Don't get me started on the title. How corny can you get?
Although the bluntness of the title kinda lays out the scene for the book. The only reason I was interested in this is that the main character is a gamer. Don't have that very often, so I went and read.
Well, you gotta hand it to Lesley Davis that she manages to push many of my buttons ;) It's the first time I've even heard of her, but she has written quite a few books.
The story is so, so, so predictable, even little things you just know will pop up again. Empty rooms in the house? Symbolize her empty life that's just waiting to get meaning because of the woman she meets (gorgeous, of course) who can then move into the house to make it a home. You get my drift. The kid who jump starts the story then conveniently disappears when her job in the story is done, etc. So yeah, I knew it was a romance when I picked it up, but I didn't know the characters were so flat (troubled butch, anyone?). I did like the secondary characters Monica and Elton, and the kid.
Beyond the story though, the writing managed to annoy me greatly. Odd choices for tenses and prepositions here and there, no clear voice for the characters (odd phrases, sometimes sounded very posh), the same goes for the narrative, sometimes I had the feeling the author had the thesaurus too handy when writing dialog and using very casual language in the narrative. The bio at the end of the book then says the author is British. Hmm... that threw me for a loop, maybe some of the odd choices are British English, though I don't think so, and with the American English spelling that's really neither here nor there. It also takes place in the US, an imaginary town, I believe, so the characters should speak AE, as nothing else was indicated. Having AE dialog and BE narrative would just be weird, so I'm not sure that's the reason for the choices that were made. She also managed to put in my pet peeves: using wait on instead of wait for, I know that's spreading, but it bugs me and I was not aware that it is BE as well. Using females when referring to women... argh. I'm also not quite sure she meant to say 'feminine company'. Also, the author used a lot of internal monologues to convey the inner life of both the main characters. I'm not sure if that's just lazy writing or bad writing when those monologues are the only instrument you have to let me look into your characters.
I did enjoy the beginning that was gaming heavy and the little kid was adorable, but overall the characters are flat and clichéd, and the story is too fabricated and artifical.