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Dark Moon #3
Alpha Nocturne's Contracted Mate: His Fated Luna
"Fuck, Ada…"
"Brad... oh, fuck... deeper... harder!" Ada's shrill voice begged between breathy moans.
The banging of the headboard against the wall intensified as Ann froze.
No... it couldn't be!
She took a deep breath and nudged the door a little more. Her chest felt like it would explode as she held her breath whilst the crack widened.
When it revealed her sister lying underneath Ann's husband-to-be, her hands flew to her mouth to stifle the gasp of horror as her heart shattered instantly.
As Brad roared his release inside her sister, Ada turned her head towards the door with a smirk.
An icy chill descended over Ann as if a bucket of ice water had been thrown over her and she stood and stared, her eyes wide and mouth slightly open in disbelief.
Ada lifted her hand and waved in Ada's direction with a smug smile plastered on her face as Brad collapsed on top of her, kissing her neck tenderly.
Is there anything you can do if your mate had sex with your sister?
"Brad... oh, fuck... deeper... harder!" Ada's shrill voice begged between breathy moans.
The banging of the headboard against the wall intensified as Ann froze.
No... it couldn't be!
She took a deep breath and nudged the door a little more. Her chest felt like it would explode as she held her breath whilst the crack widened.
When it revealed her sister lying underneath Ann's husband-to-be, her hands flew to her mouth to stifle the gasp of horror as her heart shattered instantly.
As Brad roared his release inside her sister, Ada turned her head towards the door with a smirk.
An icy chill descended over Ann as if a bucket of ice water had been thrown over her and she stood and stared, her eyes wide and mouth slightly open in disbelief.
Ada lifted her hand and waved in Ada's direction with a smug smile plastered on her face as Brad collapsed on top of her, kissing her neck tenderly.
Is there anything you can do if your mate had sex with your sister?
- GenresFantasy
208 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 10, 2023
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May 18, 2025
Overall, the story plot and idea is interesting, however, the execution of the character development for the FMC was poor. Ann is annoying, really stupid, and puts herself into stupid situations that EVERYONE around her warns her against, yet she ALWAYS decides to do the thing that either(falsely) incriminates her or risks her mental and physical well-being. Her thought process is frustrating and stupid, and her personality is insufferable.
October 24, 2024
I'm confused why the author decided to go the route to let Ann be so freaking stupid. You know Ada and Narcissist (pun intended) is after you. Wtf would you pick up some strange mf who you yourself said looks strange. I hate these author who pretend like their mc are so strong and smart when they make the stupidest decisions known to mankind. And I had already figured that Ann was Adam actual mate.
March 26, 2023
This story "series" originated as a web novel. I'm glad I didn't have to impatiently wait on chapter uploads, I would have definitely lost interest.
Currently, 174-175 chapters and the developing story has no resolution and have ended with too many questions.
Am I invested enough to continue and wait for another NO.
Adam and Ann, the Alpha's was fun reading their developing relationship. Ann's wolf Maeve when she is given her voice in the story, it is fun and spicy. Too bad Ann didn't listen to her inner wolf's warnings would have saved a lot of eye rolling moments.
Lexi"s and Allen's story has the promise to be even more because of Lexi teasing attitude.
While I enjoyed the idea of the story, I became frustrated with the story development at times. The plot could be excellent, but it seems the author has ideas that randomly manifest and writes it in that it adds a different unnecessary direction to the story. Definitely needs more focus to eliminate those head scratching moments.
Currently, 174-175 chapters and the developing story has no resolution and have ended with too many questions.
Am I invested enough to continue and wait for another NO.
Adam and Ann, the Alpha's was fun reading their developing relationship. Ann's wolf Maeve when she is given her voice in the story, it is fun and spicy. Too bad Ann didn't listen to her inner wolf's warnings would have saved a lot of eye rolling moments.
Lexi"s and Allen's story has the promise to be even more because of Lexi teasing attitude.
