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Ammon
With the fire of newfound testimony, Ammon and his brethren leave Zarahemla to preach the gospel in Lamanite lands, carrying nothing but hunting weapons and the promises of God. Spotted by an enemy scout, they part ways in the dense jungle with hopes of reuniting at the close of their harvest. Ammon follows the Spirit to the borders of Ishmael, where he's ambushed just seconds after spotting Elena, a fair-skinned woman who captures his interest. As Ammon gains reknown in the kingdom, he defends Elena from the advances of Gad, the loathsome widower she'll soon be required to marry. Then swearing allegiance to the Lamanite king and trusting in the Lord, Ammon further proves his strength and devotion by sparing King Lamoni's flocks from plunderers. The amazed king and his court are converted to the gospel through Ammon's powerful teachings and the miraculous events that follow, but each action Ammon takes causes more and more disruption throughout the kingdom. And when Elena is abducted by her own brother and hidden away in an unspeakable place, Ammon faces his greatest struggle not just the outward challenge of lethal combat but also the inward challenge of loving one's enemy.
292 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2011
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H.B. Moore
35 books340 followersHeather B. Moore is a USA Today bestselling author of more than seventy publications. She writes historical novels and thrillers under pen name H.B. Moore. She writes women's fiction, romance and inspirational non-fiction under Heather B. Moore. This can all be confusing, so her kids just call her Mom. Heather attended Cairo American College in Egypt, the Anglican School of Jerusalem in Israel, and earned a Bachelor of Science degree from Brigham Young University in Utah. Heather is represented by Dystel, Goderich, and Bourret.
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May 12, 2011
First of all, I've volunteered to serve on the 2011 Whitney Award committee, which means that AMMON will not be eligible for nomination for the 2011 Whitney Awards. I've won the award twice and been a finalist all four years. So I think it's time I give back to this great institution.
Second, I gave 5 stars to this book because I had a cool experience during the final galley stage. I was dreading reading it "one more time" and it had been a few months since I'd read the thing straight through. I was pleased that I really enjoyed the book. I stopped at a few points and said, "I like this story!" As you may know, authors get to the point of despising their books during the editing process. So the revelation was exciting for me. And now I'm even more excited to turn this book over to my readers.
I hope you'll enjoy AMMON!
Second, I gave 5 stars to this book because I had a cool experience during the final galley stage. I was dreading reading it "one more time" and it had been a few months since I'd read the thing straight through. I was pleased that I really enjoyed the book. I stopped at a few points and said, "I like this story!" As you may know, authors get to the point of despising their books during the editing process. So the revelation was exciting for me. And now I'm even more excited to turn this book over to my readers.
I hope you'll enjoy AMMON!
May 22, 2011
"We Shall Yet Have Miltons and Shakespeares of our Own"
This statement quoted by President Packer in a fireside on February 1, 1976, and later printed in the Ensign, was made by Orson F. Whitney in the early days of the Church. President Packer was voicing his disappointment in the artists, writers, and musicians of that day (1976) who were clearly not using their talents to aspire to this goal. I have kept that statement close to me as I have written all my books, hoping someday someone would stand on my shoulders and reach this exalted position.
As I read H.B. Moore’s latest book, Ammon, I suddenly realized that that day has arrived. Before you take issue with me on this weighty matter, remember two things. What was the greatest criticism of Shakespeare? That he never wrote anything original. All his plots were derived from legend, history, or myths. What Shakespeare did that earned him the title of “the bard for the ages,” was that he likened these stories to human experience. He drew out of them insights and conflicts that were very accessible to the human mind, not only in his day, but in all the days until the present time. Shakespeare put you in the story and made you face its conflicts. In so doing, he gave these stories a kind of immortality. He gave us heroes and villains with faces, bodies, parts, and passions.
And what of Milton? Didn’t he take his work directly from the Gospel as he knew and understood it? Didn’t he make us participators in his perception of eternal progression? Like Shakespeare, he likened his writings unto us, his readers, so that we could participate as fully as possible in the choices involved in the human drama that is mortality.
Moore does exactly the same thing with Ammon, that great, towering hero of the Book of Mormon. She has written many other books about the heroes of this scripture, but never with the flesh and blood immediacy of Ammon. The way she has accomplished this is by taking what is written, and just as Shakespeare did, studying the brief information to envision unwritten personal reactions, consequences, complications, tests of faith, and all manner of things that might have resulted from the miracles and testimony which Ammon bore to his deadly enemies.
