرد!
وقتی شروعش کردم که به شدت خوابم میومد و گفتم یک فصل می‌خونم و بعد می‌خوابم و یک فصل تبدیل شد به دو فصل و در نهایت کل کتاب تموم شد.
ژانر وحشت ملایمی داشت که برای کسایی مثل من که به شدت از کتابای ترسناک می‌ترسن خوب بود😂
کلیت داستان به شدت من رو یاد باغ اسرار آمیز می‌انداخت، اما به قدری قلم روان و روند داستان سرگرم کننده بود که من رو برای خوندن مشتاق نگه داشت و خسته‌ام نکرد!
فلورانس پس از اینکه هفت سال در یتیم خانه زندگی کرده متوجه می‌شود عموی پدرش آقای کراچفیلد او را به سرپرستی گرفته، فلورانس خوشحال از زندگی شادی که پیش رویش است وارد عمارت کراچفیلد می‌شود اما عمارت رازهای زیادی رو درون خود جا داده!
اونجا با دختری هم سن و سال خود که از لحاظ ظاهری شباهت زیادی با او دارد آشنا می‌شود او دخترعمویش سوفیا است، اما یک چیز او عجیب است، سوفیا مرده!
توی این کتاب با فراز و نشیب‌های زندگی فلورانس در عمارت کراچفیلد با دخترعموی مرده، پسرعموی بیمار، عمه‌ای به شدت بدخلق و تندخو و عمویی به ارواح اعتقادی ندارد، رو‌به‌رو می‌شویم.

[Era ➴ · Rating 4 out of 5]

I read this in grade school because my friend was doing it for a project. I got bored after I finished mine (the good old days when I could actually do my work) and stole her book while she hot-glued some things to her project board.

[Julie · Rating 3 out of 5]

12-year old Florence has lived 7 long years at Miss Medleycoate's Home for Orphan Girls, following the accidental death of her parents. When her great uncle contacts the orphanage saying he wants Florence to come live with him at Crutchfield Hall, she is excited to be starting a new life. She even has a cousin James that she longs to meet. When she arrives at Crutchfield Hall, she learns that her Aunt doesn't want her there, James is ill and never leaves his room, and the Hall is haunted by a vengeful ghost.

For me, this book was very reminiscent of The Secret Garden (or even Jane Eyre to an extent). Poor girl is whisked away to live in a large, gloomy house. She is forbidden to see her invalid relative, but does so anyway. Spooky plot line with a ghost or other secret that she and the invalid relative solve together. I did enjoy this book....but the plot seemed very cliche. However, the book was written for middle grade children. The plot might not be so cliche for a young reader.

I found the Aunt character to be a bit too much of a stereotype. The melodramatic, harsh cruelty she showed the little girl was a bit over the top. Sort of like an evil stepmother sort of character. Very one dimensional. Although in such a short book, I wasn't really expecting much in the way of detailed character development. But a little more dimension in the characterizations would have made the story seem a bit more fleshed out.

Just as the story got to the exciting part, it ended. No fanfare or excitement....it just was done. There was never a climactic moment when the aunt was confronted with her inappropriate behavior. In the end she just sort of went away out of annoyance. The mystery plot line came to a lackluster end as well. Just when you thought there might be a last battle between good and evil, it pretty much fizzled and just ended.

This one was just ok for me. The idea wasn't original, and the presentation was a bit lacking.

My rating: 6/10
Spooky situations, but age appropriate for middle grade children.
Ages 10+

[Suzanne · Rating 2 out of 5]

Another stop on my tour of middle grade horror...

I wasn't a fan of this one. To be blunt, the plot was flat, the storytelling was lazy, and the characters were annoying. I particularly hated the ghost. I realize she was supposed to be a brat, but it was done in such a way that if she haunted me, I'd be irritated instead of scared when she showed up in my room at night.

