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OPAL HAS KILLED FOR WHAT SHE BELIEVES ARE ALL THE RIGHT REASONS.All Opal wanted was to be respected as a wielder of magic, but her teachers passed her over time and time again. When a mysterious warlord embarks on a conquest to destroy the lands of Illyia Opal seizes an opportunity to step out from the shadows of her instructors and take her rightful spot among them. Tala, an alluring young elf, was banished from her tribe, hunted and nearly killed by the beasts that dwell in the deep forests, but more than anything else she is a survivor. Joining forces with an ancient elemental power Tala finds herself in the center of an unrelenting human war. She never wanted any of this. Flesh like leather and bone as strong as steel Karn, a veteran from the first kingdom to fall, is fueled by vengeance. While pushing ever headlong into battle Karn begins to recall memories of another life; ghosts that haunt his dreams. Through death of soul, their world is born.Award WinningSoul Born was awarded First Place in the P&E Reader's Poll New SF/F Novel 2010.""Soul Born" is a fast paced and fun world of fantasy, highly recommended reading." --Midwest Book Review"Soul Born is a fascinating chronicle of the battle between good and evil, the forces of nature pitted against the corruptive elements of excessive power." --Bitten By Books"With Soul Born, Kevin James Breaux carves out his own fresh turf in the world of dark high fantasy." --Gregory Frost, author of SHADOWBRIDGE"Kevin is a very talented author but more importantly he stops you feeling like a geek whilst reading fantasy... he really is one of those authors that make you think; 'Damn Fantasy is Cool'. --Fantasy Faction"One of the best fantasy novels I've read!...I am now officially obsessed with all things Soul Born!" --Kiki The Caffeinated Diva Blog"The characters are full bodied, they have their own quirks and perhaps most notably the plot line has an almost organic development feel to it." --Gareth Wilson of Falcata Times. (about Soul Born)"In “Dead Man’s Party,” Kevin Breaux draws such a realistic picture, I could imagine the macabre outcome to be the logical aftermath of cocaine induced hallucinations. There is more science in this story than in a traditional urban fantasy. Breaux takes a look at the current problem of microbial resistance and mutation and extrapolates it in a logical fashion (zombies notwithstanding), with no expository lumps. It suspended my disbelief." --Carole Ann Moleti"A Way to a Man's Heart. It's well written, engaging and amusing." --Jean Goldstrom, EditorAbout The Author - Kevin James BreauxKevin is an award-winning artist and author. He grew up in PA, but moved to OR in 2009. He spent years in art school dreaming of becoming a rofessional comic book artist so that he could see his creations come to life in pen & ink. It was not until his final year at Temple University that he realized writing could fulfill that dream.About The Artist - Dan Dos SantosDan's work spans a variety of genres, including novels, comics and film. He has worked for clients such as Disney, Universal Studios, Boeing Aircraft, Saatchi & Saatchi, Scholastic Books, The Greenwich Workshop, Penguin Books, Random House, Tor books, UpperDeck, Wizards of the Coast, and DC Comics.Dan has been the recipient of many awards. Recently, he has received a 2010 Silver Medal from Spectrum, the 2007 Jack Gaughan Award for Best Emerging Artist, and was the Chesley Award winner for Best Paperback Cover of 2007.
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Kevin James Breaux
19 books210 followersKevin James Breaux is an award-winning author and artist. His professional writing credits span over fifteen years and include short stories and novels. He has held memberships in the Horror Writers Association, Sci-Fi & Fantasy Writers of America, International Thriller Writers and the Paranormal Romance Guild. He lives by the motto “Write Makes Might!”© and sees each new page as an opportunity to improve and advance.
Formerly represented by Marisa A. Corvisiero the founder of the Corvisiero Literary Agency.
"Kevin Breaux takes no prisoners! This is raw, funny, edgy, unapologetic and highly weird. Buckle up." -Jonathan Maberry, New York Times best-selling author of Patient Zero and Kill Switch.
For more information, a current publishing history, interviews and signing schedules please visit Kevin's author site.
www.kevinbreaux.com
Formerly represented by Marisa A. Corvisiero the founder of the Corvisiero Literary Agency.
"Kevin Breaux takes no prisoners! This is raw, funny, edgy, unapologetic and highly weird. Buckle up." -Jonathan Maberry, New York Times best-selling author of Patient Zero and Kill Switch.
For more information, a current publishing history, interviews and signing schedules please visit Kevin's author site.
www.kevinbreaux.com
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January 22, 2011
All Opal wanted was to be respected as a wielder of magic, but her teachers passed her over time and time again. When a mysterious warlord embarks on a conquest to destroy the lands of Illyia Opal seizes an opportunity to step out from the shadows of her instructors and take her rightful spot among them.
Tala, an alluring young elf, was banished from her tribe, hunted and nearly killed by the beasts that dwell in the deep forests, but more than anything else she is a survivor. Joining forces with an ancient elemental power Tala finds herself in the centre of an unrelenting human war. She never wanted any of this.
Flesh like leather and bone as strong as steel Karn, a veteran from the first kingdom to fall, is fuelled by vengeance. While pushing ever headlong into battle Karn begins to recall memories of another life; ghosts that haunt his dreams.
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All sounds very ‘old school’ fantasy like... right? Well simply put it is. This isn’t a novel that treads new grounds; it isn’t a novel that will create ripples in the genre for its uniqueness – what it is, is an old school fantasy novel written in 2010. Imagine playing Dungeons and Dragons or Baulder’s Gate or anyone of those kinds of PC RPG games. The characters seem blocky; you roll your eyes at the dialogue, but at the same time you enjoy it for what it is and you quickly accept that this is old school and you remember something... you enjoy old school!
That’s how I felt when I first picked up ‘Soul Born’. I quickly found myself thinking lines like; “Human Magic is for Humans,” or “I saw lots of people. I – I think they were ghosts!” for example were a bit cheesy, but after a few chapters I was just enjoying them. Fantasy is popular today because of novels in the Dungeons and Dragons type era... the genre is defined by its blocky roots and its almost pre-defined characters. I very quickly found myself thinking how nice it was to go back in time a bit and read a novel that read like we expect a fantasy novel to read.
The character of Karn is one we have experienced hundreds of times before... a fearless Viking like hero who is aggressive and just wants to destroy evil. Opal is a little more new-age in the sense that she is a beautiful, powerful mage but with a darker side to her and Tala is that female Elve we have all come to love so much.
