That is one misleading cover. Spoiler alert, 3 Nephi 11 does not happen until the third act of this 497 page brick of a book. Page 466 to be exact. It is spiritual, of course. I can't snark on the most celebrated appearance of the Lord in scripture but like this author's third book, "Peter" it felt like she was checking off a laundry list of required 3 Nephi scenes when Jesus appears to the Nephites and then, just like that, it's THE END. All that build up for just 31 pages of the MAIN REASON we bothered picking this book up for.
So, yes, be prepared to have some issues with the author's pacing.
Our story opens in 17 BC yet the reader will have to wait until page 365 before the three days of darkness arrive. The main character is not a girl named Kiah (Kee-yah) as I'd been pronouncing in my mind all this time, knowing he was a boy as this story is told in first person, but his name is pronounced Kiah (ki-yuh, and his full name won't be revealed until act three) and he is a young boy at the opening who wishes for a war as he is desperate to prove himself in glorious battles, as long as it doesn't involve snakes. He hates snakes. Remember that.
He also has little desire for reading and studying scriptures in synagogue school, preferring to be out exploring the jungle hills or hunting game so his humble Nephite village might have food. His parents divorced, you might say. Father abandoned the family leaving Kiah and his older brother to care for their mother who is a faithful member of the church. Their grandfather also provides for the family and does his best to atone for his wicked son's rejection of the Proclamation to the Family. These family dynamics will be further dramatized later, especially when it is revealed that deadbeat dad's full name is Giddianhi but for the purposes of this story he might as well be Darth Vader. For those that haven't studied their Book of Mormon for awhile, Giddianhi was chief of the Gadianton Robbers who wrote that ridiculous, self-congratulating letter to righteous Governor Lachoneus in 3 Nephi chapter 3. "Join me," he urges Kiah who is now firm in the faith, "and I will complete your training as a true warrior!" (p. 426) Kiah, of course, tells dad where he can go and he dies on the battlefield while Kiah lives to see another day.
The only reason to keep turning pages is to find out what age and what kind of family Kiah will have created by the time the Messiah arrives. He'd better come soon because by the time Kiah decides to take a wife and start popping out babies he'll be a grandfather by the time Jesus gets here. Author REALLY should've started her story at 5 BC with Kiah as a young teen instead of a young boy who won't reach single adult age until Samuel the Lamanite finally shows up. I always imagined many of the twelve, even the prophet Nephi himself, all being thirtysomething age men who get to hang out with the Savior and witness all the heavenly manifestations, not fifty year old grandfathers.
Well, read this book and then go back and review your Book of Mormon stories. The author does try to make her story exciting but was all that Hollywood drama really necessary?