The author clearly intended for this to be a grand homage to all the classic Gothics and ghost stories and to hammer this point home, she went out of her way to mention specific literature of the time that her protagonist was reading. I'm supposed to be believe that a twelve-year-old girl is reading Vanity Fair, for example. Riiiiight. It was all a bit much.

Still, I'll give it two stars because if I'd read this as a ten-year-old, I might have liked it. I might have found the ghost very scary and even made lists of all the books Hahn mentioned so that I could seek them out later. It's hard to say.

[Denali · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a classic ghost story about a young orphan Florence who struggles to transition from an orphanage in the city, to a large house in the country. The house is owned by her great aunt and uncle. Her uncle is overjoyed to have a new member of the family and treats her with kindness. Her aunt still cries about Sophia's death and is always comparing Florence to Sofia. The last member of the house is a young boy by the name of James. He is Florance's cousin and is very sick. He has never left his room since the "accident". Oops, I made a mistake. James is not the last resident of the house. There is one more. One that wouldn't go to rest. The one and only.... SOPHIA! Is Sophia there to help Florence feel happy or is she there to live again the only way she can.... For someone to take her place! This book is a very entertaining book that will pull you in from start to end. This book does lack vivid descriptions and a shocking ending like most ghost stories. If you ever have time you should read this book.

[Ivonne Rovira · Rating 5 out of 5]

Even though The Ghost of Crutchfield Hall was written for children aged 9 and up, it was so chilling and suspenseful that this middle-aged woman was glad that I "read" it in the Audible.com version in a van full of six people in broad daylight! The terrifying ending made me jump!

Don't be put off by the knowledge that this is kid lit. Adults will thoroughly enjoy Mary Downing Hahn]'s well-crafted 19th century ghost tale. If anything, I think this short novel is just too scary for most elementary-school children or even easily spooked teenagers. (I know it would have been too much for me even at 13 or 14.)

[A · Rating 3 out of 5]

Creepy, but ultimately unspectacular. I don't know if this counts as historical fiction, as there is little in the way of history other than author name-dropping (Dickens, Bunyan, etc.) But I am almost entirely sure that if I were 8 years old and reading this book, I would be sleeping with the lights on.

[Jace · Rating 5 out of 5]

i thought was really good

[D · Rating 5 out of 5]

This truly is a much more traditional Victorian ghost story and I loved it! While it very much carried a Secret Garden element do it with the sickly brother never coming out of his room, that's pretty much where the similarities end.

Florence is stuck in a conundrum, having left her friends at the orphanage to be alone in an old house with a rather doting uncle and an aunt that hates her, not to mention a cousin she never sees and a dead cousin that won't leave her alone. She has no one to complain to and she can't tell her orphanage friends for fear of them thinking she's ungrateful. So what's she to do? Sophia, her tragically dead cousin, won't leave her alone and no one will speak of the horrible cold corners and whispers and laughter. They say it's all in her imagination although they seem very frightened of it.

While the story didn't have me jumping, it certainly had a creep factor to it and for a moment (or maybe even longer), I didn't know how it was going to end. I hate it when I can see the ending coming and with this book, I certainly couldn't. Not really. Hahn leaves puncture wounds in the plot that round out the whole of the story, but there may be a string or two left behind that someone may have forgotten.

Under Sophia's power no one has the ability to control themselves. She controls anyone she wants; it's a power she's always wanted and almost nearly had in life. Sophia's a nasty piece of work and even with the revelation at the end, it's difficult to sympathize with her, which I think is the point. She is a selfish, horrible little girl that was more than willing to sacrifice others for her own means. Aunt is the same way. How she treats Florence is abhorrent and it's hard to NOT sympathize with the poor girl. Years after living in an orphanage and the first place she can call home has someone belittling her every chance they get. How warm!

