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The Coming Storm #3
Not Magic Enough
For Delae, a lonely landholder on the edge of the Kingdoms, a frantic knock at the door on a stormy winter's night brings more than a cry for help. After centuries of war Elves have little contact with the race of men, but Dorovan can't bring himself to ride past those so obviously in need. Especially the small woman so determined to right the overturned wagon. One small act, with enormous consequences. Not Magic Enough is a tale of love and honor, duty and determination, that sets in motion a chain of events that will change the Kingdoms forever.
51 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 25, 2011
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Valerie Douglas
47 books226 followersValerie Douglas is a prolific writer and a genre-crosser. She writes classic, epic, and historical fantasy, suspense, thrillers, western and romance. As V. J. Devereaux, she writes more spicy romances.
She is also co-founder of the FB Indie Author Group, to help other writers with their work.
She's companion to two dogs, four cats and an African clawed frog named Hopper who delights in tormenting the cats from his tank.
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She is also co-founder of the FB Indie Author Group, to help other writers with their work.
She's companion to two dogs, four cats and an African clawed frog named Hopper who delights in tormenting the cats from his tank.
You can find more information at
http://valeriedouglasauthor.com/
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March 6, 2014
I got NOT MAGIC ENOUGH as a Kindle freebie back in March but forgot about it until recently. It was a perfect short read for a rainy, lazy Saturday. Set in a medieval fantasy world, the story is self-contained yet works very well as a prequel to
The Coming Storm
by providing a general framework for the Otherlings series and the family background for Ailith (Delae's granddaughter), as well as brief mentions of other characters (such as Elon).
The world-building is detailed enough (but not overly complicated) to enable the reader to imagine it, and the various secondary characters are easily relatable (although IMHO, the good vs. bad distinction was a bit too sharply drawn). I liked that the main characters accepted the reality of their relationship and circumstances and simply appreciated what they had, instead of wishing for more. My only complaint (if it could be called that) is the vagueness at the end about Delae. The reader can surmise what probably happened but me? I wanted details! There seems to be a HEA but it's a bittersweet, realistic one for this story.
This was my first book by this author and yes, NOT MAGIC ENOUGH could have used a bit more editing and "tightening up", as my favorite English teacher used to say. And yes, the constant POV switches without any warning sometimes gave me mental whiplash. And yes, there is purple prose. *sigh/LOL* But no, it is NOT erotic as that term is used/understood these days.
Nonetheless, I'll probably read The Coming Storm to see what happens with Ailith. Maybe there'll be something that further explains what happened to Delae? Will Dorovan also make an appearance?
[Note about my Kindle file: there were formatting and some punctuation errors so at times, I couldn't tell if some sentences were separated intentionally or by formatting mistake.]
The world-building is detailed enough (but not overly complicated) to enable the reader to imagine it, and the various secondary characters are easily relatable (although IMHO, the good vs. bad distinction was a bit too sharply drawn). I liked that the main characters accepted the reality of their relationship and circumstances and simply appreciated what they had, instead of wishing for more. My only complaint (if it could be called that) is the vagueness at the end about Delae. The reader can surmise what probably happened but me? I wanted details! There seems to be a HEA but it's a bittersweet, realistic one for this story.
This was my first book by this author and yes, NOT MAGIC ENOUGH could have used a bit more editing and "tightening up", as my favorite English teacher used to say. And yes, the constant POV switches without any warning sometimes gave me mental whiplash. And yes, there is purple prose. *sigh/LOL* But no, it is NOT erotic as that term is used/understood these days.
Nonetheless, I'll probably read The Coming Storm to see what happens with Ailith. Maybe there'll be something that further explains what happened to Delae? Will Dorovan also make an appearance?
[Note about my Kindle file: there were formatting and some punctuation errors so at times, I couldn't tell if some sentences were separated intentionally or by formatting mistake.]
August 10, 2014
It should probably be mentioned that this is supposed to function as the origin story for Ailith (one of the main players in The Coming Storm) as well as introduce us to the politics of the world. So, it did get a bit mired at times in the divisions of the elves, dwarves, and humans, and their history, and how much prejudice still exists between them in the world. But through it all, this is a wonderfully romantic tale between an elf and human. Both Dalae and Dorovan are vibrant creations that bring the world to life around them. The world created in this is reminiscent of the world of Tolkien with the elves very much akin to the elves of Middle-Earth and the political relations between the elves, men and dwarves very much the same, but the story itself is a creation all of its own considering it's definitely not the typical quest to fight monsters, but instead centers on the life of Dalae who is tied to her homestead. It was a joy to read of her awakening to life, learning what love can be, and discovering the beauty of handsome Dorovan, along with him discovering all the things to love about Dalae in return--from her love of weaving tapestries, to her running around the stone halls of the homestead shoeless. (Like the other reviewers though, I did notice that it used the word delight far too many times to describe something--nearly every page. The trying to phrase things differently to hearken an older time was wonderful, but it did need another pass through for editing since there were little words missing here and there that needed to be in for sentences to make sense. And it did seem to try to drill the idea that their relationship wasn't a soul-bond far too many times--I would have suggested mentioning it two to three times tops in the entire piece rather than two to three times per page. But those little things aside, I didn't think they detracted from the story itself considering how wrapped up I was in the characters and romance). I would recommend this to anyone who loves a sweet romance and gorgeous, sexy Tolkien style elves.