If you are looking for a Sanderson like writing style or a unique story you won’t find it here. But if you are a fantasy fan, willing to go back and look at what made fantasy great – cheesy lines, over-heroic characters, beautiful and lustrous women, elves, werewolves, dark kings and so on then this is a very good, quick read. I think Kevin Breaux does a good job at proving to write an enjoyable novel you don’t have to do anything ground-breaking, you don’t need to write something in a brand new style, you just need to do something proven to work.
After going through months of reading complicated story lines from authors such as Lynch, Sanderson and Weeks it was nice to pick up a book rich literally says: 'Right... we have magic, we have action, we have beautiful women. Are you ready? Lets go!' And that's it. No complicated world building, no overly confusing twisting and turning story, no complex magic system... just everything we would expect from fantasy like novels back in the day.
For me Soul Born pressed all the right buttons. As I said over in the forums, Kevin Breaux is one of those authors who has the ability to make you say; 'Damn Fantasy is Cool!’ without reshaping or redefining the genre. All round it is well worth checking out.
Tala, an alluring young elf, was banished from her tribe, hunted and nearly killed by the beasts that dwell in the deep forests, but more than anything else she is a survivor. Joining forces with an ancient elemental power Tala finds herself in the centre of an unrelenting human war. She never wanted any of this.
Flesh like leather and bone as strong as steel Karn, a veteran from the first kingdom to fall, is fuelled by vengeance. While pushing ever headlong into battle Karn begins to recall memories of another life; ghosts that haunt his dreams.
--
All sounds very ‘old school’ fantasy like... right? Well simply put it is. This isn’t a novel that treads new grounds; it isn’t a novel that will create ripples in the genre for its uniqueness – what it is, is an old school fantasy novel written in 2010. Imagine playing Dungeons and Dragons or Baulder’s Gate or anyone of those kinds of PC RPG games. The characters seem blocky; you roll your eyes at the dialogue, but at the same time you enjoy it for what it is and you quickly accept that this is old school and you remember something... you enjoy old school!
That’s how I felt when I first picked up ‘Soul Born’. I quickly found myself thinking lines like; “Human Magic is for Humans,” or “I saw lots of people. I – I think they were ghosts!” for example were a bit cheesy, but after a few chapters I was just enjoying them. Fantasy is popular today because of novels in the Dungeons and Dragons type era... the genre is defined by its blocky roots and its almost pre-defined characters. I very quickly found myself thinking how nice it was to go back in time a bit and read a novel that read like we expect a fantasy novel to read.
The character of Karn is one we have experienced hundreds of times before... a fearless Viking like hero who is aggressive and just wants to destroy evil. Opal is a little more new-age in the sense that she is a beautiful, powerful mage but with a darker side to her and Tala is that female Elve we have all come to love so much.
If you are looking for a Sanderson like writing style or a unique story you won’t find it here. But if you are a fantasy fan, willing to go back and look at what made fantasy great – cheesy lines, over-heroic characters, beautiful and lustrous women, elves, werewolves, dark kings and so on then this is a very good, quick read. I think Kevin Breaux does a good job at proving to write an enjoyable novel you don’t have to do anything ground-breaking, you don’t need to write something in a brand new style, you just need to do something proven to work.
After going through months of reading complicated story lines from authors such as Lynch, Sanderson and Weeks it was nice to pick up a book rich literally says: 'Right... we have magic, we have action, we have beautiful women. Are you ready? Lets go!' And that's it. No complicated world building, no overly confusing twisting and turning story, no complex magic system... just everything we would expect from fantasy like novels back in the day.
For me Soul Born pressed all the right buttons. As I said over in the forums, Kevin Breaux is one of those authors who has the ability to make you say; 'Damn Fantasy is Cool!’ without reshaping or redefining the genre. All round it is well worth checking out.
March 21, 2011
Let me start off by saying that this book is definitely unlike most other books
of this genre. Sometimes I think I've read all the fantasy-type books that I
possibly can. How many more times can I read about the world coming to an end
due to the evil machinations of some dark lord, wizard, or king who is trying to
obtain some great artifact of power which will make him or her unstoppable and
must be stopped by some individual with a destiny to lead the forces of good to
victory? Soul Born does not fit this commonly-used formula. I must admit that
at first it was hard to get used to as I kept expecting the story to go a
certain way based on my pre-conceived notions of how these types of book usually
go. Eventually, I stopped trying to imprint my ideas onto the story though and
sat back and enjoyed the ride.
The story focuses on three different main characters: Opal, a healer and
powerful mage, Karn, a ruthless warrior with a noble heart, and Tala,
a beautiful and cunning elf. A great warlord is leading an enormous army to
conquer the land of Illyia. Opal, Karn, Tala are all trying to stop the
warlord, however, each has their own reasons. This is a world that is full of
competing powers and various races of people with their own agendas and goals
from elves and dark elves, jackalweres, lizard men, mages, giants, and humans.
Each party has a stake in the outcome of the battles being waged across the
land. Opal is faced with the task of answering to a council of mages who have
commanded her to get the man she loves, Karn, to do their bidding. Tala has the
task of finding Karn and exposing him to secrets of his forgotten past while
falling for him at the same time. Karn struggles with being the person chosen
to defeat the great warlord but he is continually plagued by visions and dreams
of another life.
This book definitely gets down to business. If you are looking for an epic tale
full of long explanations and an in-depth narrations of the history behind
Illyria and all of its inhabitants, you won't find it here. The reader is given
just enough information to learn what is important but the action keeps moving
along. At certain times in the story, this left me confused with many
questions. This kept me intrigued though and wanting to keep reading in order
to have my questions answered. I enjoyed being dropped into the middle of an
adventure and slowly discovering the secrets behind the action as the story
progressed.
Soul Born was different from many other books in that important characters may
not easily classify as "good" or "evil". As in real life, sometimes people make
good choices with pure motives and sometimes they make selfish ones that may
hurt others. This led to many twists and kept my mind active throughout the
entire book questioning every move the characters made trying to guess what
secrets were really going on behind the scenes. Their are some secrets left
unresolved though as this book is only the beginning of what looks to be a
thrilling adventure. I recommend you buckle up and hold on tight.
of this genre. Sometimes I think I've read all the fantasy-type books that I
possibly can. How many more times can I read about the world coming to an end
due to the evil machinations of some dark lord, wizard, or king who is trying to
obtain some great artifact of power which will make him or her unstoppable and
must be stopped by some individual with a destiny to lead the forces of good to
victory? Soul Born does not fit this commonly-used formula. I must admit that
at first it was hard to get used to as I kept expecting the story to go a
certain way based on my pre-conceived notions of how these types of book usually
go. Eventually, I stopped trying to imprint my ideas onto the story though and
sat back and enjoyed the ride.