While I enjoyed the idea of the story, I became frustrated with the story development at times. The plot could be excellent, but it seems the author has ideas that randomly manifest and writes it in that it adds a different unnecessary direction to the story. Definitely needs more focus to eliminate those head scratching moments.
March 23, 2023
Too expensive for the quality and quantity
Author can't decide if the story is in 1st or 3rd person.
The sex scenes are steamy, and there aren't a gross amount of grammatical and spelling errors. However; the price is ridiculous for an unknown author without an editor on a book that isn't even printed on paper.
The books are short and run into each other in a way that tells you that they started on Dreame or Goodnovel and just got shoved onto Amazon.
Which is super disappointing, because typically Amazon stands behind the quality of a product... but not these over priced Bodice Rippers
While I was enjoying the story, I doubt I will look for #4
Author can't decide if the story is in 1st or 3rd person.
The sex scenes are steamy, and there aren't a gross amount of grammatical and spelling errors. However; the price is ridiculous for an unknown author without an editor on a book that isn't even printed on paper.
The books are short and run into each other in a way that tells you that they started on Dreame or Goodnovel and just got shoved onto Amazon.
Which is super disappointing, because typically Amazon stands behind the quality of a product... but not these over priced Bodice Rippers
While I was enjoying the story, I doubt I will look for #4
May 2, 2023
Can I say WOW I knew that they were meant to be but Dam how could she be so cold to him, She kinda asked for it and never let him explain then to believe the worst in him so glad Lexi was there to set her straight and hopefully make her see she screwed up. But I dont like that they let the mom live she is gonna come back and kick them in the butt somehow. Cant wait to read final book again so worth not paying per chapter all 4 books still cheaper then 5 chapters in Dreame glad she made the books this way
April 17, 2025
In a high drama, brain candy kind of way this is fine. However, it is sad that the story is broken by chapter count rather than narrative arcs and that the conflicts all result from our main lady being the dumbest version possible. I mean her wolf says this is a bad idea, her mate says don't do this, her best friend screams at her, and deep down she knows it is a gamble... but she does it anyway. Too dumb to live so it doesn't matter how active her sex life is.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 29, 2025
Interesting
Good writing style . It holds your attention but make you want to wonder if Ann will ever wise up .
I think Allen is Liza mate . Looking forward to how that unfolds .
I’m hoping book four will be the final . These books are getting g more and more expensive . Whatever I pay for on Amazon when it’s deducted from my account is twice or 2 1/2 times more .
Good writing style . It holds your attention but make you want to wonder if Ann will ever wise up .
I think Allen is Liza mate . Looking forward to how that unfolds .
I’m hoping book four will be the final . These books are getting g more and more expensive . Whatever I pay for on Amazon when it’s deducted from my account is twice or 2 1/2 times more .
July 28, 2024
interesting story
Interesting story
Poorly edited, very very R+ rated though I do appreciate the mature content warnings on those chapters. I now avoid them.
It is a shame as the story stands well without the porn.
Interesting story
Poorly edited, very very R+ rated though I do appreciate the mature content warnings on those chapters. I now avoid them.
It is a shame as the story stands well without the porn.
September 4, 2024
The Dark Moon Series
I enjoyed the first 3 in this series and the story line. The books have a few misspelled words or incorrect names but overall a great read. I hope the rest of the series is just as captivating.
I enjoyed the first 3 in this series and the story line. The books have a few misspelled words or incorrect names but overall a great read. I hope the rest of the series is just as captivating.
July 26, 2025
Dark Moon Series
I first started reading this novel on my phone, but gave up when it became to expensive, very happy to be able to read it on my Kindle. Really love the books. Will follow this author in the future.
I first started reading this novel on my phone, but gave up when it became to expensive, very happy to be able to read it on my Kindle. Really love the books. Will follow this author in the future.
September 6, 2026
The three tied in nicely
Overall great read. It took three "books" but they've landed well.
I wish she had a little more grace for her father given the deception, but it is what it is.
Well done.
Overall great read. It took three "books" but they've landed well.