May 8, 2013
I wish I could give this one five stars. I really do.
"Not Magic Enough" is one beautifully written novella, with characters that you can immediately relate to. It had me crying by the beginning of the second chapter, and it's certainly not an everyday-thing for me to read and weep. Ever since Dorovan - an Elf, also the male protagonist - made his appearance in the first chapter, describing the scenery that highlighted Delae, I was in love with the book. I wept for Delae, as she connected with Dorovan emotionally, and wept for her as she faced her loneness. The immediate reaction between Dorovan and Delae could definitely be seen as insta-"love", but in this novella, there is more than enough reason why they should act the way they do. Although their acquaintance short and brief, their moments together were beautiful.
The plot itself was intriguing as much as the characters, that had me so engaged the entire time. I liked that the author was able to convey not only the dreamy aspects of the fantasy genre, but also the brutality and hardships that life contains. I was glad to see Delae age (although I would not have minded a fairy tale ending where Dorovan would somehow turn her into an elf and live happily ever after in Enclave together) and have children then see her daughter have children, and still maintain the connection between her and Dorovan. However, the last bit of this novella threw me off completely and took me by surprise;
Despite the fact that I have given in to the ending of this story in my head, in my heart I will always have Dorovan standing next to Delae, as her one and only soulmate.
"Not Magic Enough" is one beautifully written novella, with characters that you can immediately relate to. It had me crying by the beginning of the second chapter, and it's certainly not an everyday-thing for me to read and weep. Ever since Dorovan - an Elf, also the male protagonist - made his appearance in the first chapter, describing the scenery that highlighted Delae, I was in love with the book. I wept for Delae, as she connected with Dorovan emotionally, and wept for her as she faced her loneness. The immediate reaction between Dorovan and Delae could definitely be seen as insta-"love", but in this novella, there is more than enough reason why they should act the way they do. Although their acquaintance short and brief, their moments together were beautiful.
The plot itself was intriguing as much as the characters, that had me so engaged the entire time. I liked that the author was able to convey not only the dreamy aspects of the fantasy genre, but also the brutality and hardships that life contains. I was glad to see Delae age (although I would not have minded a fairy tale ending where Dorovan would somehow turn her into an elf and live happily ever after in Enclave together) and have children then see her daughter have children, and still maintain the connection between her and Dorovan. However, the last bit of this novella threw me off completely and took me by surprise;
Despite the fact that I have given in to the ending of this story in my head, in my heart I will always have Dorovan standing next to Delae, as her one and only soulmate.
August 4, 2011
An unlikely romance against a fantasy backdrop...
This is a touching novella that introduces us to a seething magical world at a time that can only be considered the calm before the storm.
Delae is a young abandoned wife who drudges through life caring for a rundown property and sparse lands while her Lord and husband squanders what little money there is on gambling and in brothels. When a well-meaning elf appears on a frigid winter night, Delae is smitten not just with his physical beauty but also the strength of his character. Though the union of a woman and an elf is unheard of in their world, it becomes their most precious and ongoing secret. And from that point forward, Delae and Dorovan endure the trials of separate lives largely by focusing on their thoughts of and feelings for each other.
Though this feels more like the setup for a larger adventure, it is certainly a worthy stand-a-lone read for anyone who values a beautiful romance in an exotic place.
A moving story for the fantasy lover.
Reviewed by Tim Greaton, author of "Zachary Pill, The Dragon at Station End"
This is a touching novella that introduces us to a seething magical world at a time that can only be considered the calm before the storm.
Delae is a young abandoned wife who drudges through life caring for a rundown property and sparse lands while her Lord and husband squanders what little money there is on gambling and in brothels. When a well-meaning elf appears on a frigid winter night, Delae is smitten not just with his physical beauty but also the strength of his character. Though the union of a woman and an elf is unheard of in their world, it becomes their most precious and ongoing secret. And from that point forward, Delae and Dorovan endure the trials of separate lives largely by focusing on their thoughts of and feelings for each other.
Though this feels more like the setup for a larger adventure, it is certainly a worthy stand-a-lone read for anyone who values a beautiful romance in an exotic place.
A moving story for the fantasy lover.
Reviewed by Tim Greaton, author of "Zachary Pill, The Dragon at Station End"
July 9, 2011
A delightful novella. This was my first venture into Fantasy. Having sheltered myself from Lord of the Ring mania, you could call me a late developer and this was the perfect introduction to the genre. Delae, is a competent young landowner, who has patiently come to accept her life of hardship without complaint. One stormy night, she encounters Dorovan, an Elf, a race forbidden to mix with Man. They are irresistibly drawn to one another and discover a mutual need for passion, love, tenderness and sensuality. Their bond is deep and unbreakable, but their liaison is forbidden. I was smitten by the archaic timbre of the writing style and the hardship of the era was well portrayed; as were the beauty and integrity of both hero and heroine - their love scenes are powerfully drawn. Whilst the ending is sad, but inevitable, Valerie sprinkles a dust of happiness over it.