The story focuses on three different main characters: Opal, a healer and
powerful mage, Karn, a ruthless warrior with a noble heart, and Tala,
a beautiful and cunning elf. A great warlord is leading an enormous army to
conquer the land of Illyia. Opal, Karn, Tala are all trying to stop the
warlord, however, each has their own reasons. This is a world that is full of
competing powers and various races of people with their own agendas and goals
from elves and dark elves, jackalweres, lizard men, mages, giants, and humans.
Each party has a stake in the outcome of the battles being waged across the
land. Opal is faced with the task of answering to a council of mages who have
commanded her to get the man she loves, Karn, to do their bidding. Tala has the
task of finding Karn and exposing him to secrets of his forgotten past while
falling for him at the same time. Karn struggles with being the person chosen
to defeat the great warlord but he is continually plagued by visions and dreams
of another life.
This book definitely gets down to business. If you are looking for an epic tale
full of long explanations and an in-depth narrations of the history behind
Illyria and all of its inhabitants, you won't find it here. The reader is given
just enough information to learn what is important but the action keeps moving
along. At certain times in the story, this left me confused with many
questions. This kept me intrigued though and wanting to keep reading in order
to have my questions answered. I enjoyed being dropped into the middle of an
adventure and slowly discovering the secrets behind the action as the story
progressed.
Soul Born was different from many other books in that important characters may
not easily classify as "good" or "evil". As in real life, sometimes people make
good choices with pure motives and sometimes they make selfish ones that may
hurt others. This led to many twists and kept my mind active throughout the
entire book questioning every move the characters made trying to guess what
secrets were really going on behind the scenes. Their are some secrets left
unresolved though as this book is only the beginning of what looks to be a
thrilling adventure. I recommend you buckle up and hold on tight.
March 6, 2011
My personal taste when it comes to fantasy has generally been works that include a great deal of detailed worldbuilding. I love reading about history so when I consume fantasy stories about strange and exotic new worlds I often have the mindset that I looking for historical and geographical snapshots over and above a strong plotline and interesting characters. This is usually what holds my attention in fantasy, because I am always looking for clues, for a broken potsherd that tells me about the way the people in the land lived their lives.
Soul Born is a very focused novel. There are no meandering passages in this book and no exposition that isn't relevant to what's happening. There is no scenic route to get to the destination. The book is the GPS equivalent of telling you the quickest way to get from point A to point B. And baby, it makes the book ROLL.
I'll note here that it took me a little while to appreciate this characteristic. I had to put the book down half way through and think about it. Something about the style of Soul Born then clicked for me, and I enjoyed the hell out of the book. Most fantasy novels have clearly delineated good guys and bad guys, maybe some gray area third party that swings back and forth for a while until finally aligning with one group or the other for the Big Final Battle. Not so in Soul Born: these people are not out for some high falootin' grand ideal, they are, each and every one of them, pushing their own agenda. The result of this is a cast of characters that have a seeming tendency towards erratic actions, but in reality are simply adjusting their plans to the shifting tide of events in the story. If the characters, Karn and Opal in particular, realize that staying the course isn't going to get them what they want, they simply head in a different direction. It's kind of refreshing.
There's no dead wood in the plot. The characters are fun, if sometimes a little reprehensible. The book is action, action, action. It isn't your typical fantasy, and that's a good thing. It really stands out next to everything else on the shelf because it breaks all the standard fantasy tropes.
Thumbs up!
Soul Born is a very focused novel. There are no meandering passages in this book and no exposition that isn't relevant to what's happening. There is no scenic route to get to the destination. The book is the GPS equivalent of telling you the quickest way to get from point A to point B. And baby, it makes the book ROLL.
I'll note here that it took me a little while to appreciate this characteristic. I had to put the book down half way through and think about it. Something about the style of Soul Born then clicked for me, and I enjoyed the hell out of the book. Most fantasy novels have clearly delineated good guys and bad guys, maybe some gray area third party that swings back and forth for a while until finally aligning with one group or the other for the Big Final Battle. Not so in Soul Born: these people are not out for some high falootin' grand ideal, they are, each and every one of them, pushing their own agenda. The result of this is a cast of characters that have a seeming tendency towards erratic actions, but in reality are simply adjusting their plans to the shifting tide of events in the story. If the characters, Karn and Opal in particular, realize that staying the course isn't going to get them what they want, they simply head in a different direction. It's kind of refreshing.
There's no dead wood in the plot. The characters are fun, if sometimes a little reprehensible. The book is action, action, action. It isn't your typical fantasy, and that's a good thing. It really stands out next to everything else on the shelf because it breaks all the standard fantasy tropes.
Thumbs up!
February 14, 2011
Soul Born is the first full-length novel by Kevin James Breaux, and the first of a trilogy. From the moment, I opened this book, I was hard-pressed to put it down. There is typically a pretty predictable formula in fantasy tales, with the battle between good and evil, the struggle for power, the quests for victory and the inevitable hero. While this novel had all of those elements, it definately was so much more. Because of the normal predictability, I kept expecting events to go in certain directions, and they just didn't and I loved that fresh take on fantasy. It was definately not a light and happy tale, but dark with lots of action and unexpected twists. With a lot of epic works, you have a lot of back story before you get to the real meat of the story. I really enjoyed the fact that this story didn't do that, but put you immediately in the story from the very beginning. You learned the secrets and reasons for the unfolding story as you went along and it kept me thoroughly engrossed.
The story revolved around three main characters: Karn (the warrior with the mysterious past), Opal (the enchantress struggling for recognition), and Tala (the elf shunned by her own kind). Each of these characters have a common goal, to destroy an invading warlord before he destroys them and all that they know. There was no clear cut good versus evil with these characters, nor with any of the supporting characters, which only added to the ability to relate to them as people. As in real life, the characters have motives that aren't always pure and are faced with choices that may sometimes be self-serving and hurt others around them. Because of that, some of the characters were sometimes hard to like, but that was as it should be. There times in the story where I felt like I was personally invested in those characters, completely emotionally engaged with them. I absolutely love a story that can pull me in emotionally like that!
The ending was unexpected and great and left me waiting impatiently for the next book!
The story revolved around three main characters: Karn (the warrior with the mysterious past), Opal (the enchantress struggling for recognition), and Tala (the elf shunned by her own kind). Each of these characters have a common goal, to destroy an invading warlord before he destroys them and all that they know. There was no clear cut good versus evil with these characters, nor with any of the supporting characters, which only added to the ability to relate to them as people. As in real life, the characters have motives that aren't always pure and are faced with choices that may sometimes be self-serving and hurt others around them. Because of that, some of the characters were sometimes hard to like, but that was as it should be. There times in the story where I felt like I was personally invested in those characters, completely emotionally engaged with them. I absolutely love a story that can pull me in emotionally like that!
