I had been looking forward to this book since I read the first one in the series, Tatterdemalion.
I loved that book! Simply loved it, because it was so intruging and exciting and new. The love was sweet and slow-paced, had time to become love instead of some fast-paced crush.
Trammel started out good, started out interesting. Started out with Noah, which was alright and then moved to Lindsay and Dane.
When the story started to focus far more on Lindsay and Noah, that was when I started to frown. I sat through, hoping with all my heart, that there would NOT be a third addition to the wonderful couple already established.
Of course, as with another favourite series of mine, my hopes were shattered. Taking in Noah made everything wrong in my case. I mean, the man was married! He is still in love with his wife and there have never been any indication of him being attracted to males at any point and suddenly he is very attracted to Lindsay and wants to have sex with him?
I'm sorry, Ms. Fox and Crow, but I just don't see that happening. Especially not when he is still mourning his wife and we saw what reaction he had to Kristan.
That Dane never did anything was also annoying. His whole: "As long as Lindsay is happy everything is fine" attitude is just wrong. He has to be possessive. I mean, letting another man sleep in your bed, you're sharing with your lover, knowing your lover is attracted to him? No.
And Lindsay never really did anything to stop his own attraction. I skipped all the intimate scenes between Noah and Lindsay, because they annoyed me to no end.
I want DANE/Lindsay, not something else. At least we can hope with Jonas's addition that Noah's focus will be somewhere else and he won't try to become more mixed up in Dane's and Lindsay's relationship.
Also, Lindsay's possessiveness over Noah is "meh" for me. I don't see Lindsay be so possessive over anyone except Dane. Suddenly he is floating into the arms of Noah in the minute his lover is gone and while he is still trying to find him, it just doesn't seem as heartfelt, as it could have been, because he starts sleeping with Noah all of sudden.
Also, not much is explained in this book and a lot of times, I am sitting in the dark, thinking about what this means and what that means, but never really getting an answer. Instead there is the focus point on this little girl no one knows and no one has heard of and Dane has to be caught - again! Is he also going to be caught in the third book?
Starting a whole new plot is alright, but not without any explanations. It's first in the end we actually get some idea about this girl's powers and that's first after almost 180 pages out of 206.
I can understand the mysteriousness and I love mysteries myself, but this is just too much. Some things have to be explained early on to hold the reader's attention, instead of confusing them, so they don't actually read the book with the same interest and excitement, as they could be doing.
But generally, I was sad to see a lot of the focus point shifting away from Dane and Lindsay. I enjoyed those two and instead it's a lot of Noah and Lindsay we see; too much, if you ask me.
I'm giving it 2.5 stars, because I really enjoy the flow of words the two authors always show, which makes way for interesting pictures in one's head. Also, even though there is very little of it, I highly enjoy the few scenes where Dane and Lindsay are together.
The story is still good, even though this sequel is not really the sequel as many of us had been expecting and hoping for.
I'm just asking; is this what we have to be expecting from the last book? More Noah and Lindsay? More kidnappings of Dane? Maybe another new mage, whose powers we won't learn until the end? Maybe even a new lover to Lindsay? Or this time Dane? Will Jonas join so it will become a foursome?
I'm sorry, but that is just not, what I at least had expected. The addition of Noah into the relationship still hurts my little heart. I love Dane and Lindsay together. They're cute as a button and I can't get enough of them, but suddenly Dane is pushed away and that is a turn, which many faithful readers may find wrong. I know, I did.
I hope everything will become more clear in the third book and that we will once again see Dane and Lindsay.