Even the secondary characters were full of life for how little they showed on the pages. The groundskeeper with his superstitions and the housemaids with their passive yet adamant defense of Florence; it's an awesome cast of characters. Really Aunt and Sophia balance it all out in their wickedness, creating an atmosphere of not only fear but destitution and loneliness. Plus I brewed up some truly horrible images when it was described how the dead Sophia looked. I couldn't help but think of the drawing on one of the Scary Stories books. You know which one I'm talking about. Truly frightening!

If you're looking for a good spook, definitely pick up The Ghost of Crutchfield Hall. It's an old-fashioned ghost story with a modern edge that'll add more fuel to the 'what happens after we die?' fire, for sure.

[Krista the Krazy Kataloguer · Rating 3 out of 5]

I actually wanted to give this one 3 1/2 stars. I enjoyed the setting of the story and the characters more than the plot itself. Florence Crutchfield arrives at her uncle's house from the orphanage where she has lived for the past 7 years to find an aunt who doesn't want her there, a sickly, bed-ridden cousin, and the mean, vengeful ghost of her cousin Sophia, who is out to harm her sickly brother James. I have a few problems with the story. First, once Florence arrives she seems to go for days wearing the same old dress from the orphanage. Now, seeing that she only brought one small bag with her, and being a kindly man, surely the uncle would have arranged for her to have some new clothes soon after her arrival. But I do realize that the incident with Sophia's blue silk dress needed Florence to be wearing her old dress, or to have no nice clothes of her own. Second, if Spratt's little charm above James' door kept Sophia's ghost out of his room, why did it not occur to Florence to ask Spratt to make her one? Or why did it not occur to Spratt to give her one? I also didn't understand why Sophie appeared to Florence as though half mouldering, when by all accounts I've read most ghosts look like and wear clothing that they wore in life. I also didn't care for the ending, which of course implies there may be a sequel, but which didn't quite make sense.

The one character that appealed to me the most was the little servant girl, Nellie. How I wanted to give her time to play, or the have Florence suggest to her uncle that Nellie could join her and James for lessons with the governess. Alas, in Victorian times it would not have been so.

I recommend this book for the wonderful Victorian setting and the engaging characters, though the plot is flawed.

[Richard K. Wilson · Rating 5 out of 5]

As I have said so many times before.....'Can anyone write a ghost story as good as Downing Hahn?'
"The Ghost of Crutchfield Hall" reminds me of the book that all of us kids who grew up reading 'the Secret Garden' in the 60's had WISHED this was the way that story would have been!.

12 year old Florence Crutchfield loses her parents at a young age and is sent to live in the orphanage...as so many children were in the 1800's. When she finds out that she has family; a great Aunt and Uncle who live in a sprawling mansion named after the family, she is sent to live there with them. What she does not know is that her dead cousin Sophia is said to haunt this family estate! Yikes! When Florence arrives at the mansion, she finds out that her younger cousin; James, Sophia's brother is sick and bedridden and allowed no visitors. Well one day Florence meets and discovers that Sophia really is a ghost, and she tells her that she despised her brother while she was alive and blames him for her death. Can ghosts really 'come back with a vengeance' as we have all heard? Would YOU step into and explore a haunted family mansion; and or ANY mansion if you thought it was haunted? I don't know if I would or not.....THAT is why I LOVE this author and all of her works! Now, you must remember that I am a grown man in my 60's and never discovered Downing Hahn till just 3 years ago.....and have now read over 8 of her YA horror thrillers.....and will atttempt to read them ALL!!!

Loved, LOVED this 👻👻👻👻👻 story and I think you will too!
Richard

[Lydia Presley · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a very short (132 pages) ghost story that had quite a few tried-and-true methods of scaring the living bejeebus out of a person like me. Recently I've been diving into the more tame horror novels and all I can say is I'm glad I read this one in the light of day.

The story begins with a setting very similar to The Secret Garden. Girl (Florence) arrives at a creepy large house, taken in by her older Aunt and Uncle and has a sick boy cousin hidden away in his room. The similarities really end there as the boy's dead sister begins to torment poor Florence.

