I had such high hopes for this book after reading the synopsis, unfortunately the book failed to deliver. I enjoy a good BDSM book, but the sexual interactions between Jake and Faye were borderline abusive. I completely disliked the main characters. Jake was abusive and Faye was a doormat. Not exactly strong characters you want to see succeed. However my biggest complaint is that there was no real emotion throughout the entire book. There was no reason for me TO like Jake and Faye. I probably could have handled the painful sex if Jake had bothered to cuddle Faye afterward rather than push her around and give her cold orders. No explanation was ever given for Jake's lack of respect towards Faye nor his seeming hurry to trick her into his life. Faye was just as bad with her refusal to stand up for herself and bland acceptance of everything that was being done to her.
The lack of world building left me wondering what all the fuss was about with these Immortals. This book could have benefited from more background explanations (what is the hierarchical structure of the Immortals, what is the hurry with claiming a mate, why are the Immortals confined, etc, etc.) and less focus on moving from one humiliating sex scene to the next. I have to agree with another reviewer about wanting to smack the majority of the characters.
All told - this is a book better skipped.