Hated it! Not even the fact that this was a majorly religious story, it was so boring. I didn't feel connected to anyone or care what happened to any of the characters. I did 'pray' that Shiloh would die off and someone better take her place though. I just couldn't stand her, not sure how anyone could. Don't really get where the title for this one came from either. It was just so boring and dragged. Lots of skimming happened when it came to all the repeated religious talk, so annoying btw.
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Shiloh was really annoying. She was constantly complaining and getting upset over every little thing (that really made no sense for her to mad about). Or calling a group of people names...to one of those people. Her comment of "everybody's sick or dying or struggling with something. It's not normal!" What in the world was she even talking about? She was really stupid at times also. I mean I get that she'd been in Japan for two years but still, she was in NY prior to that and born in the US. Yet in Virginia, just a few states down, she acts like she's on another planet. Some of the food items she sees or things people say, would have her constantly saying "huh" or "what.”
An example:
When she finds out that Wade and her half sister had already picked out the casket and whatnot for her mother's funeral. She gets angry over that. Please!
Or her thinking that baby sheep were "sheeplets?" Really?
She was so full of herself because she had been a reporter at some fancy place. Now she has nothing BECAUSE OF HER OWN FAULT and basically acts like she's better than everyone else. I'm surprised she had any friends at all.
Or her "seeing red” when Adam was telling her about the kind of women that men in that area would respect. Why in the world was she getting upset? I mean it's not like she was going around showing all her goods off. Who cares.
Or her wondering if a whole chicken was safe to eat? Seriously? She's never eaten chicken before?
There were several mess-ups involving no spaces in between words and a few misspelled words.
Questions/Comments:
Carlos had a new female roommate and at first Shiloh didn’t see any issue with this. How? It's a good thing to trust your significant other but this would be a bit much.
How did Shiloh ever fall in love with Carlos? That’s what I'd like to know. He was a total jerk throughout the time he was mentioned. Putting down her awards she received, having her always meet him at places, and not bothering to call her when she left the country. I mean seriously. Although the only thing I remember reading about was the fact that Carlos was gorgeous. Shiloh never really said anything about specific traits or anything about his person that she loved. Strange.
What was Shiloh's middle name? People were constantly asking and she would make one up, so what was it really? I don't remember the author ever saying.
Shiloh said how awful her mother was while she was growing up. How her mother would pack her an onion for lunch. Of course she couldn't eat that and after they got rid of the vending machines, she would end up going hungry. Um...what kind of school was she going to? During lunch all the schools I know about served you a lunch. We already knew that she had $$ for food, but at first spent it on the snack food. They left so she doesn't buy the lunch food?
Why was she so upset when she found out her mother died? I mean again, she wasn't close whatsoever. She didn't call, talk, write, visit or anything when it came to her mother. That didn't make sense to me.
When Kyoko offered to call Dave to let him know about Shiloh's mother, Shiloh said, 'Kyoko had suddenly moved beyond crabby office lunch mate to friend.' I never got the impression that they weren't anything BUT friends. So that comment didn't seem right.
Dave congratulated her on her story on the Prime Minister's wife. She internally responded with "Some other time I'd celebrate." Why would she celebrate when she didn't really write the story? I don't even understand how she thought she could have gotten away with using someone else's story like that.
Kyoko had said that it was a bad idea that Carlos was living with an attractive female. THEN the reader learns “Kyoko struck me as the last person on earth to object to Carlos's female roommate." Huh?
Shiloh talked to Fay for the first time on the phone while she was still in Tokyo. Yet prior to them hanging up, Fay responded with "Sleep well..." How did she know it was night time there? I could understand if Fay called her but it was the other way around.
Shiloh considered her mother still weird because she lived in an area that housed a lunatic asylum? I mean I kept rereading through the popular things in Virginia and Staunton, and to me, there wasn't anything I would consider weird.
Shiloh and Fay were chatting and Fay asked her if she wanted to go to her mother's house. Shiloh ended up saying yes, then "Mrs. Whatever is next door. I'm worm out." What was she even talking about there?
All the Jebus talk. Wow! I hadn't realized that this was a religious book and yeah...so much. Shiloh constantly asking every person she met (or so it seemed) whether they were Christian or believed in God was really annoying. And all the talk, specifically the "He loves you... died for you, for your sins." Why would she even care? I'm not religious whatsoever but with that constantly being said, it was really annoying. Needless to say, I basically skipped over most of the Jebus talk and also the entire conversation Shiloh had with Adam's brother.
"'God.' My lips moved again. Why on earth I was talking to him, I didn't know." Um, there are times when non-religious people say 'god' in a rhetorical kind of way or to mean something else. At least I know I do. Doesn't mean you're speaking to 'him.'
Mess-up: At one point Shiloh said that she dated Carlos for ten months, this was after Kyoko said it was eight months. Then later on goes back to saying they dated for only eight months.
What was with her always thinking people thought of her as a Pagan?
When she went to interview for The Green Tree restaurant, what was she expecting she would be doing?
How does she not know what starch was? She thought he was talking about cornstarch? Seriously? I don't iron clothes but even I know what that is. Man I really couldn't stand Shiloh. She didn't deserve all the kind people that befriended her in Va.
When the rose bushes were dying but the roots were probably still alive, she asked “Like that's going to make any difference." Again seriously? Does she not even know how a plant grows? I mean the basics?
She doesn't know about so much common sense kind of stuff yet knows the analogy of “Would you give your little child anything she asked for?" Even I've never heard that one before.
When the rednecks attacked Shiloh, what were they talking about when they said, "See how much she's got on 'er! I bet she's loaded!" What did she have on her? She wasn't wearing jewelry, had no purse...
How did those frozen peas last so long?
"It ain't what I wanted most. (That being children) Or Becky either. We want a life spent lovin' Him." I don't even know what to say about that statement.
When Shiloh was talking to Adam's brother, why was she so surprised when she found out that he had spoke of her to his family? Um, she'd been there for a while now, what did she expect?
How did she still miss Carlos? And maybe love him? Again, here's a perfect example of how stupid Shiloh was!
Lastly, how was Rick still hungry and WANT to eat while he was in so much pain?
Again, Crap!