PROTAGONIST: Michael St. Pierre, security consultant
SETTING: China
SERIES: #4 of 4
RATING: 3.25
Michael St. Pierre is a former thief who has used his knowledge of breaking and entering to build a very successful security consulting firm. His assignments often take him to exotic places around the globe. However, he and his equally adventurous girlfriend, KC Ryan, have promised each other not to undertake any assignments and focus instead on enjoying their life together. However, Michael finds he is unable to say no to his old friend, Simon, a Vatican priest who begs him to take on one more job. When KC finds that Michael has lied to her, she decides to return to her home in England to figure out what to do. Michael has shown no signs of willingness to make a permanent commitment, not because he doesn’t love KC but because he is wary as a result of the death of his first wife.
Both Michael and KC soon find themselves at the mercy of a US colonel, each being blackmailed into doing what he wants with the threat of death to the other if they do not cooperate. Michael must find an ancient diary hidden in the bowels of a luxury casino in Macau; KC must retrieve an antique box housed within China’s Forbidden Palace. Both assignments at first seem to be completely impossible. Michael is aided by a friend, Paul Busch, and one of his captors, Jon Lei, who help follow the complex plan that Michael has devised to accomplish the theft. Meanwhile, KC must partner with the unstable and dangerous woman who helped abduct her, Annie Joss, as well as an American woman who has deep knowledge of the Palace, as well as access to most of its secrets. Behind the scenes, two brothers are battling each other to gain control of both the artifacts.
Although the descriptions of the two settings where the thefts were to take place were fascinating, Doetsch showed much too much of his research in the case of the Forbidden Palace. The detailed descriptions of the lay-outs of the Macau casino and the Palace were difficult to envision—he could easily have established the impossibility of penetrating either site without going into a full-blown history of either. The actual thefts were both quite exciting—both Michael and KC were quite creative in how they approached the challenges they faced.
Even after experiencing success in their respective missions, there was yet another quest that needed to be completed, this being one that would save KC’s life after she was injected with a fatal poison. Although I was quite engaged by the earlier adventures, this is where the book fell apart for me. The conclusion was a free-for-all, with everyone betraying everyone else, and the melodrama of getting their hands on the cure for KC before one of the bad guys did was way over the top.
THIEVES was fast paced, which kept me reading, but it was so filled with improbable situations that its appeal didn’t hold up to the time test, i.e., that it didn’t hold its initial satisfaction a few weeks after reading it.