I absolutely love this book... I feel Robert Thurston and Blaine Lee Pardoe are this series' strongest writers.
Diana Pryde is without a doubt one of the most compelling female characters in the BattleTech universe. There is so much that stands between this woman and what she wants... culture, genetics, emotions, it's really a story about a character overcoming every hurdle thrown their way. But it never makes her just this super-powered "mary sue" character, she earns it... she's helped along the way and she fights for everything she gains.
The dialogue is solid and moves at a brisk pace, the setting is well described while leaving enough to allow your mind to create fantastic landscapes and architecture. It delves deeper into Clan Jade Falcon's oddly progressive crusader society, allowing the worker and scientist caste an incredible amount of leniency and outright freedoms. This book delves straight into how Jade Falcon is evolving to deal with Freebirth persons in the warrior caste, lead by the fact Aidan Pryde once masqueraded as a free birth when he was solahma.
It's an incredible journey into an interesting and alien culture to our own, yet born of ours in a logical way. I can't say enough good about this book... it is the best in the BattleTech series, it has the best to offer. Action, drama, romance, politics, intrigue and mystery... betrayal and reconciliation. It's one of my favourite reads, and is a book I pick up again from time to time to re-read it.
It is a horrible shame how that hack killed Diana Pryde off in the "dark age" series... the guy literally forgot Diana Pryde existed and wrote that she died in a shuttle when they brought Dark Age around. Just... disgusting misuse of a character and world.