This book is the perfect example of why sometimes, just sometimes you should either get an editor or shoot the old one. Just kidding, maiming is enough.
"Yesterday's Heroes" was intriguing and hilarious. It also severly lacked a proper, brutal editing hand to
a) mercilessly cut this book down from its what, measly 550~ pages. Let's be honest, your standard revenge-plot (even when involving twists or red herrings) gets by with HALF. While I do adore the ramblings of certain evil characters, you could have cut those by half, compressing it and making it even more hilarious. Just saying. Too much.
b) even more mercilessly erase some characters. I do like my characters worthy of being remembered, but being introduced to the whole batch of the villain character set was just TOO MUCH. (Just measly 20+ characters! But of course I remember them all! I mean, who wouldn't? Wait, what do you mean, who is Inferno? Ahhhmm... that chick there? Who later appears and has a rather epic scene but who I can't even remember ever being introduced?) I don't care how awesome they are, how funny, hilarious, how much thought was put in them - if I forget them and don't miss out at all, they apparently weren't needed for the story anyway. Also, the Lizard and the Bird could have been easily compressed into one character. What the "Narrator" was there for, no idea, he was just irritating to read.
c) properly edit out some typos. Frankly, I don't care much about typos. However, it might kill the reading flow a bit (meaning a lot) if there's always things like"he" does something that's actually "she" doing. The words are correct, but it's usually one letter wrong, making it another word completely. I've never seen such distracting, annoying typos ever in my whole reading experience. (Counting only the professional ones) Gratulations, book! That's not something you should be proud of.
But, but, there were good points! And obviously there were, or I would have stopped reading this really not long at all book (550 PAGES!)! This book would ordinarily get 5 stars, but due to it being a troll and only occasionally giving me glimpses of how awesome it truly could be, just not delivering it, it gets 4 stars. Seriously. The scene with Traitor? Best 5 pages of the book. Now that I think about it, he could have been erased, too, due to not being important to the story all that much - naw. Keep the guy, he's such a hilarious disloyal bastard.
The characters - while too many to talk about - are well crafted, well thought out with a ton of personality. I do recommend reading between the lines a lot, as frankly most of those bastards are self-lying non-thrustworthy narrators. It's really not a book for kids, as it does have a couple of sex scenes. I'd give it the tag "New Adult" or "Adult". Also, I absolutely loved the different Point of Views. Well done, author, well done. Every point of view had a distinct, clear voice and made me love & understand the character a bit more. I repeat: Excellent job there.
Some characters (Holly!) reminded me of other characters (Harley Quinn! In the winter edition!), but otherwise I thought the whole bunch was (more or less) interesting. If I didn't forget about them due to never appearing again, that is. (I never got the character "Narrator" though and frankly, I don't know enough about him to care.)
The plot itself included a bit of a new approach of taking down the other side, but overall the plot wasn't worth writing home about. No thrilling twists (the one that did exist could have also not existed at all, wouldn't have changed the story at all).
The characters and actions itself were what made this book fun. By this point, I either have your interest for this book or not. So now, shall we introduce the main characters to seal the deal?
- Let' start with Harlot: Your girl next door! If she were evil. But not really evil, just loving her evil friends and family. So actually a good girl with a big grey questionable ethical compass. Also a stalker.
- Next is Wyatt: Your emo boy. If he were raised as a superhero by very, very questionable methods by very, very psychotic behaving superhero parents. Also, when he snaps, he gets truly awesome. Otherwise reverts back to emo boy. But oh, when he does snap <3 Bloodthirsty Wyatt is fun. And no, I never want bloodthirsty Wyatt around in real life.
- Traitor: Easily best character of the book. The name is program, people!
Ah, and also, big plus: The book wasn't sexist or otherwise questionable. Our big girls never put up with shit from the other characters, they gave back as much as they got, and did as they wanted. I like something like that. All in all, I recommend it to superhero lovers! Unless you detest typos, then I guess you should maybe consider staying away from this one.
/Actually, don't start maiming people for real, folks! That was just a joke. Just saying.