The ending was unexpected and great and left me waiting impatiently for the next book!
April 7, 2011
Having won this book in a competition I was really excited to see what it was all about. I had found out about the author Kevin James Breaux from Twitter and from there I began to read his blog and learnt bits and bobs about the book from there. It sounded interesting and I am a really big fan of the genre fantasy and with all things magic so this book sounded right up my alley.
As soon as I started the book I knew I was in for a some surprises surrounding the characters and the storyline. I loved having the ability to chat and discuss the book with Kevin too it really helped me to find out and engage more with the characters and what they were going through.
All of the characters are interesting and the story is fast paced and edgy! They are all fresh and unique and Kevin has really worked hard to keep the storyline bold and different. I couldn't put it down because it is such a page turner and full of surprises as you read along.
The story discusses how certain characters are deeming their actions as good but just how good are they? Are they just doing what they believe to be right to get something they want and not seeing the bigger picture surrounding their actions?
I loved the book and I really think more people who like the genre should give it a try because it has great characters and the storyline definitely leaves you thinking about things and wondering what is going on right up until you are guided to the truth.
I will be telling people to read it and I think that I will read it alot more than just once!! :D
As soon as I started the book I knew I was in for a some surprises surrounding the characters and the storyline. I loved having the ability to chat and discuss the book with Kevin too it really helped me to find out and engage more with the characters and what they were going through.
All of the characters are interesting and the story is fast paced and edgy! They are all fresh and unique and Kevin has really worked hard to keep the storyline bold and different. I couldn't put it down because it is such a page turner and full of surprises as you read along.
The story discusses how certain characters are deeming their actions as good but just how good are they? Are they just doing what they believe to be right to get something they want and not seeing the bigger picture surrounding their actions?
I loved the book and I really think more people who like the genre should give it a try because it has great characters and the storyline definitely leaves you thinking about things and wondering what is going on right up until you are guided to the truth.
I will be telling people to read it and I think that I will read it alot more than just once!! :D
February 8, 2011
Breaux is a talented writer with vivid descriptions of the worlds he creates and the characters he develops.
Soul Born starts off slow. The conflicts are intriguing, but in a vague "what's going on?" way. It takes awhile to get to a solid hook, but once it does, WATCH OUT!
I couldn't put the book down after that, and I anxiously await the next book in the series. The ending definitely wet my appetite for what's to come.
Soul Born starts off slow. The conflicts are intriguing, but in a vague "what's going on?" way. It takes awhile to get to a solid hook, but once it does, WATCH OUT!
I couldn't put the book down after that, and I anxiously await the next book in the series. The ending definitely wet my appetite for what's to come.
January 1, 2016
First thing to say is that even though it didn't change the rating for the book, I was more than a little relieved to hear that Soul Born is the first book in a three book series. Book 2 is due out in fourth quarter 2011 (Fall/winter) in fact.
When I first read about this the words 'dark fantasy' were first and foremost. And this can definitely be considered that; there's no 'good guy' or 'bad guy', or a sense that one side is any better then the other. Much of the characters are motivated by a selfish goal or concern--in some cases this means acting against the side they've aligned with in order to achieve that goal.
Without giving spoilers, Karn begins with Opal, but he eventually goes with Tala. I liked that Breaux contrasted the emotions that Tala has for Karn with what Opal feels. He doesn't emphasize that one is better then the other, that one has more right then the other. This goes back to what I was saying about how there isn't a 'good' or 'bad' guy. Neither is exactly forthcoming with Karn in regards to who he is or why they need him.
I wanted to know more about Illyia, I was constantly hoping that just a little more information would be given so I could have a better worldview. Its not that Breaux leaves the world vague and unshaped, rather he focuses almost entirely on Opal, Tala and Karn's conflicts. We are given just enough information to understand what's happening--such as the war between Tala's people (the Elves) and the Lizardmen. Considering I'm used to entire chapters dedicated to detailing the history of why the Elves and Lizardmen are fighting, the few short paragraphs Breaux uses to tell us about the war made me blink. This isn't a bad thing, overall it gives the book a tighter focus, just takes a little getting used to.
There are several revelations in the book that left me surprised and eager to read on to see how this now effected things. More than anything else the mystery of Karn's past and his memories were what I wanted to know more about. They came in fragments and snippets, some of them mundane and some of them intense. In the beginning of the book Karn thinks about the fact he clearly remembers his death, but with no visible signs of it nor any linking memories to it, he grows confused. Each subsequent 'memory' builds a larger, rather frightening, picture.
I was a bit taken aback by the ending--I wasn't entirely convinced that what Opal did was necessary (even if she felt it was) nor did I think that what Tala did made much sense. There was no time passage defined, but it felt like Tala suddenly rushed into the decision. It will be interesting to see how it plays out in the next book, though I'm a little wary with the implications.
When I first read about this the words 'dark fantasy' were first and foremost. And this can definitely be considered that; there's no 'good guy' or 'bad guy', or a sense that one side is any better then the other. Much of the characters are motivated by a selfish goal or concern--in some cases this means acting against the side they've aligned with in order to achieve that goal.
Without giving spoilers, Karn begins with Opal, but he eventually goes with Tala. I liked that Breaux contrasted the emotions that Tala has for Karn with what Opal feels. He doesn't emphasize that one is better then the other, that one has more right then the other. This goes back to what I was saying about how there isn't a 'good' or 'bad' guy. Neither is exactly forthcoming with Karn in regards to who he is or why they need him.
I wanted to know more about Illyia, I was constantly hoping that just a little more information would be given so I could have a better worldview. Its not that Breaux leaves the world vague and unshaped, rather he focuses almost entirely on Opal, Tala and Karn's conflicts. We are given just enough information to understand what's happening--such as the war between Tala's people (the Elves) and the Lizardmen. Considering I'm used to entire chapters dedicated to detailing the history of why the Elves and Lizardmen are fighting, the few short paragraphs Breaux uses to tell us about the war made me blink. This isn't a bad thing, overall it gives the book a tighter focus, just takes a little getting used to.
There are several revelations in the book that left me surprised and eager to read on to see how this now effected things. More than anything else the mystery of Karn's past and his memories were what I wanted to know more about. They came in fragments and snippets, some of them mundane and some of them intense. In the beginning of the book Karn thinks about the fact he clearly remembers his death, but with no visible signs of it nor any linking memories to it, he grows confused. Each subsequent 'memory' builds a larger, rather frightening, picture.
