Before I start, I want to let everyone know that I did not finish this book.
I wanted so badly to read this book and finish it but I just could not.
Pros:
Great concept!
Good location, close to my home town :)
Good main character, I really enjoyed Jordan's strength and brains!
Cons:
Not enough character or location development. I did not always know where I was and had no idea what each place looked like. As I stated above some locations were close to my home town, but I was still just guessing about what I was seeing. Same goes for characters. I didn't know how people looked. I like to get into great detail, down to eye shape and color, silky or curly hair, so I can really see a character and this was missing for me. I was often confused about who I was reading at any time because it was just names but no strong descriptions to make them stand out.
I thought some of the transitions were too fast and unpredictable. I didn't feel like that section was really over before I was plunged into a new section.
I felt like the characters were emotionless. Lots of people were dying and although they said they were upset or unhappy, no one reacted in description. Pounded fists on the table when they found out another one of their breast implant patients had died or rubbing a head in frustration.
I am an Education and Business major so the medical jargon left me very confused. I tried to keep up but it was over my head.
I noticed there were details about characters that were insignificant, like a waiter, but not about the main characters. I could see that waiter crystal clear, but I had no idea what the main characters best friend really looked like. Also, speaking of this waiter, his name was given, but he didn't even have dialogue or a significant part in the story.
Lastly, there were some unclear time shifts. I couldn't tell how much time had elapsed from the hours to the days.
All and all, I really wanted to get into this story. REALLY. I think the story is very interesting and the characters could be great. But it was very hard to read.