I enjoyed this historical novella set in the 1920s.
Obviously it's heavily based on the discovery of Tutankhamun's tomb, but enjoyable nevertheless. The author does state this in the preface, so it's not as if she's being sneaky about it.
I did find it odd (and a bit uncomfortable) that J.M. Gryffyn paraphrased Carnarvon's words on peeking through into Tutankhamun's tomb for the first time: "I see wonderful things" was changed to "I see the most remarkable things". This rather uncomfortable feeling made me dock a star; it was just a trifle too scissors-and-paste at times. Whilst anything written about Ancient Egypt and the Western obsession with it must be derivative in light of the relatively small amount of remaining evidence, I do feel it stayed rather too close to the original writings when using such close paraphrasing.
The writing was decent throughout. The more books I read where this isn't the case, the more I'm glad when it is. I was a trifle relieved to find David 'manned up' a bit with time, though I could understand why he was a rather wimpy young man at first due to his downtrodden upbringing by his godfather, I do not like whiny, crying males as they feel like chicks with dicks. Jake, however, was just yummy throughout. :)
I would definitely buy this author's future work, as this is a very solid first attempt. I think she should have the confidence to write without a template next time, because she obviously has the skills to improve. Like anything we try, it's always better the second time around.
There's a really nice cover on this one (5 stars for that), with appropriate costumes and models. It's Anne Cain, so no surprise there.