There were a few things that kept me from giving this story a higher rating. Nellie, the maid living in Crutchfield Hall seemed like a carbon copy of the little maid in Shirley Temple's "A Little Princess" movie. I was even putting her voice to the words because her style of speaking was so similar. Also there was quite a bit of name-dropping of classics and it just felt a bit awkward, like the author was trying to make the book a more period novel and the only way she could remind us of the time period was to give us examples of books being read.

Overall though, it's a solid ghost story for a teenager looking for something in the genre to read. It's short and to the point, which doesn't hurt at all either.

[Logan Feltz · Rating 3 out of 5]

The book The Ghost of Crutchfield Hall is a very good book on my part. The main character of this book is a twelve year old boy by the name of Florence that has spent the past seven years of her life in the orphanage. She had then moved to her great uncle's country estate thinking life would be better. She didn't think it was so great when she runs into her cousin (Sophia's) ghost. Sophia was always jealous of her brother and is now trying to influence Florence to kill him.

I would recommend this book to any gender 5th graders and above that like fiction. I would give this book a three star.

[✧ hayley (the sugar bowl) ✧ · Rating 3 out of 5]

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i don’t remember this a whole lot but i remember enjoying this as a kid and the spooky manor setting was a lot of fun. i remember being scared just the right amount 🤭🎀




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[_.eameli · Rating 4 out of 5]

((هیچکس بی عیب و نقص نیست))
فلورانس دختر یتیمی که بعد از مدت های زندگی کردن در یتیمخانه عموش اون رو پیدا میکنه و به سر پرستی میگیره و اون رو میاره در عمارت کراچفیلد در کنار پسر عمویش جیمز باهم زندگی کنند ولی قضیه به همین سادگی تموم نمیشه جیمز خواهری داشته به اسم سوفیا اون در یه سانحه ای جون خودش از دست میده و فوت میکنه،همه میگن که روح اون تو این عمارت سر گردونه.....
اول از همه من واقعا دلم میخواست این عمه این دختره بکشم واقعا خیلی شخصیت رو اعصابی داشت همچنین غیر قابل تحمل بودش:}
داستان اگه یخورده طولانی تر بود قشنگ تر بهتر میشدش اما همین قدر خوب بودش صفحه های پایانی اگه گسترده ترش می‌کردند بهتر میشد در آخر محشر بود به همتون پیشنهاد میکنم بخونید این کتاب رو

[katelyn :)]

just reread one of my fav books as a kid

[Fateme ghavasnezhad · Rating 4 out of 5]

کتاب جریان خوبی داره و هی میخوای بخونی
داستان ساده ای هست ، یعنی اگه انتظار دارین چیزی بهتون اضافه کنه ، خیر نمیکنه! !!
اما سرگرمتون میکنه و‌چی از این بهتر
اخرش هم خوب و دلهره اور تموم شد .

[Kathy]