I was a bit taken aback by the ending--I wasn't entirely convinced that what Opal did was necessary (even if she felt it was) nor did I think that what Tala did made much sense. There was no time passage defined, but it felt like Tala suddenly rushed into the decision. It will be interesting to see how it plays out in the next book, though I'm a little wary with the implications.
May 1, 2011
From a creative and conceptual standpoint, I have no issues with this novel. As a matter of fact, all three stars are for the unique concept behind this story. The problem for me was simply the writing style was not to my personal taste. The story reads like a video game. There is the continual stacking of action and consequences scenes. For me fantasy must have extensive world building and emotional manipulation. I need to feel the misery and the toll of death on the respective characters. I need to understand why they love or hate not just that they do. I need passion and desperation not knee-jerk instinctual reactions. I want the characters to whisper in my ear and tell me their story.
Mr. Breaux skips all these traditional devices and tells us a tale that is very clearly laid out in his mind. What he did not give me was any reason to care about the people in his story. I only read to the end so I would know what happened. I was prepared for everyone to die and it did not matter one bit. I don't know if Mr. Breaux intended for me to be indifferent but he never seemed to put much effort into capturing my emotions only my curiosity. So I read the story as an investment in a new voice and put aside expectations that I carry based on other more accomplished writers. When I did that, I was able enjoy the scenes much more and appreciate the creative concept of the plot. I noticed that Mr. Breaux loves blood and gore. He uses the word 'gore' so often that I came to expect it anytime there was a fight. It actually made me laugh after awhile. He really liked making things bloody and that showed through in the cataloging of injuries and grossly overstated bodily mayhem. Oh yes, there is plenty of magic and magical fighting.
One of the things that I felt was very well accomplished was the hidden aspects of each character. I was pleased when I discovered that there were not really any true villains or heroes in this tale. The roles kept shifting. I will admit - he did surprise me more than once by flipping a character's script. Again, I have to say, the concept is truly unique and in some ways tricky. Mr. Breaux left himself plenty of room for character development in future stories. I believe that there will be a following for this series. Although I don’t plan to read future installments, I will probably keep up with spoilers. Of course, I reserve the right to change my mind, especially if it’s inexpensive or free.
Mr. Breaux skips all these traditional devices and tells us a tale that is very clearly laid out in his mind. What he did not give me was any reason to care about the people in his story. I only read to the end so I would know what happened. I was prepared for everyone to die and it did not matter one bit. I don't know if Mr. Breaux intended for me to be indifferent but he never seemed to put much effort into capturing my emotions only my curiosity. So I read the story as an investment in a new voice and put aside expectations that I carry based on other more accomplished writers. When I did that, I was able enjoy the scenes much more and appreciate the creative concept of the plot. I noticed that Mr. Breaux loves blood and gore. He uses the word 'gore' so often that I came to expect it anytime there was a fight. It actually made me laugh after awhile. He really liked making things bloody and that showed through in the cataloging of injuries and grossly overstated bodily mayhem. Oh yes, there is plenty of magic and magical fighting.
One of the things that I felt was very well accomplished was the hidden aspects of each character. I was pleased when I discovered that there were not really any true villains or heroes in this tale. The roles kept shifting. I will admit - he did surprise me more than once by flipping a character's script. Again, I have to say, the concept is truly unique and in some ways tricky. Mr. Breaux left himself plenty of room for character development in future stories. I believe that there will be a following for this series. Although I don’t plan to read future installments, I will probably keep up with spoilers. Of course, I reserve the right to change my mind, especially if it’s inexpensive or free.
October 12, 2011
My thoughts... Welcome to a world of good and evil, right and wrong, dark and light. Kevin James Breaux has created a high fantasy world full of mystery, action, violence, love, and deceit.
Readers are introduced to the characters, Opal and Karn in the beginning of the story. Opal is a powerful mage and Karn is a warrior. They seem to be the perfect pair, in love, with a deep respect and passion for each other. However things are not always what they seem to be. When the enchanting elf Tala comes into the picture many paths change course. Another memorable character in the story was Zian, a powerful creature with an iron will and a soft side. The characters were very unpredictable. I found myself switching allegiances often and frequently angered by their actions.
Soul Born takes readers on an animated adventure. The pages of this 306 page novel are packed with action. There is something for everyone. The battle scenes are violent and bloody. The romance is steamy and sultry. The plot is mysterious and will leave you guessing. Breaux did a phenomenal job of world building. I could vividly imagine the lands these characters explore.
I could not end this review without mentioning the end of the story. I was shocked and overwhelmed by the actions of the characters and the results it produced. Hang on to your seats readers, it's gonna be a wild ride.
Readers are introduced to the characters, Opal and Karn in the beginning of the story. Opal is a powerful mage and Karn is a warrior. They seem to be the perfect pair, in love, with a deep respect and passion for each other. However things are not always what they seem to be. When the enchanting elf Tala comes into the picture many paths change course. Another memorable character in the story was Zian, a powerful creature with an iron will and a soft side. The characters were very unpredictable. I found myself switching allegiances often and frequently angered by their actions.
Soul Born takes readers on an animated adventure. The pages of this 306 page novel are packed with action. There is something for everyone. The battle scenes are violent and bloody. The romance is steamy and sultry. The plot is mysterious and will leave you guessing. Breaux did a phenomenal job of world building. I could vividly imagine the lands these characters explore.
I could not end this review without mentioning the end of the story. I was shocked and overwhelmed by the actions of the characters and the results it produced. Hang on to your seats readers, it's gonna be a wild ride.
February 21, 2011
I was lucky enough to pick up this novel last Monday, and stayed glued to the pages until I finished it Wednesday night.What kept me so intrigued by this book? Uniqueness, plenty of action, and a solid storyline. Soul Born breaks from the mold that shapes the vast number of fantasy novels.
The story captivated me easily, as you are tossed right in and learn more as you go. I was also able to connect with the main characters with ease. One thing that makes me crazy within the fantasy genre is bland character molds. I want my characters with a healthy mix of “good” and “evil”, preferably with a blurred line dividing the two – and Soul Born delivered. Opal was definitely my favorite of the main characters!
Soul Born was one of the first dark fantasy novels I’ve read, and it’s done a great job sparking my interest in the “darker” part of the genre. I have already recommended the title to family and friends, now I’m (impatiently) awaiting the next installment of the series!
