VIOLATION, A MASSIVE WORD FOR JUST A FLUFFY STORY
Lured by the title "Violation" I picked this book seeking to learn and to be entertained at the same time by a fictional story describing the trauma suffered by an adult woman after being raped during high school. I thought that the plot followed a consistent previous investigation by the author
The tale revolves around three main characters very well developed at the beginning, Thea the raped woman who suffers post traumatic stress disorder after such tragic event, David his estranged son, the product of that rape, and Jack and ex LAPD cop who happens to be Thea's landlord and who learns to like the kid
When David becomes a teenager, he begins to wonder about his mother weird behaviour and his own past, so one day makes the decision to find out who his father was and runs away from home with outside help, traveling to the opposite side of the country, Thea shocked, runs after him and Jack also very attached to the boy goes after Thea, hereafter the story loses realism.
My criticism toward this book points towards the lack of purpose, you do not really undestand if the author objective was to explore the feelings of the woman after the rape or write a mystery tale leaving the former on the background
In fact, characters are well drawn, but suspense and actions are not, let me elaborate some situations to clarify my point:
It is difficult to understand how Jack, with computers a layman, uses Thea's password after founding it "casually" written in a paper placed near the computer and then access to all her private recorded internet chat conversations, on top of that he prints them out, consequently it is very difficult to understand how Thea, a phobic, leaves her password written on a paper that can be found by anyone
It is difficult to understand how Thea took a cross-country flight carrying a weapon and being undetected
It is difficult to understand how Jack and Thea get face to face interviews with important secluded people of the upper crust of Long Island on arrival, without an appointment and even without mentioning their names in advance
Finally, I can also notice that the author was unable to create logical connections between events, some of them very confusing. The story loses almost all credibility
At one point, there was a ray of hope to improve what was done, with a sudden turn of events, that was when Thea learned that the jailed rapist turned out not to be the actual rapist, that situation could have been exploited far better than it was and "Violation" would have probably been a very interesting read from that section
Due to the reasons mentioned above, to rate this book two stars is too much, one
will suffice