If I were to write a letter to the author of this novel, I would say:
I grew up in a family of veterans. Both my parents served many years in the Air Force, and took an interest in aircraft. Over the years of my father’s military service, he collected a multitude of techno-thriller novels, and Firebreak was among his favorite. My father recommended this book to me, so I read the description on the back. I was hooked already. I have few questions; however, I must ask, did you enjoy the time you served in the Air Force? What exactly inspired you with such fascinating plot ideas? How do you begin writing combat scenes?
Protest a situation/ending/conflict in the novel or make a complaint regarding a situation/ending/conflict/writing style. I have only two issues with this great work of art. My first problem is the rather ambiguous atmosphere presented to me when reading parts where politics are being discussed and arguments are boiling. I wish I could have known these side characters better and understood the current political situations more than I did. My second problem is just one scene involving Shoshana. That scene would be when she expertly maneuvered her current vehicle with her father in it to save their lives, and her father had too few suspicions about such a “coincidence.”
Not that I would know much about writing, but I would put more time into conveying more about the current situation and history of the subjects relevant to the main plot to the reader. I would also attempt to fit in more aerial combat to the story, but I might be somewhat biased toward such action. Regardless of my picky personal preferences, this was certainly an amazing book. I could not read this novel enough. This work of art had me hooked, and I had to finish it.