I really wanted to like this one, but I was disappointed in the story for some reason. It was a let down for me. I didn't dislike it, but neither did I like it. Her mother bothered me a lot, with how overprotective she was, I found the main character's (and I've forgotten her name now) reactions to her mom to be not all that convincing to let her have her way more often. For example, if I wanted to start going to the mall with my friends without adult supervision (naturally when I was actually old enough to do so, my mother would never have let me go to the mall without an adult if I had been under the age of 12 no matter my maturity level, just for safety reasons), I had to prove to her I was mature enough to handle the experience on my own. But this girl just gets angry and doesn't actually say or do anything productive that would actually make her mom stop and listen a bit to her. Although I do agree with the girl that her mom is way too protective and should actually back off a bit. I wasn't a fan of how she called her mom by her first name. That to me shows a massive disrespect. I get that there are people out there who don't want to be called mom/dad, but why the heck would you have kids if you don't want to be called a mom? It doesn't make sense to me and that is one of the things that bothers me in real life or book life. Although if the parent is a bit of a snot and unworthy of being called mom/dad (for example, perhaps they are neglectful or abusive) I don't mind that situation, and actually commend them as those types of parents have not earned the respect that comes with the titles mom/dad. In this case, her mother was not either one of these parental types, the daughter called her mom to her face, but not around anyone else. And other than being overprotective, she wasn't a bad mother. Which to me means, she should be calling her mom regardless of anything, but nope. Behind her mom's back she was not mom but her name, which I think was Lidia but could be wrong. I found this extremely disrespectful, and just kinda went with her attitude throughout the book towards her mother and certain acts that she did throughout it as well. Another thing that I just remembered, and can't believe I forgot, was there was a point, near the beginning, where the MC goes on a date with the MC guy, and on their way home they kiss. Her mom comes and breaks them apart and calls her something in Italian, but I got the impression it may have had the same connotation as whore. Not sure about you, but I'm not a big fan of anyone calling anyone else that, and I don't know any parent who would call their daughter that. Especially since they were just kissing. Inappropriate and I felt that there was no proper resolution to this, she just gets mad at her mom and then falls back in line. I'd be like we're done. Don't ever talk to me again.
And this was more of a personal preference. I get that the mom is Italian, and it's nice to put another language in it, but only like one or two words that are relatively easy to figure out what they say. In this book her mom rattles off sentences in Italian, with no English translation. Um, have no idea what she said, and so spent most of the scenes with the mother very confused and lost. Like the scene with the kissing. She yelled the word in Italian after saying I can't believe my daughter would go and act like a *insert Italian word here* and it had a tone of nastiness, especially with the daughter's reaction. I have read books before with other languages every once in a while, but usually those ones only have phrases like: "hello", "how are you", etc., and you can usually figure out what they are saying. They don't say the whole thing in the other language. Having another language being said when the reader is English only really works in movies because there are such things called subtitles. I didn't see any glossary explaining any of the sentences or words that the mother spoke. And then randomly, at some point, the mom was speaking Italian in Italian words when suddenly Nicole decided that it was more appropriate to suddenly have the words in English so that people could actually understand what they were saying, and putting down for context that they were still speaking in Italian. And then said they switched to English at some point so that we knew. Um, why did it take four or five chapters to get to that point? One or two words in another language is ok, but when every sentence the mom says is not in English it's rather frustrating (especially when there is no English translation directly after it) and then to suddenly be all "O I forgot that other people might not know the language I'm using, perhaps I should actually allow them to be able to read it". Ya, no thanks. A little too late for that pass. Had it only been one time, with the odd word here or there that was easy to guess at what it was, I might have been a little nicer about this, but truly, I was left so confused at the beginning of the story due to the Italian that was randomly thrown in there, which I will take to mean that it was unnecessary to the plot since I couldn't understand it. But if that was the case, and it was unnecessary, why put it in at all? I just took a writing course yesterday, and when you have unnecessary things in your writing, people get annoyed. I wonder why that could possibly be? For this reason alone, I would probably not continue the rest of the series, except Nicole seemed to clear it up after a while. However, I'm not sure I will even reread this book because of this issue. I found it way too distracting and way to difficult to get past.
As for the whole Benadanti and Maladanti aspect, I wasn't sure if I bought it. It just didn't seem all that interesting to me, and I was annoyed at a specific character for their refusal to listen or see reason near the end about the whole issue. I won't say more so I don't spoil it, but needless to say I guessed it right after all of the characters were introduced, and was sadly disappointed that nothing actually differed from my predictions.
O, and just for your information, I know, from reading reviews, that there is quite the divide on this, so some of you might be all yay, and others will therefore avoid this book, but there is some heavy duty instalove in this series. They barely meet and then she is switching his schedule with his twin's at the office so that they can be in the same classes. Really? Wow. Don't get me wrong. I think it's possible to be instantly attracted to someone, and I think from there it can grow, and I don't mind reading stories with that instant attraction, but it has to be done well. It also has to be clear that it was attraction and not love, and in this case, not only was it instalove, but it was also not done that well or believable. I've read others with a similar storyline that had done it much better and more believable. So, just beware if this is the type of thing that bothers you, you might not be able to get over it.
It is too bad, because I can see where this would have been a great story, and there were lots of great reviews (hence I picked it up) but it just wasn't for me. I ended up skimming it as I just couldn't get into the story. Perhaps it's that I read it right around the same time as a couple of other series that I really took to and wasn't ready to read this one yet, but I just couldn't get into it all that well. If you don't mind many sentences in another language that you don't speak/read, instalove, or any of the above that really bothered me, give it a shot. Just because I didn't like it, doesn't mean that you won't, or even if that stuff does bother you, don't dismiss this because every once and a while there is an amazing book finished that has many things that normally bother me, and yet I manage to like them, but I would actually recommend getting it from the library or a friend and not buying it. I truly regret paying the money for this book. Sad day.