The story captivated me easily, as you are tossed right in and learn more as you go. I was also able to connect with the main characters with ease. One thing that makes me crazy within the fantasy genre is bland character molds. I want my characters with a healthy mix of “good” and “evil”, preferably with a blurred line dividing the two – and Soul Born delivered. Opal was definitely my favorite of the main characters!
Soul Born was one of the first dark fantasy novels I’ve read, and it’s done a great job sparking my interest in the “darker” part of the genre. I have already recommended the title to family and friends, now I’m (impatiently) awaiting the next installment of the series!
May 16, 2011
Remember when fantasy used to be fun, exciting and enjoyable to read? Kevin Breaux does. His debut novel Soul Born is easy to read, but has a complex story. While fantasy might not be for everyone, Breaux gives us a book full of action adventure twisted together with a mysterious surprise.
I do not want to spoil it, but you are along for the journey believeing one thing and then whammo! Amazing! Brutal!
Soul Born works is the beginning of a series, which Breaux has stated will each have a different feel. Give it a try, sit back relax and just enjoy.
I do not want to spoil it, but you are along for the journey believeing one thing and then whammo! Amazing! Brutal!
Soul Born works is the beginning of a series, which Breaux has stated will each have a different feel. Give it a try, sit back relax and just enjoy.
January 18, 2011
'Soul Born' is the debut novel by Kevin Breaux which is dark high fantasy. The story has 3 main characters who are followed as the plot progresses. They are Opal (a mage), Karn (a mighty warrior) and Tala (a female elf living in exile from her people). The plot evolves with twists and turns and just when you think you know what is going to happen next something completely different happens.
This book is a breathe of fresh air in the genre in my opinion and I recommend it to anyone looking to read a fantasy novel from a new author.
This book is a breathe of fresh air in the genre in my opinion and I recommend it to anyone looking to read a fantasy novel from a new author.
July 10, 2011
I found Soul Born to be surprisingly misleading, I mean that in a good way. I started out thinking it was a bit confusing, backtracking many times to re-read bits in the beginning to finally "get it." That aside, and once I finally "got it," I grew engrossed in the tale, and by the time I reached the end, I'd formed a completely different opinion of one of the lead characters in the book. The end itself, isn't really the end, (and leaves you wanting more) as Mr. Breaux as assured me (and his fans) that there will most definitely be a sequel...or two.
May 28, 2011
Although I usually stick to typical science fiction space opera stories, I decided to read Kevin Breaux's high fantasy tale. I wasn't sure what to expect, but the story pulled me in hook line and sinker and didn't release me until the end. What an enjoyable storyline and likeable (and where appropriate unlikeable) characters. Breaux does a great job keeping things simple, yet pulling off unexpected turns in the plot that leave you guessing up until the very end.
November 3, 2011
Another reviewer asked " if you remember when fantasy was fun"? I do and this book is indeed a fun read. The characters are well drawn with complex motives which aren't fully revealed but are done so as the story moves along. I enjoyed this book and it does remind me of all the things I like about fantasy.
March 31, 2011
I really enjoyed this book. It had interesting characters, most of which who were shades of light/dark. The characters all had varying motives and there was plenty of action. The soul born magic was an intriguing idea and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story progresses in the next book.
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February 1, 2011This looks super interesting. :)
January 3, 2012
Amazing! Though dark fantasy is typically not my genre, Kevin Breaux definitely made me re-evaluate it. It is a great book!
June 8, 2012
Full Review over at Fantasy Book Critic
CLASSIFICATION: Soul Born is a dark epic fantasy novel reminiscent of the works of James Clemens, Paul S. Kemp & R.A. Salvatore.
FORMAT/INFO: Soul Born is 306 pages long divided over thirty-two titled chapters and a Prologue. Narration is in the third person via Opal, Karn and Tala Silverwolf. Soul Born is the opening volume in the Soul Born Saga with the book ending on a proper note. November 30, 2010 marked the Trade Paperback publication of Soul Born via Dark Quest Books. Cover art is provided by Dan Dos Santos.
ANALYSIS: Soul Born is a book that grabbed my attention because of an interesting blurb that described an “epic dark fantasy novel”, and a great cover by Dan Dos Santos. Of course, it’s what’s on the inside that really matters...
Soul Born is centered around three characters: Opal who is training to become more than just an ordinary mage; Karn, a warrior with a faulty memory who is supposed to fight the evil tyrant warlord, Mustaffa; and Tala Silverwolf, an elf banished from her tribe due to undisclosed reasons, and the key behind unlocking Karn’s past. Thankfully, the three main characters—with all of their motivations, plans and actions—are the main draw of the book. Opal in particular, is a shining star who I believe will be a major factor in the rest of the Soul Born Saga.
Story-wise, Soul Born is well plotted, with surprising twists and revelations, especially the ending and middle of the book where the author reveals certain details about Opal and Karn that will change the reader’s perception of them. There’s also the history of the mages which fuels a major plot point and the meaning behind ‘soul born’ laid bare, while the pacing never lets the reader rest. Prose meanwhile, is a bit bumpy at times, but it doesn’t derail the reading experience.
The major concerning factor for me were the coincidences throughout the book. For example, whenever a character needed to get out of a tight spot or needed a certain power or some other form of aid, the author provided it. This issue is what prevented me from enjoying the book as much as I thought I would.
CONCLUSION: Kevin J. Breaux‘s Soul Born is an interesting debut with some good points and some not-so-good points. Unfortunately, the novel was somewhat of a disappointment for me, but there is definitely potential there that could be further realized in the rest of the Soul Born Saga...
October 5, 2011
Soul Born is a fast paced fantasy novel that will keep the reader turning pages and reading far too late into the night. Set in the land of Illyia, the novel tracks three main characters as they fight against an invading warlord who leaves a path of destruction across the land as he works towards his ultimate goal; the destruction of his creators.
The characters are wonderfully brought to life as we learn about them and their various motives throughout the story. Opal is a young mage filled with enormous, but raw magical potential and is being mentored by the mage high council. She is strong willed and will go to any lengths to attain her desires. The biggest of those desires being her deep love for a warrior. Karn is a fierce fighter determined to end the warlord’s destruction of his beloved land. We meet him as he is being nursed back to health by his lover, Opal, after being badly wounded protecting civilians fleeing the warlord. His entire life as he knows it will be turned upside down by a young elf. Tala is an outcast from her elven tribe who has taken refuge in a human town. She meets and befriends Karn. As their relationship grows closer, she is forced to reveal a terrible secret; his true past.
The action keeps the story moving forward at a brisk pace while the slow unveiling of each character’s full motives fuels the reader to keep turning pages. I love the shades of gray the characters are colored with. Opal is a great example of a character driven by her best desires and intentions, but capable of making terrible choices to attain them. I thoroughly enjoyed this novel and am eagerly awaiting the second book in the series.
