Romantic drama with horror elements, loosely wrapped in mystery & a bit of paranormal
As a crime fiction reader, I chose this book expecting a complex serial killer mystery, with supernatural horror. Or at the least, heavy paranormal elements. I liked “The Deep, Deep Snow” narrated by January LaVoy, who also narrated this book. Ms. LaVoy, voice-actor extraordinaire, can improve even a badly written hash of a book, and she makes word walls sound interesting.
I don’t mind flashbacks of ten, twenty or more years, but I prefer a primary storyline in current time. This book is set in 1984 in a mostly White, one restaurant/bar small town with a church and sheriff station. It also has all the prejudices of the early 1980s, plus holdover issues from the 1970s. Emotional triggers abound: Rapes; sexism & misogyny; workplace harassment; verbal, sexual, & physical abuse of women. Vicious acts of homophobia. Gory, blood-drenched murder scenes.
After a few chapters in, I knew the domestic storyline could not have a HEA ending. IMHO, the book’s core is romance—including the protagonist Rebecca Colder’s ideals of love, overwhelming need of love, and belief in paranormal events to do with love. Even as she makes bad choices and does horrible deeds, she beseeches her god to help her. And her baby. As the storyline advances, events & actions became more predictable. I chose the ultimate culprit and predicted much of the extended denouement.
Unbelievable events:
1. A women suffers 36 hours of three men raping and beating her. She doesn’t seem to have psychological issues
2. Female characters make bad choices repeatedly. A wife and mother makes stupid decisions about her relationship w her husband.
3. Female characters turn personal drama into telenovela melodrama.
4. Rebecca and a sheriff fall in insta-love and have insta-sex. She has almost-insta-pregnancy.
5. Rebecca knows her sheriff partner has two parents w early onset Alzheimer’s. He thinks he will too. Rebecca? Hello, Rebecca?
6. Author needs OB nurse or Doula consultant about advanced pregnancy issues.
7. Cops blame four murders on one culprit, but the last method is very different.
8. Murderer(s)—who must be covered head-to-toe in blood—escape without leaving evidence. Or a trail.
9. An almost Christmas Story setting when insta-lovers meet again.
There are plot holes, paranormal events that aren’t, and the ending is unbelievable. There’s more, but I’ll stop. If I hadn’t burned an Audible credit, I wouldn’t have made it through this book. January LaVoy does stellar work with what she’s given to narrate. Brava, Ms. LaVoy! Brava!
Please note that I am in the minority of reviewers, so read my review with a shaker of salt.