Broken

by Keith McDougall

Holly loves her mother, then her brother...
A tale of incest and family.

This story contains incestuous sexual acts and coercion. All sexual acts are carried out between adults 18 years and over. Do not read if any of the subject matter offends.

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First published January 1, 2011

Reviews

[Eric · Rating 1 out of 5]

the basic story arc i expected - its a girl who was abducted and raped, and consequently suffers from stockholm syndrome. however the book pretty much reads as softcore porn with 75% of it taking about sexual acts. its got racist touches (you know how those black folks love asses) and turns over the same wording multiple times. some paragraphs seem forced, and honestly others are nearly duplicates of the previous one, just worded slightly differently. The other bothersome part is the fact that the author cant seem to find a different word for certain things. well... for a lot of things. Further agitating is the ending, which is predictable at best (really, the whole thing becomes predictable 5 pages in... or rather once you realize you should be watching porn instead of this).

weak showing. completely unimpressed... but thankfully the book is so damn short that i hardly wasted any time on it. but as i already wasted my time - dont waste yours.