First off, the TWs: kidnapping, murder, plenty of gun and knife violence, pregnancy, intimate partner violence
WHAT EVEN WAS THIS BOOK.
I live in Boston, okay? Where these books are ostensibly set. And so far, they've been pretty okay on the details. Well, the first couple were, and they've been deteriorating. And then we get to THIS book.
NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE
And it's the kind of shit that would take literally ninety seconds of internetting. A hospital IN BOSTON with a Wal-Mart a few blocks away? No Wal-Marts within city limits; closest is about a half-hour drive from the city. Getting the name of a major, well-known museum wrong. Getting a description of a neighborhood's demographics right, but descriptions of the housing stock all wrong. I mean, a single-family RANCH in BOSTON is ludicrous, except MAYBE in like West Roxbury. Sure aren't any in Allston or Brighton. Also anyone who lives there lives in EITHER Allston OR Brighton, not "Allston-Brighton", PS. And somehow the neighborhood is ALLLL triple-deckers except MAGICALLY for these two staties' houses. Riiiight. (Nope: it's a mix of large apartment buildings, a lot of two-families, a lot of big old single-families converted to multi-families, and maybe some single-families in a few areas. There are a few streets of triple-deckers! But not ranch-style, lots generally aren't big enough. GOOGLE STREET VIEW IS YOUR FRIEND.) And a "sprawling" elementary school, OH IT IS TO LAUGH. And one of the core suburbs described as "rural". OH please. And somehow only Harvard, MA, has farms and fields and shit (nope). Give me a freaking break. Sure, Harvard (the town) is out there, past 128, so sure. But uh there's a big old farm right in freaking Lexington.
Then there's all the improbabilities about the State Police! Again, ninety seconds of internetting could have told you that the Framingham barracks doesn't patrol the Mass Pike, there's a troop specifically assigned to the Pike. So Framingham might help out once in a while, but that's not their regular spot, if I am reading the State Police's website correctly. And somehow she lives in Boston but isn't assigned to any of the troops or barracks in town. Right. Okay fine, she's only four years in, I get it. But her trainer, in for much longer, who also miraculously has a huge fucking yard in the city, is also assigned out of Framingham? And their patrols start as soon as they get in the car, even though their barracks isn't assigned here?
Then we get to the mystery. And the victim/potential perp. WHAT. WHAT. WHAT. I can't even with you.
Then we get to our overarching character, who SPOILER gets pregnant. Fine, I can buy that, even though you're on the far side of 40. But you've consistently never wanted kids, and suddenly as soon as you have a positive pregnancy test OH YES I WILL BE A MOM. Uh. And conveniently, reading the teaser for the next book, it appears that all of the awesome character development we could have seen during the pregnancy is just skipped over and she's got a kid now HEY ISN'T THAT GREAT. What the fuck. We don't even see the reaction of the man involved in the pregnancy. We get no development to their relationship, we're just told that they are still together and hey yeah they each have a drawer at each other's houses so that's nice. But nothing deeper than that. We're just told this is how it is, and are supposed to accept that, with no view or explanation as to WHY.
Just... this was so poorly edited. And researched. And frankly, improbable. And I still find D.D. Warren an abrasive, two-dimensional asshole. And even though this is a library book I wish I could get my money back.