For instance, what do you imagine was the fate of those who were scattering King Lamoni’s flocks? How did they react to the deaths of their comrades? Who exactly were they? Do you imagine they would have been converted by Ammon’s preaching?
What about all the priests and priestesses of the existing temples built to idols? The priests lived off the people. Do you imagine they would have been easily converted?
What would have been the position of King Lamoni himself in regards to his people? Wouldn’t have he had to give up his reign as a virtual dictator in order to allow freedom of religion? What would he and Ammon have done if they were opposed by armed and dangerous rebels who refused to be converted by a Nephite? How would the common man have reacted to accusations that Ammon was only there to create political unrest, so that they might be weakened in the eventuality of a Nephite attack?
Would Ammon have fallen in love? How would this have complicated his missionary labors?
I can almost guarantee that if one puts ones mind to the seemingly simple, heroic story given in the scriptures, one will find many, many consequences and possible story lines to follow. One of the looming, almost insurmountable differences between most of us and H.B. Moore is that we don’t know what she knows about life at that time. With Moore’s capabilities as an historian and a storyteller, the world of the Book of Mormon opens up like a 3-D movie. The smallest detail of life in that age is portrayed with a mastery that makes it seem unremarkable. Her details don’t shout “look what I know,” but rather slip into the story naturally and almost unnoticed. This is a phenomenal achievement.
As for the storytelling, Shakespeare couldn’t have done better! The suspense that builds through the story between Ammon and the unbelievers and that culminates in their capture of his beloved is stellar. Here is a story you know, and yet Moore endows it with natural consequences and elements that seem absolutely real. You all know the ending, and yet, I promise you, this masterful work will keep you up past your bedtime. After reading this book, you will realize that Ammon had to have been a much greater hero than the “superman” who lopped off the arms of the rebels at the waters of Sebus!
In terms of President Packer’s plea for this kind of literature, I hope we LDS writers will all take a lesson from Moore in writing to the greatest measure of our talent and using that talent to help people liken heroes, even everyday heroes, to themselves. There is great comfort and a blessed peace in knowing the things we know because of the Gospel. Even though it is more politically correct to write about the ills of society, let us celebrate the triumph of the Spirit!
And what of those of us who are not writers? What lesson can we take from this fulfillment of Elder Whitney’s prophesy? I truly believe it is what the Lord has demonstrated again and again. I know H.B. Moore. I hope she will not be uncomfortable with my revelation of the fact that she is first and foremost a wife and a mother. In fact, she has quite a handful of very active children. She never misses a game (and they are an athletic crew). Her husband and children are always her first concern. Not an ivory tower writer with a powerful literary agenda, she lives, outwardly at least, a normal life. However, she has a date with the Spirit every morning at five a.m., when she sits down to write. Those few hours that she has to create her stories are magnified. The Lord is there to give her what she needs to do this particular mission in the limited time she has.
H.B. Moore is a mother and a wife. In the time she wrests from hours when others are sleeping, she is also a masterful writer. Once again, the Lord has taken a seemingly ordinary being and helped her to accomplish great things.
This statement quoted by President Packer in a fireside on February 1, 1976, and later printed in the Ensign, was made by Orson F. Whitney in the early days of the Church. President Packer was voicing his disappointment in the artists, writers, and musicians of that day (1976) who were clearly not using their talents to aspire to this goal. I have kept that statement close to me as I have written all my books, hoping someday someone would stand on my shoulders and reach this exalted position.
As I read H.B. Moore’s latest book, Ammon, I suddenly realized that that day has arrived. Before you take issue with me on this weighty matter, remember two things. What was the greatest criticism of Shakespeare? That he never wrote anything original. All his plots were derived from legend, history, or myths. What Shakespeare did that earned him the title of “the bard for the ages,” was that he likened these stories to human experience. He drew out of them insights and conflicts that were very accessible to the human mind, not only in his day, but in all the days until the present time. Shakespeare put you in the story and made you face its conflicts. In so doing, he gave these stories a kind of immortality. He gave us heroes and villains with faces, bodies, parts, and passions.
And what of Milton? Didn’t he take his work directly from the Gospel as he knew and understood it? Didn’t he make us participators in his perception of eternal progression? Like Shakespeare, he likened his writings unto us, his readers, so that we could participate as fully as possible in the choices involved in the human drama that is mortality.
Moore does exactly the same thing with Ammon, that great, towering hero of the Book of Mormon. She has written many other books about the heroes of this scripture, but never with the flesh and blood immediacy of Ammon. The way she has accomplished this is by taking what is written, and just as Shakespeare did, studying the brief information to envision unwritten personal reactions, consequences, complications, tests of faith, and all manner of things that might have resulted from the miracles and testimony which Ammon bore to his deadly enemies.
