Berserker Fury (1997) by Fred Saberhagen.
"Fred, get an editor... PLEASE! (sobbing)"
The tautly-written opening scene is well-deserving of the novel's title, but its ever-increasing redundancies eventually decay into a fragmented, non-sequential narrative toward the end of the book. Unfortunately, that turn of events hopelessly distracted this reader from what could have been wonderful character development, and lessened the impact of two characters' unexpected sacrifices.
I found the name of the planet Uhao interesting and different, until I realized that it was merely "Oahu" spelled backwards. Only in Chapter 28 was the "familiar name letter reversal" ploy *really* annoying, when Saberhagen tossed off Nodrog (Gordon), Adnilem (Melinda), and Egroeg (George) inside of 3 paragraphs.
I first noticed Saberhagen becoming redundant in _Berserker Kill_ (1993), but it was painfully obvious in _Berserker Fury._ While his early Berserker stories are well-crafted and crisply written, this novel is not. If Fred's succeeding Berserker novels are written this poorly, I'm strongly tempted not read any further in the series. In the end, the foreshadowing isn't followed through to its full potential, which is just plain disappointing to the reader.
In brief, at this point in his writing career (1997), Fred Saberhagen is in dire need of an editor who understands science fiction *and* literature, and would be able to gently shepherd him back to excellence again. "Sadder still to watch it die/Than never to have known it." --Rush, "Losing It," _Signals_
(09 Sept 2005)