In the shadow of a troubled past, Brielle, a radiant young woman, yearned for the day when she could break free from her parents' suffocating grip. The moment Troy entered her life, he ignited a burning passion within her and taught her what it meant to truly live and love. Together, they were inseparable, and the very thought of a world without him seemed unimaginable. But when fate dealt a cruel blow, Brielle's world shattered in an instant, leaving her heartbroken and mourning the loss of both her unborn child and the love that had become her lifeline.
Desperate to heal, Brielle embarked on a new chapter in a distant city, vowing never to let love ensnare her heart again. Yet, destiny had other plans. When she crossed paths with Khalil, an enigmatic, wealthy man driven by ambition, she discovered that perhaps there was life beyond her heartache.
Khalil, a man who valued success above all else, had grown accustomed to the superficial beauty that surrounded him. He never imagined settling down or finding his equal in the women who graced his life—until Brielle. From the moment he laid eyes on her, he knew she was unlike anyone he had ever met, awakening a longing he never knew existed.
Together, they explored the uncharted depths of a love that transcended all they had ever known. But one fateful night, a simple misunderstanding threatened to shatter their hard-won happiness, leaving them to question the very foundation of their love. Was it genuine, or just a fleeting illusion?
Embark on an emotional odyssey with Brielle and Khalil as they navigate the turbulent waters of love, loss, and the unexpected journeys that life has in store
This book needs serious editing. It was like I was reading a rough draft. This cannot be edited at all. The story is okay but whew I think I know who the culprit is.
This is one of my favorite Authors. The storyline was on point along with the character development. However there were too many grammatical error's, contradictions and she also got the characters name wrong a few times. Brielle was grieving the loss of her first love, trying to complete college, as well as dealing with the trauma from her childhood. She didn't realized that her roommate's were jealous and she invited a house full of snakes to live with her. Ryan was cool at first and supposed to be Brielle best friend. She pushed Brielle to start dating again but it seems when she saw how close Brielle was getting with Khalil. Ryan was became envious and close to Jayde hoe ass. Which is crazy because if it was for Brielle. Ryan would've still been stuck in a one bedroom apartment with her alcoholic parents, working a dead end job. Jayde jealousy, messiness, and hoeness was shown from the beginning and Lena was a follower. Khalil was all in and smitten with Brielle. He even let Krystal crazy ass go. However a misunderstanding and Khalil running back to Krystal may mess up what him and Brielle was building. I'm glad Brielle sister was around because Jayde deserved that ass whooping. Khalil found out what happened to Brielle towards the end. I'm curious to know which one of those jealous roommate's had her drugged.
Kevina, oh wee this read right here was so good to me. Brielle, never had it easy from a young girl to a grown up. Having something tragic happen in her life could have turned her all the way out but she stuck to her guns and was on her grind. Unfortunately, her heart was just kind and she thought she was helping her friends when in reality, they wanted her life. Never thinking her heart could open again meeting Khalil Brielle didn't think they would be anything other than friends. Khalil, was in his feelings with his situation until meeting Brielle, now do to a lapse in judgement on his part he has broken Brielle but will she be able to come back from. Let's see what happens next, will the snakes get caught in their mess ? Will Khalil be able to stand on his promise? 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
With friends like that, who needs enemies? Bri, is the sweetest person, but has gotten the bad end of the stick, yet again. Khalil, I am so disappointed in you, SMH. Ryan, now who has had your back all of your life and this is how you do her, snake! Jayde, you are who you are!! Krystal, baby you need to build your self esteem. I know we have allowed a man to dog us at one point or another, but geesh!! Kenya, yeah you need to work on yourself as well. Joe is out here handing out d@@@ like its candy. Now back to Khalil, you should've known your girl better than that. He knew what type of person she is, but yet you allowed your pride and what you thought was going on put you in a bad space with the one you said you wanted. Krystal is about to be on some OTHER ish now. Bri my sweet Brielle. Just part 2 me please.
I'm disappointed in Khalil. He should know Bri better than anybody and know that she wouldn't be eager to have sex with just anyone. Instead of him running back to Krystal he should have been trying to figure out why his girl acting out of character. He just don't know the mess he done caused by doubling back cause Krystal can't be trusted. I just prey her plan doesn't work. I got a feeling it was Ryan. He been acting real salty since Bri been with KB. Much as Bri done looked out for her, they all would have to go especially Jayde. I like Joe but he needs to leave Jayde lil ho self alone. I can't wait to see how things play out. 💓💓
Damn this book was good I love Bri and KB together. I hope they can fix there relationship and she keeps the baby. I’m sure Jayde was the one who drugged her. However she should know not to drink anything she left unattended. I also don’t like how they pushed her to drink the liquor so really none of them are her friends because Ryan and her sister should of told her not to drink it. That damn KRYSTAL ain’t shit and I hope she doesn’t end up pregnant sense she didn’t take the plan b pill . I’m also wondering how long she had it in her mouth because some of it should have desolved. I hope part two comes out soon.
