Basic Plot: Thanksgiving break commences, Gaia spends more time with Mary, Heather finally knows Sam has fallen for Gaia, A sideplot about a plastic surgeon tracking down Gaia goes nowhere, Our heroine is rushed to the hospital after going unconscious in Sam's dorm, and Gaia is left to wonder if the night with Sam really happened.
Despite that plot description I gave you, nothing much happens in this book. In fact I'm willing to say that even Twisted had more events happen in it disregarding how facepalm-inducing they were. This book was so lackluster and boring I was reminded why I initially stopped reading this series in the first place.
1) I feel like the plastic surgeon plot was put in just to make the book longer. If you took out his subplot, the book's content wouldn't change at all. He doesn't even succeed in catching Gaia. His character is hardly built upon and all that's left is a just page lengthener of events that don't add up to the rest.
2) Why would Ella think putting in just ONE tracking device in Gaia's jacket is going to be a 100% no-fail scheme? I can get that the devices can be expensive (especially when it was revealed to be a bomb), but Ella could have went the extra effort in planting multiple trackers in all of Gaia's jackets. She only nearly succeeded because Gaia stuck to just one jacket instead of alternating between 2-4 different ones.
3) Gaia claims in her opening narrative that "Somebody tries to kill me at least once a week." At least one event (David) was because of her own stupidity and wanting to track down and eliminate The Gentleman. If Gaia hadn't ran into David, she could have slipped under his blonde radar among dozens of other potential victims he'd kill instead.
4) I love how Gaia still claims she went on her "real first date of my life" without bothering to wonder why some random dweeb she crashed into in the school hallway asked her out or hang out with David more before the actual date. I already mentioned this in my previous review but it still irks me.
5) Kiss yet again brings up the sexist statements against men by claiming they're all sex-obsessed. Although this one time, it's justified since the chapter was in Ella's POV.
6) I'm starting to wonder why George and Ella are married in the first place if she's such a vapid woman with barely any likeable traits.
7) Why does Ella resort to attempting to shoot Gaia after she gets one punch to the face? She was kind of asking for it after verbally abusing her beforehand.
8) The story claims Gaia punched Ella out cold, yet in the actual chapter it happens in, Ella gets up shortly after getting punched. Possible annoying retcon?
9) Loki still attempts to be anonymous yet keep in mind trackable email communication is likely still going to keep taking place between him and Ella.
10) Speaking of Loki, how's he managing to see all the events that happened (For example, when Ella was placing the tracking device in Gaia's coat pocket)? Are there hidden cameras in the house or something? This makes no freaking sense in the slightest.
11) In the parade subplot, one of the balloons are mentioned to be a "Random Rugrat" without ever saying which character from Rugrats it is at least two times. This could have been a copyright issue but then how did the book get permission to mention Spiderman, Snoopy, and Clifford all on the same page? To me it just comes off as the author lacking basic knowledge about Rugrats, a classic and well-loved Nicktoon.
12) Francine Pascal doesn't also seem to think pumpkin pie has it's fans even though there are plenty of people that enjoy it.
13) Why would Mary randomly send M&Ms in with her letter to Gaia? It stupid enough, and not to mention the chocolate has a chance of melting if it’s hot enough in the package or mail van, rendering the letter unreadable.
14) According to Ella, Gaia's been to the hospital twice so far in the series. Where was Ella the first time Gaia ended up there?
What a boring read, but I wonder if the next book will be 1% better…