The characters are wonderfully brought to life as we learn about them and their various motives throughout the story. Opal is a young mage filled with enormous, but raw magical potential and is being mentored by the mage high council. She is strong willed and will go to any lengths to attain her desires. The biggest of those desires being her deep love for a warrior. Karn is a fierce fighter determined to end the warlord’s destruction of his beloved land. We meet him as he is being nursed back to health by his lover, Opal, after being badly wounded protecting civilians fleeing the warlord. His entire life as he knows it will be turned upside down by a young elf. Tala is an outcast from her elven tribe who has taken refuge in a human town. She meets and befriends Karn. As their relationship grows closer, she is forced to reveal a terrible secret; his true past.
The action keeps the story moving forward at a brisk pace while the slow unveiling of each character’s full motives fuels the reader to keep turning pages. I love the shades of gray the characters are colored with. Opal is a great example of a character driven by her best desires and intentions, but capable of making terrible choices to attain them. I thoroughly enjoyed this novel and am eagerly awaiting the second book in the series.
March 6, 2011
Defined as an Epic Fantasy(1&2) , Soul Born is a tale which readers will find quite engaging and adventurous. Kevin James Breaux brings to the stage an interesting cast of characters whose journey will lead readers on a path quite different from that which enthusiasts of the fantasy genre may be used to. Leave behind any pre-conceived ideas as to what direction the typical high fantasy should take and enjoy Breaux’s unusual rendition of good versus evil complete with a myriad of blurred lines betwixt the two.
For this particular reader, there is nothing more satisfying than a reading experience in which one is always second guessing his/her original take on a characters morals, intentions and personality. In Soul Born, Breaux presents characters who initially appear “good” or “evil” but lead readers on a path that continuously questions that initial observation without really and truly defining it in the absolute…The result? It keeps you wanting more!
In Soul Born, readers will not find a lot of historical narration or supporting facts and are provided only with minimal explanation to guide through the story. For this reader, the limited amount of information, for the most part, was sufficient. However, some may find a few sharp twists and turns which may leave even the most intuitive of readers scratching their head in mild confusion.
All in all, Mr. Breaux’s debut fantasy novel proves a great start to a very promising future as a published author!
For this particular reader, there is nothing more satisfying than a reading experience in which one is always second guessing his/her original take on a characters morals, intentions and personality. In Soul Born, Breaux presents characters who initially appear “good” or “evil” but lead readers on a path that continuously questions that initial observation without really and truly defining it in the absolute…The result? It keeps you wanting more!
In Soul Born, readers will not find a lot of historical narration or supporting facts and are provided only with minimal explanation to guide through the story. For this reader, the limited amount of information, for the most part, was sufficient. However, some may find a few sharp twists and turns which may leave even the most intuitive of readers scratching their head in mild confusion.
All in all, Mr. Breaux’s debut fantasy novel proves a great start to a very promising future as a published author!
August 16, 2011
I was sent this book as a (First Reader) on Goodreads.com, but I definitely would have purchased it on my own. The cover is dynamite~bursting with color, as if magic is actually trying to escape the bindings of the book.
The book itself is a quick paced, easy read for all ages over 12, in my opinion. However, by no means is this a YA novel.
This is a classic D&D style read. If you enjoy fantasy books, in the form of RPG's, this book is for you.
I love reading all types of genres, but this was a nice escape into fanatsy for me, since I usually read horror and romance.
Opal is a mage, the Heroine of the novel and without giving too much of a spolier alert, she is kick-butt and edgy. I am glad that at the end, she appears to be pregnant, since this is the first of a trilogy.
Karn, the Hero who has to fight to recover his memory through-out the novel, was a bit of a melancholy character, but I liked that in the Hero. He was gung-ho in the battle scenes and when it came to honor and duty, but constantly battling himself to recover his forgotten past.
There are lizard men, giants, mages and warlocks. The book is rampant with Elven magic, tight chapter sequences and action.
I can't wait for the next two.
Way to go Mr. Breaux!
The book itself is a quick paced, easy read for all ages over 12, in my opinion. However, by no means is this a YA novel.
This is a classic D&D style read. If you enjoy fantasy books, in the form of RPG's, this book is for you.
I love reading all types of genres, but this was a nice escape into fanatsy for me, since I usually read horror and romance.
Opal is a mage, the Heroine of the novel and without giving too much of a spolier alert, she is kick-butt and edgy. I am glad that at the end, she appears to be pregnant, since this is the first of a trilogy.
Karn, the Hero who has to fight to recover his memory through-out the novel, was a bit of a melancholy character, but I liked that in the Hero. He was gung-ho in the battle scenes and when it came to honor and duty, but constantly battling himself to recover his forgotten past.
There are lizard men, giants, mages and warlocks. The book is rampant with Elven magic, tight chapter sequences and action.
I can't wait for the next two.
Way to go Mr. Breaux!
March 5, 2021
I won this copy from the author in a giveaway. I finished this a few days ago and have been mulling over this review. It's a hard one to put into words. I would start off by saying that I don't think it's necessarily one I would have picked up had I seen it at the bookstore. It's just not the typical genre that I read. That said, I did overall like it. I do think that it's something a guy would enjoy more. There's a lot of action, women, wars, sex, etc. And while I like all those things I felt myself wanting more. I know, hard to believe. Mainly, I needed some more world building. Not an abundance, but more. It was hard to picture the surroundings and understand why aspects worked the way they did. I also felt that the characters were a little blocky, but that may be me just being picky. Like I said, not my typical genre but I did overall like the book. The magic was great. The fight scenes were also good. The action and gore was just up my ally. I think guys would really enjoy this novel. I am interested to see more from this author.
*Won in a Goodreads First Reads Giveaway
*Won in a Goodreads First Reads Giveaway
April 10, 2012
Soul Born by Kevin James Breaux
Soul Born is a fun, engaging book in a mythical world where magic and monsters abound. Good and evil are not what they seem and many shades of gray exist for these characters and their motivations. The story starts with action and does not let up through most of the book. I especially liked how the back story slowly gets pieced together, but wish I could have gotten to know a little more about some of the secondary cast.
The cover of the book is an eye catcher, and had I seen this book in the local book store I would have picked it up to find out more about it. I hope the covers for the next books are just as eye catching, maybe featuring the other main characters.
This is a great read if you like a role playing game style of magic and adventure. Buy this book and you won’t be disappointed.
I received the book for free through Goodreads First Reads for a fair and honest review.