I wish she had a little more grace for her father given the deception, but it is what it is.
Well done.
February 22, 2023
Great story.
Very captivating story. Best book I have read in awhile.. Can hardly wait for the story to continue. LOVE Lexi.
Very captivating story. Best book I have read in awhile.. Can hardly wait for the story to continue. LOVE Lexi.
February 26, 2023
Wonderful story
The three books were wonderful to read with many ups and downs but such a fun and interesting story line with great full characters main and supporting
The three books were wonderful to read with many ups and downs but such a fun and interesting story line with great full characters main and supporting
March 24, 2023
Just binge read these three books and can’t wait for Lexi and Allen’s storyyy… btw she better end up with Allen and not Greyson or I’ll cry🥺.. anyone know when their story is gonna be released??
June 10, 2023
Price too high for an unknown author relying on steamy scenes for sales. Must be an online app story uploaded here without considering the standards here
August 2, 2023
addicting!
Love the story flow and detail within the writing and I am excited to read the rest of the series.
Love the story flow and detail within the writing and I am excited to read the rest of the series.
September 16, 2023
Great story
I love the characters, the books need better proofing reading and editing as the errors and inconsistencies can be distracting.
I love the characters, the books need better proofing reading and editing as the errors and inconsistencies can be distracting.
November 14, 2023
good read
Couldn’t put it down, I’ve downloaded the rest of the series to avoid delays. anxiously waiting to start the next book.
Couldn’t put it down, I’ve downloaded the rest of the series to avoid delays. anxiously waiting to start the next book.
July 13, 2024
Book 3 of 7
Great story and great characters. This a talented author and she will only get better. Get the books and leave your reviews.
Great story and great characters. This a talented author and she will only get better. Get the books and leave your reviews.
September 2, 2024
Great read
May 26, 2025
I liked it
Lots of twists and turns in this one, got a tad stale towards the end. But I liked it. On to the next one!
Lots of twists and turns in this one, got a tad stale towards the end. But I liked it. On to the next one!
August 15, 2025
Great Continuation
If read carefully you will be able to decipher the errors. But this section has as many as first 50 chapters. I suggest a good editing for any future books.
If read carefully you will be able to decipher the errors. But this section has as many as first 50 chapters. I suggest a good editing for any future books.
November 24, 2025
with each book im more dissapointed and its harder to read it
January 16, 2026
The story is really getting better now. definitely enjoying Anne's journey. she's starting to get less annoying. Love Lexi!! she is by far my favorite character right now!
November 18, 2024
Typos are fine but for someone who's English is her second language I would appreciate if there are no grammatical errors 😭
For a female alpha, why is she weak. She kept dismissing her wolf's warning 🙄
🔥 Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
The first scene is 🥵. I'm not gonna divulge my kinks here 🤣
For a female alpha, why is she weak. She kept dismissing her wolf's warning 🙄
🔥 Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
The first scene is 🥵. I'm not gonna divulge my kinks here 🤣
May 20, 2026
Let’s talk about that betrayal in Book 3...
Can we just discuss how much of a villain Ada has become? Waving at Ann while being caught with Brad? That is a level of malice I wasn't expecting. This installment of the Dark Moon series really leans into the "Fated Luna" title but with a brutal twist.
As Ann deals with the icy chill of disbelief, the pacing of the story just explodes. It’s no longer just a contract; it’s a battle for self-respect and survival against the people who should have loved her most. A.E. Randell knows exactly how to write a scene that stays with you long after you close the book.
Can we just discuss how much of a villain Ada has become? Waving at Ann while being caught with Brad? That is a level of malice I wasn't expecting. This installment of the Dark Moon series really leans into the "Fated Luna" title but with a brutal twist.
As Ann deals with the icy chill of disbelief, the pacing of the story just explodes. It’s no longer just a contract; it’s a battle for self-respect and survival against the people who should have loved her most. A.E. Randell knows exactly how to write a scene that stays with you long after you close the book.
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