A wonderful, moving story.
A wonderful, moving story.
May 17, 2013
Not Magic Enough
by Valerie Douglas
Delae a lonely landholder on the edge of the Kingdoms is the embodiment of a true landowner, with honor and courage. AS she is trying to save travelers out in a snow storm. Dorovan an Elf would normally ride by as Elves don't mix well with man. Something pulls at him to help. Delae offers room and food to Dorovan, this 1 night will start them on a Lifetime of Love.
I love this book, having read The Coming Storm and A Convocation of Kings this Prequel was amazing, why oh why did I wait to read this?! This series is so masterfully written, the descriptions of the world are amazing. I just want to read read this whole series a 3rd time!
This series should be a Movie!
5 STARS
Patches
complimentary book given for a free review. juliesbookreview.blogspot.com
by Valerie Douglas
Delae a lonely landholder on the edge of the Kingdoms is the embodiment of a true landowner, with honor and courage. AS she is trying to save travelers out in a snow storm. Dorovan an Elf would normally ride by as Elves don't mix well with man. Something pulls at him to help. Delae offers room and food to Dorovan, this 1 night will start them on a Lifetime of Love.
I love this book, having read The Coming Storm and A Convocation of Kings this Prequel was amazing, why oh why did I wait to read this?! This series is so masterfully written, the descriptions of the world are amazing. I just want to read read this whole series a 3rd time!
This series should be a Movie!
5 STARS
Patches
complimentary book given for a free review. juliesbookreview.blogspot.com
May 16, 2013
Delae a lonely landholder on the edge of the Kingdoms is the embodiment of a true landowner, with honor and courage. AS she is trying to save travelers out in a snow storm. Dorovan an Elf would normally ride by as Elves don't mix well with man. Something pulls at him to help. Delae offers room and food to Dorovan, this 1 night will start them on a Lifetime of Love.
I love this book, I cried while reading this book. After having read The Coming Storm and A Convocation of Kings this Prequel was amazing, why oh why did I wait to read this?! This series is so masterfully written, the descriptions of the world are amazing. I just want to read read this whole series a 3rd time!
This series should be a Movie!
5 STARS
Patches
I love this book, I cried while reading this book. After having read The Coming Storm and A Convocation of Kings this Prequel was amazing, why oh why did I wait to read this?! This series is so masterfully written, the descriptions of the world are amazing. I just want to read read this whole series a 3rd time!
This series should be a Movie!
5 STARS
Patches
July 7, 2011
This is a story set in a Lord of the Rings style fantasy setting. It is a love story between a 'Woman of Men' and an Elf. A love that is forbidden. The story follows their lives together and the difficulties they face.
I loved this. I completely lost myself in the story. I totally identified with the lead female and her truly awful life until the Elf came into it. I laughed and I cried at the end both from sadness and happiness. I was immersed from beginning to end.
I would gladly read others in the series as this one gripped me totally.
I loved this. I completely lost myself in the story. I totally identified with the lead female and her truly awful life until the Elf came into it. I laughed and I cried at the end both from sadness and happiness. I was immersed from beginning to end.
I would gladly read others in the series as this one gripped me totally.
May 8, 2012
Great short story! Looking forward to reading more
August 12, 2012
a good novella of "the storm trigolgy" expanding on events from that series
December 29, 2011
I read this story on the train to work and it brightened my commute. I found myself thinking 'damn' every time I got to my stop because I wanted to know what happened next. I enjoyed the storyline - who wouldn't mind meeting a handsome elf? The plot flows along well, with some dramatic situations, character development, twists and a lot of passion thrown in. The erotic scenes read hot and genuine, and are written with aplomb. Valerie seems to write effortlessly; her style is flowing, descriptive and graphic. She paints pictures. The characterisation is sensitive and the story is atmospheric. She captures everything well with a lightness of touch. It's all in the details. I thought the ending slightly abrupt, but I think that was because I wanted more. Just like the heroine of the story while she waits for her man.
June 17, 2012
Not Magic Enough is about a romance between a human and an elf at a time when the two races were ending years of conflict. It was not clear why there was somuch animosity, nor was the prevailing culture explained. While I found the heroine likeable and sympathetic in a difficult situation, I could not reconcile her readiness to cheat on her loser of a husband. Her pregancy is dealt with handily, if nastily, so that there is no scandal. Overall, while I liked the main characters, I could not enjoy their illicit romance and never felt I understood enough about their circumstances to really care what happened to them.
February 27, 2012
A melancholy, joyful little story, good for a quick solid read. It's meant as a snapshot of the world the author has created and seems to serve more to set the scene, tone and incidents of other more significant stories she intends to set in this world. So there are unknowns, stories left untold and questions left unanswered (undoubtedly left for future characters to answer). It feels like a prequel. That aside, it's a brief but poignant tale of a friendship/love between and woman and an elf. Not a bad read.
May 30, 2012
Too much explicit sex for me. Too bad. :/
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