I read one of these poems as part of a creative writing class a few years ago, and I have been dreaming of a few lines since: “I tried to cut through/ all our hurried centuries/ lost in a forest within.” My initial impressions of the voice of the poems was the poet speaking of travelling abstractly with politicians and cobbling meaning from it, and the poet was making me work for it, trying to understand the complexity of ideas and theorists and philosophers. I really loved how he would cross out words in the poem at times, for example () indicating a cross out:
there was a book/that I wished to view-/new within/but old without/In the Middle (East) of life/it more or less went/unthinkable to the end
The eye does not lie./Some form continues/and will continue./Thus the flames/countless and imponderable,/sink anew-/solved,/whole, (Holy.)
I was disappointed that none of the words in these poems are the author’s; it is entirely the words of the Austrian politician with Nazi ties who was high up in the U.N., and while quite clever, really, it wasn’t what I thought it was. But meaningful in its way. Before I knew it was an erasure, a work of an erasurist, which the poet compares to the archeologist’s task, I was planning on my own found poem from it, which makes it a found poem of an erased poem to the 4th power as the poet went through three times and made 3 books of poems in this book. The Austrian man was associated with Nazis during WWII and while there was no sure evidence found, he may have been linked to killing some of my father’s countrymen and women in the former Yugoslavia, so I am conflicted as to why an Indian American found this memoir worthy of his time.
He wrote in an interview of trying to find poetry in a memoir of a possibly ugly life. You can go online and see his process of whittling the words down, and while I could not find the exact passage of lines, I have to respect the beauty the erasurist found in the memoir, and it does open a line of thinking, of how you retain what you retain from a book, what your mind’s eye sees, and how you see yourself in it. Only when I finished my poem did I realize I wrote "world" in every stanza. My process of excavation of the excavating was really fun, I recommend it!
Poem Found to the 4th Power
by Cheryl
I tried to cut through
All our hurried centuries,
Lost in a forest within.
The world is a world.
Even so the world has to go on.
To complain about love in front of the famous Chagall window does not make a difference.
To deny it is to break with reason.
Subject the globe to assembly.
Waves rise and fall, but the sea remains.
Nevertheless it would be reasonable to question the affair.
The speaker studies the night overhead.
I became interested in the fate of a machine which had been launched into creation and disappeared from sight during my boyhood.
To believe in the world, a person has to quiet thinking.
The world is water falling on a stone.
The star systems pace in perception.
The world is a world.
He says therefore.
Aboard, I read, was a deeply-etched record of the world that floated away, full of popular tunes and beautiful technological problems.
It was a forlorn eve,
My descent wintry,
In that foreign midnight,
I sounded the chanceries of doubt.
To my astonishment, I seemed to be blindfolded.
He would have to weigh carefully in his heart the words of a man who by some quirk of fate had become a spokesman for humanity, who could give voice to all the nations and peoples of the world.
A world broke out,
A world drained of weather.
Mother made me from whatever little was available,
A window, a magnet,
My my.
Now I realize that, in the theatres of neutrality, the heart freezes.
So I and the Minister left for a quest
Under this world,
Thus seeking
To return home,
Star fields prevailing in the East.
Everybody watches the wheel as it turns and experience taught me that, in the final analysis, nothing ends. The first steps must follow.
Looking at the strange pictures-
A black sun,
The Earth seen from inside,
And war and world in a box-
My my, such pictures!
A little gallery of being, I thought, and we spend hours discussing forms; one had a map of the real that we later published in the Times in Latin.
One opened a little clock
And said freedom.
Together we opened my will,
And in the first circle, the center of never,
The Minister had constructed a residence
And I became a disciple of despair, for I had a long good look at that world and I said Help.
Set in the midst of vineyards,
The surrounding waters deep,
His great concern
The erosion under the world
I was led to a globe, beholden to its vast revolution
I was impressed by the speech and facing him I said Help, and over the Sahara within he invited me to cross.
We were ushered in
And said world in different ways.
He made a moving speech
On one man’s faltering steps
Towards the hard barren ground of human suffering…
“Could this self, born in a stream of sad time, only be makeshift?”