I know, I know. I only gave this two stars, and yet I'm writing a review.
I read it from digital cover to digital cover. And I enjoyed it. It isn't great literature, nor is it intellectually challenging in any way... and I love fluffy mind-candy stories as much as the next reader. But seriously, where was the editor? Granted, the typos and whatnot did not detract from the overall story, but again I ask, where was the editor? And why did they not catch so many of the typos and errors?
I liked the story well enough. I read it in stops and starts, but I kept thinking about it in between readings. Still. Not great literature, and it was often corny, and overly theatrical. And the plot progressed in ways that were awkward and amateurish. How can two characters go from hating each other, to suspicion, to making out madly and being head over heels in love despite the danger they were facing?
So why did I keep reading? Well, because it was interesting, despite the major flaws. The concept was good. The characters, though kind of predictable and often just flat-out cliche'd still kept my attention.
Seems that there is a possibility of a sequel. Let's hope the sequel has a better editorial team. There's real potential for the continuation of this story, it just seems like it rushes things too much, needs a better editor, and the author needs to put plot before the characters having a hot make out session and falling head over heels in love.
Not that I'm against falling head over heels in love, but just... really, hot vampire, hot ex-cop... there needs to be a bit more plot development and more complex character development before I can justify enjoying it as much as I did.
Would I recommend this to others? No, unless they really want a light fluffy read that involves vampires and trivial angst from characters who are interesting, but shallow and predictable.