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The Premonition
The truth shall set you free, or so they say, but what happens when the it does the complete opposite?
Jason Pendrill is orphaned after his mother's death, and like most orphans, he's lost and confused. His mourning is interrupted by a mysterious girl. What news does she have for young Jason? Also, she's only a teenager, what news could she possible have?
Jason Pendrill is orphaned after his mother's death, and like most orphans, he's lost and confused. His mourning is interrupted by a mysterious girl. What news does she have for young Jason? Also, she's only a teenager, what news could she possible have?
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First published October 16, 2010
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Kelvin O'Ralph
13 books61 followersKelvin O'Ralph is a YA/Thriller/Fantasy author residing in the United Kingdom. He has been writing for over 6 years now, and has written a few projects during these years
Still in search for a good publishing deal from a traditional publisher, he focuses on his art and improves his craft by working on amazing projects such as the Sandville High series. The main concept behind the series is to provide readers with a rich suspenseful plot that ensues in readers wanting to learn more about the characters and their stories. He hopes one day this project will be developed into a TV series.
Kelvin's major influences have been Stephen King, Danielle Steel, Mary Higgins Clark, J.K. Rowling, Lee Child. He loves football (soccer) and adores Emma Watson (the girl from Harry Potter).
To find out more about Kelvin, visit his blog at www.kelvinoralph.net Twitter: @KelvinORalph Facebook: Kelvin O'Ralph
Still in search for a good publishing deal from a traditional publisher, he focuses on his art and improves his craft by working on amazing projects such as the Sandville High series. The main concept behind the series is to provide readers with a rich suspenseful plot that ensues in readers wanting to learn more about the characters and their stories. He hopes one day this project will be developed into a TV series.
Kelvin's major influences have been Stephen King, Danielle Steel, Mary Higgins Clark, J.K. Rowling, Lee Child. He loves football (soccer) and adores Emma Watson (the girl from Harry Potter).
To find out more about Kelvin, visit his blog at www.kelvinoralph.net Twitter: @KelvinORalph Facebook: Kelvin O'Ralph
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December 6, 2011
Well how much of a review can I write about a 6 page story? Not much I guess.
Jason's mother has just died, leaving him as an orphan and whilst visiting her grave, a teenage girl appears to tell Jason that she has some very important news to tell him. She transports them both to a pure white room with no door, no windows, no anything. She reveals who and what he is and then once he decides to almost believe her, he gets woken up from a dream....
You know my class of 7 year olds are not allowed to write the "...and it was all a dream!" ending, so not sure I can accept it here. The writing was good and this story really did feel like the first chapter in what could be a really good book, but shame it ended on a dream! If the author ever decides to write the whole of Jason's story I would love to read it!
Jason's mother has just died, leaving him as an orphan and whilst visiting her grave, a teenage girl appears to tell Jason that she has some very important news to tell him. She transports them both to a pure white room with no door, no windows, no anything. She reveals who and what he is and then once he decides to almost believe her, he gets woken up from a dream....
You know my class of 7 year olds are not allowed to write the "...and it was all a dream!" ending, so not sure I can accept it here. The writing was good and this story really did feel like the first chapter in what could be a really good book, but shame it ended on a dream! If the author ever decides to write the whole of Jason's story I would love to read it!
April 28, 2016
I liked this short story book and how a child helping a child to understand what was happening in his life.
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