I am having a love/hate relationship with this book. I'm on page 227 of 304 and I'm not sure if I want to finish it.
On the plus side:
#1 I've enjoyed the characters and their relationships to one another. I only wish that sort of thing had been explored more deeply.
#2 I also really liked the premise of the story.
#3 There were several times, after particular scenes, when I thought, "I love this book!"
On the minus side:
#1 In the previous book, point of view went back and forth between the two main characters with chapter headings indicating which one I was reading. In this book the point of view swings back and forth between Anna and David, but without any clear distinction between the two.
#2 Between Parts 1 & 2 of the book, there is a chronology of historical events. This seems like something which could be placed at the end of the book, not smack dab in the middle! It was very distracting to go from reading prose, to reading a list of events, then back to prose.
#3 I had a really difficult time accepting that a 14 year old (David) and a 17 year old (Anna), who lived in modern times in America, knew the language of middle Welsh and Welsh history so well. Well enough to not only fit in, but to advise others as to upcoming events. Sure, their mother was highly educated in those things, and with good cause, but still…these are American kids, the majority of whom probably find anything concerning history to be dry, boring and totally unrelated to anything going on in their present day lives. Most care more about the latest technology than about how people lived in the thirteenth century.
#4 The fourteen year old boy sure picked up sword-fighting easily…enough to go into battle. He also knew battle strategy enough to plan and then lead one of the flanks of military men. On top of that, by the time he is sixteen he's settling disputes and other such things. I don't doubt young noblemen of that time did those things, but it seemed a stretch for a young boy raised in modern day America. Especially the ability to strategize when he had not been raised around warfare. The majority of fourteen, fifteen and sixteen year olds of our times are certainly not prepared, nor do they have the maturity to take on those kinds of responsibilities and that type of decision making.
#5 The possibility of Math and Anna developing a romantic relationship was completely skipped over when the author jumped ahead 18 months!! By that time the two of them were already married! I felt cheated out of watching that relationship develop.
#6 Language…Again, this 14 year old boy (he's 16 by the time I stopped reading) speaks often in the formal speech of an adult living in thirteen century Wales. I'm sorry, but he seems to have fit in way too well from the very start. I know, I know, it was the same in the Chronicles of Narnia books/movies. Young boys and girls with swords and bows, ruling a kingdom. But that was fantasy and this series, in spite of the time-travel element, is based on actual historical events/alternate events and the real times in which people lived. It is not true fantasy with an entire created world as was the majority of the Narnia series.
#7 How the heck does this time travel thing work? Twice people landed back in time due to a car accident, one other time it was due to…we don't know since events took place "off camera" so to speak, other than the fact that Meg was flying around in an airplane and noticed the terrain was no longer of modern times, but rather the once familiar landscape of the thirteenth century.
And what causes people to pop back to their time period of origin? Why these people? Why this particular time period? Perhaps some of this will be answered in one of the other books in the series.
Perhaps I am being too critical here. The story has a wonderful premise and I would like to know more…but I'd like more character development and less of the historical information dump. I'd also like to have more of the scenes where we're really right in the moment with the characters! There are a few of those scenes and they are so good, but much of the time I'm being told a story instead of being involved in it.