Soul Born is a fun, engaging book in a mythical world where magic and monsters abound. Good and evil are not what they seem and many shades of gray exist for these characters and their motivations. The story starts with action and does not let up through most of the book. I especially liked how the back story slowly gets pieced together, but wish I could have gotten to know a little more about some of the secondary cast.
The cover of the book is an eye catcher, and had I seen this book in the local book store I would have picked it up to find out more about it. I hope the covers for the next books are just as eye catching, maybe featuring the other main characters.
This is a great read if you like a role playing game style of magic and adventure. Buy this book and you won’t be disappointed.
I received the book for free through Goodreads First Reads for a fair and honest review.
September 10, 2011
The cover of this book is colorful and magical! I have never read a fantasy, adventure novel before, so this was a first for me. I found this book exciting, mystical and surprising. The author is very detailed and I could actually visualize what was happening which is great. I was picturing a video game made from this book also. The ending was left so that we do want to read the next book to see what else can happen. I enjoyed this and as I kept reading I was more into it. I received the book through Goodreads First Reads giveaway.
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February 2, 2011this book sounds interesting!!
April 25, 2011
Fast moving, well written, "epic" style classic fantasy. Kevin has full control here, so let him take you for a ride.
August 28, 2011
A perfect blend of high and dark fantasy, Soul Born is a delightful read with elves, mages and intrigue. The writing definitely stands out above most contemporary fantasy novels. Thanks, Kevin!
June 15, 2012
3 1/2 STARS
Soul Born is the first book in Kevin J. Breaux’s Soul Saga series. Having read Mr. Breaux series out of order, I already knew the outcome of the book. When reading a book I like the element of surprise and mystery, and to not know the end until I get there! So when I started this book I couldn’t stop thinking about the second book, even though it centers on a different group of characters. Soul Born focuses on three main characters; Opal, Karn and Tala. Opal is a powerful mage, Karn is a warrior and Tala is a beautiful elf that was exiled from her tribe. The readers are dropped into an unexplained scene at the beginning of the novel with Karn fighting the guards, and where his lover Opal comes to rescue him. A lot of things are happening in the first one-hundred pages or so, and the secondary characters were a blur to me. There were so many characters and multiple plots/problems all occurring at once that I felt overwhelmed and confused as what was occurring. For example there was a council of mages, but there were so many, I didn’t know who was who. As I read past the half way mark, everything started to make more sense as information is brought forward.
As I wrote before I’ve read his second novel, Blood Divided before Soul Born…and while they all had the same exceptional elements for a great fantasy novel, Blood Divided was written better in my opinion. The characters didn’t stand out as much as the 2nd book’s characters. The characters in this book like the second book are neither good nor bad. The choices they make might seem to be bad, but then again people do crazy things for love or what they believe is right/in their best interest. After reading about Karn, Opal, and Tala in the second novel, it was great to see how they were before everything happens in book two. While not the best in the series, it is still pretty good. I highly recommend this series to anyone who enjoys an action packed fantasy novel.
Soul Born is the first book in Kevin J. Breaux’s Soul Saga series. Having read Mr. Breaux series out of order, I already knew the outcome of the book. When reading a book I like the element of surprise and mystery, and to not know the end until I get there! So when I started this book I couldn’t stop thinking about the second book, even though it centers on a different group of characters. Soul Born focuses on three main characters; Opal, Karn and Tala. Opal is a powerful mage, Karn is a warrior and Tala is a beautiful elf that was exiled from her tribe. The readers are dropped into an unexplained scene at the beginning of the novel with Karn fighting the guards, and where his lover Opal comes to rescue him. A lot of things are happening in the first one-hundred pages or so, and the secondary characters were a blur to me. There were so many characters and multiple plots/problems all occurring at once that I felt overwhelmed and confused as what was occurring. For example there was a council of mages, but there were so many, I didn’t know who was who. As I read past the half way mark, everything started to make more sense as information is brought forward.
As I wrote before I’ve read his second novel, Blood Divided before Soul Born…and while they all had the same exceptional elements for a great fantasy novel, Blood Divided was written better in my opinion. The characters didn’t stand out as much as the 2nd book’s characters. The characters in this book like the second book are neither good nor bad. The choices they make might seem to be bad, but then again people do crazy things for love or what they believe is right/in their best interest. After reading about Karn, Opal, and Tala in the second novel, it was great to see how they were before everything happens in book two. While not the best in the series, it is still pretty good. I highly recommend this series to anyone who enjoys an action packed fantasy novel.
October 23, 2014
This story centers around Opal a budding mage, and Karn a resurrected soldier. They are antagonized by the council of Archmages, a warlord and meet friends along the way.
Here's my breakdown:
The story is quite good, although I feel that every scene being an intense action scene slowed the pace of the story a bit, and didn't allow for the characters to be more fleshed out.
Opal fell into the red headed magic wielding prodigy trope which exasperated me a little bit, but she carries a lot of the weight of the story. For the first half of the story, she engages in all the battles, all the conspiracies, and saves everyone's ass, which I did appreciate.
I wish that her romance and history with Karn had been fleshed out a little more, I didn't really believe that there was anything romantic between them, until about 75% of the book, and I still wasn't convinced. They just didn't feel like they were in love, or connected to each other through anything but duty.
I wish there were more characters of color. There was one black character, and she was a slave princess. I want more.
Some parts of the story felt rushed, particularly the psychological and romantic parts which are essential in the down parts of a novel that can help us get to know and relate to the characters better.
While the story kept me wanting to read more, I do wish that I'd had a chance to really get to know the main characters better. The descriptions of magic were excellent and the fight scenes were also really well written.
Here's my breakdown:
The story is quite good, although I feel that every scene being an intense action scene slowed the pace of the story a bit, and didn't allow for the characters to be more fleshed out.
Opal fell into the red headed magic wielding prodigy trope which exasperated me a little bit, but she carries a lot of the weight of the story. For the first half of the story, she engages in all the battles, all the conspiracies, and saves everyone's ass, which I did appreciate.
I wish that her romance and history with Karn had been fleshed out a little more, I didn't really believe that there was anything romantic between them, until about 75% of the book, and I still wasn't convinced. They just didn't feel like they were in love, or connected to each other through anything but duty.
I wish there were more characters of color. There was one black character, and she was a slave princess. I want more.
Some parts of the story felt rushed, particularly the psychological and romantic parts which are essential in the down parts of a novel that can help us get to know and relate to the characters better.
While the story kept me wanting to read more, I do wish that I'd had a chance to really get to know the main characters better. The descriptions of magic were excellent and the fight scenes were also really well written.
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