The Ghost of Cruchfield Hall

Written by: Mary Downing Hahn

Review by: Ashley Kelley

The Ghost of Cruchfield Hall takes place in 1884. It all starts when Florence Cruchfield gets adopted by her uncle and moves to his house called Cruchfield Hall. She was an orphan because her parents died in a boating accident when she was five.When she first got there she was warmly greeted by her sweet uncle. But automaticly hated by her aunt for no reason. Her uncle told her that her cousin James was upstairs but was sick so she was not allowed to see him. She also had a cousin named Sophia but she died at the young age of twelve.She expected her new life to be a dream come true. But it was a nightmare come true. One day when she was out in the garden she heard someone say, “try to find me.” She knew someone was there. She felt a shiver up her spine.She looked all around expecting it to be her housekeeper Nellie but when she got inside with bruises on her face from falling on branches trying to find the voice, Nellie was in there working the whole time. Then when she was wandering through the house she found a box with dolls and dresses. She felt another shiver up her spine and the feeling of her being watched. Then she Said, “is that you Sophia?” She heard a giggle, “it’s a game,” said Sophia. So there was proof. She was alive. She rose from the dead. Then when she was in her bedroom looking at the dress she found in the attic she saw her. Sophia was there. Her hair in a ribbon and her face,drab. She told Florence to wear the dress and meet James. She followed her orders and met james. Sophia could not enter because there was a charm to keep away evil. And she was evil.When Florence first walked in the door without knocking James through books at her face. She looked like Sophia. When he ran out of books he noticed it was not his sister. It was Florence. They talked, they both saw Sophia. And James said “I killed her.” Then forcing Florence to get out she was in shock. Then Sophia reappeared.She forced her to got to the garden. They built a snowman. Sophia got coal and instead of making the snowman have a happy face she made it sad. Then Sophia got so angry she wanted to kill james. So she forced Florence to take off the charm so she could enter James room. She forced James out of the bed and brought him to an attic. She climbed out the window with James. While Florence was behind her trying to stop her. They went on the roof and Sophia said “ I did not deserve to die you did. You made a promise and you never kept it and once I kill you I can live again.” What happened was a year ago Sopia dared james to walk across the roof. James said he would do it if she went first. She walked across and made it. Then James went and got scared so he tried to retreat and run. Sophia tried to catch him but he pushed her away and she fell off the roof and died. “Now lets see who deserved to die.” Sophia walked across fine. James slowly walked step in front of step then ran. Sophia once again tried to catch him and he pushed her and she fell. But she was not over yet. The dead can not re-die. Then Sophia reappeared when Florence was alone. She started crying saying she was never loved and James was always number one and she was invisible. When James and Florence were having tea Florence had a vision of Sophia going into her grave.Then six months passed and there was one big happy family. The aunt that hated Florence moved,James was no longer ill and there was no more haunting. And Florence was the loving sister that James never had.

[Alexis Flores · Rating 4 out of 5]

In this horrifying/scary story, you will find that this book is kind of different than other scary stories that you've maybe read. Even though this book gave me goosebumps at some point, I still liked this book.
This story takes place in the nineteenth century, at Florence's (the main character) great uncle's manor. The setting is important because it helps set the mood of the story.
A twelve year old orphan, Florence boards a horse drawn coach in London, she's looking to start new with her great aunt & uncle at their manor. When she unboards the coach, she approaches "Crutchfield Hall". When the door opens, her aunt wasn't really welcoming to her, but her uncle took her in their big manor. When Florence is finally settled in, she gets to know a lot more about her stubborn aunt. She gets to know about her cousin James but she can't meet him because he's sick. Her aunt loved Sophia who was once cousins with Florence, Sophia was accidentally killed by her brother James when they were playing on the roof because they made a promise to see if they could jump from one chimney to the other. James survived, Sophia slipped and fell. She didn't survive after that. So Sophia comes and haunts their manor, until she gets what she wants. She wanted James to die and her to live. She didn't get what she wanted, so she went back in her grave peacefully. The ending of the book was the happy part because Florence's stubborn aunt who was always rude to her, left to go live with her cousin who is mean as her. Florence, James, and their uncle lived happily together. And Sophia never returned again. This story is person vs. person because Florence has to protect James from Sophia.
The main character's problem was Sophia because Sophia kept haunting Florence. I can relate to Sophia because she hates her brother James and sometimes I do like my brother sometimes I don't.
I thought the ending of the book was sad but scary at the same time because Florence and James went to Sophia's grave, half a year later after they saw her. When they were sitting by her grave, they saw the grass next to the tombstone move. I understood why Sophia was haunting Florence because Sophia needed to get to James. She couldn't because Florence was protecting him all this time
In conclusion, I give this book 4 out of 5 stars because this book was a good scary story but it wasn't my favorite. I recommend this book to whoever likes scary ghost stories. Mary Downing Hahn incorporated writers such as Edgar Allan Poe and Charles Dickens while creating a story of her own.