Bri has snakes all around her including her supposed to be best friend. Those chicks really set her up and put her in a dangerous situation all because of jealousy. Khalil was bae for me but he f@&ked up really bad with how he reacted to the situation with Bri and back slide with that delusional trick Krystal on some get back now he has loss woman and may have possibly gotten Krystal pregnant hopefully he can redeem himself and things work out in the end for him and Bri..
I feel for Bri, but Khalil supposedly to be the mature one and he's acting like a little boy! Krystal has no goals set. Ryan supposed to be the BFF but she's jealous as heck now the Bri has found another love! More than happy that Bri has her sister, Stacey, because Jayde is a snake and should have been put out of the house along with Lena. Joe need to grow up, but how will Khalil potentially handle Krystal being pregnant along with Bri, things area pit to get real!
Listen......the typos almost took me out. I don't think there was a page without at least one. In part 2 please try proof reading for a more enjoyable experience. I enjoyed reading this book and feel it can be redeemed. Jealousy can make folk do some hateful things. I enjoy books by this author.
I really enjoyed this book! I love Bri and KB. I really wish KB didn’t step out on her with that chick Krystal. Ugh! He should have known Bri wouldn’t do him dirty like that. I couldn’t stand Jayde! She seems like a desperate and just a hater. I can’t wait for part 2! I’m thinking maybe Ryan told the guys to spike her drink!
I couldn't even get through the dam book before half way thru i stopped because I had enough with all the dam errors like sheesh did you even proofread the book at least once, just a dam shame. Im so disappointed because the book seemed like it was gonna be good. Smh I'm returning it and will never read another book by this Author
This was a good book, however there were so many grammatical errors that it made it hard to read. Every couple of sentences, I was trying to figure out what was what. Incentive for insensitive; wrong names…etc. it was a lot. I hope the next book in the series is better.
Great read now I got wait for book 2 poor Bri will she get man that love.what will. Side women do now . What Bri do when she they meet up.the surprise that only Bri what will kb do then am spoil I need know how this will end for them
Yeah I need part 2. Bri needs to pick better friends . I bet any money it was Ryan who did that to Bri. Now I'm mad at Khalil. And he better make it right. And Krystal needs to get handled like Stacy did Jayde.
It was ok I literally couldn’t get pass all the errors! This book needs to be sent back to editing or proofread! It has so much potential. The story line is good but all the errors take away from the book.
Damn!! The fact that she been knew her roommates wasn't sh!t, is all the mire reason why she should have never been out wit them. This wasn't the first time they showed their colors. As much as I don't lime Crystal she aint wrong if he gone keep running to her.
I need part 2 ASAP. This was a banger here. Loved it from beginning to the end. They always say you can’t live with a bunch of women. Can’t wait to read more from this author
great story once you get past the spelling errors. I almost stopped reading because of repeating sentences and misspellings. Once those are fixed, I would be willing to give five stars. Definitely will read part two.
Great book. Love the relationship with Bri and Khalil until he messed up with Krystal. Krystal is one desperate chick. Bri's roommates are all snakes. Lots of grammatical errors. Can't wait for book 2
This I was a pretty good read with the exception of the grammar mistakes. Names were mixed up and words were misspelled. I can’t believe that Ryan switched up in the end.
Omg i cant believe those so called friends of Brielle. I hope she listens to KB. I hope he Eliminates Krystal she crazy.. i hope she can tell Kb she prego before Krystal act real crazy.
So reading this book would flow good if there wasn’t so many grammar errors. It truly took away from the story line. It’s okay to make mistakes but the amount of errors in this story wasn’t a mistake. Slow down and read over your book before uploading.
I liked this one it’s really interesting but then the typos happen and then the mixed characters happens and it’s really frustrating when your reading so o will review when and if I make to the 3 Happy reading
I am enjoying the book so far and looking forward to reading the next part. The rating is because there are so many errors. Double strikes and character mix-ups occur throughout the book.
This was my first time reading a book by Kevina and sadly it will be my last. The book was good really good but it had waaaaayyyyyyyy to many errors that made it hard to keep focus on this book and I hate that because I can see the series potential.
This was good well written couples full of drama well match for each other drama action looking forward to see part two slot drama coming enjoyed reading
Wow, Kevina this was powerful!!!! I cannot wait for Part 2. I think her bestie is the one who drugged her. Her sister Stacey is a beast. Great work and AWESOME job.
This was a semi good read if you can make it past the editing errors I am looking forward to part 2 I just hope the editing and proof reading is better