For instance, what do you imagine was the fate of those who were scattering King Lamoni’s flocks? How did they react to the deaths of their comrades? Who exactly were they? Do you imagine they would have been converted by Ammon’s preaching?
What about all the priests and priestesses of the existing temples built to idols? The priests lived off the people. Do you imagine they would have been easily converted?
What would have been the position of King Lamoni himself in regards to his people? Wouldn’t have he had to give up his reign as a virtual dictator in order to allow freedom of religion? What would he and Ammon have done if they were opposed by armed and dangerous rebels who refused to be converted by a Nephite? How would the common man have reacted to accusations that Ammon was only there to create political unrest, so that they might be weakened in the eventuality of a Nephite attack?
Would Ammon have fallen in love? How would this have complicated his missionary labors?
I can almost guarantee that if one puts ones mind to the seemingly simple, heroic story given in the scriptures, one will find many, many consequences and possible story lines to follow. One of the looming, almost insurmountable differences between most of us and H.B. Moore is that we don’t know what she knows about life at that time. With Moore’s capabilities as an historian and a storyteller, the world of the Book of Mormon opens up like a 3-D movie. The smallest detail of life in that age is portrayed with a mastery that makes it seem unremarkable. Her details don’t shout “look what I know,” but rather slip into the story naturally and almost unnoticed. This is a phenomenal achievement.
As for the storytelling, Shakespeare couldn’t have done better! The suspense that builds through the story between Ammon and the unbelievers and that culminates in their capture of his beloved is stellar. Here is a story you know, and yet Moore endows it with natural consequences and elements that seem absolutely real. You all know the ending, and yet, I promise you, this masterful work will keep you up past your bedtime. After reading this book, you will realize that Ammon had to have been a much greater hero than the “superman” who lopped off the arms of the rebels at the waters of Sebus!
In terms of President Packer’s plea for this kind of literature, I hope we LDS writers will all take a lesson from Moore in writing to the greatest measure of our talent and using that talent to help people liken heroes, even everyday heroes, to themselves. There is great comfort and a blessed peace in knowing the things we know because of the Gospel. Even though it is more politically correct to write about the ills of society, let us celebrate the triumph of the Spirit!
And what of those of us who are not writers? What lesson can we take from this fulfillment of Elder Whitney’s prophesy? I truly believe it is what the Lord has demonstrated again and again. I know H.B. Moore. I hope she will not be uncomfortable with my revelation of the fact that she is first and foremost a wife and a mother. In fact, she has quite a handful of very active children. She never misses a game (and they are an athletic crew). Her husband and children are always her first concern. Not an ivory tower writer with a powerful literary agenda, she lives, outwardly at least, a normal life. However, she has a date with the Spirit every morning at five a.m., when she sits down to write. Those few hours that she has to create her stories are magnified. The Lord is there to give her what she needs to do this particular mission in the limited time she has.
H.B. Moore is a mother and a wife. In the time she wrests from hours when others are sleeping, she is also a masterful writer. Once again, the Lord has taken a seemingly ordinary being and helped her to accomplish great things.
July 18, 2011
H.B. Moore's Book of Mormon series is my absolute favorite scripture fiction books ever. All of the books have helped me understand the scriptures in a new light. I love to read her books, then go back and read through the scripture account again and see how much better I get it all. H.B. Moore has an incredible talent! Her new book, Ammon, is just as awesome as the rest of the books in the series.
There's action and even romance. (Yeah!) But most definitely, this book is about struggle - both physical and emotional. I was so involved in what was happening between everyone in the book, that it was difficult to put it down to go to bed. Ammon's story is complex and gripping, all the way through to the last page.
The one element that I appreciated the most was Ammon's challenge to love and forgive his enemies. I try to hard to be forgiving, but honestly it's not a characteristic that comes easy for me. H.B. Moore's example of how Ammon relies his faith to find the strength to love those who hurt him and those he loved was my favorite part.
There's action and even romance. (Yeah!) But most definitely, this book is about struggle - both physical and emotional. I was so involved in what was happening between everyone in the book, that it was difficult to put it down to go to bed. Ammon's story is complex and gripping, all the way through to the last page.
The one element that I appreciated the most was Ammon's challenge to love and forgive his enemies. I try to hard to be forgiving, but honestly it's not a characteristic that comes easy for me. H.B. Moore's example of how Ammon relies his faith to find the strength to love those who hurt him and those he loved was my favorite part.
October 4, 2011
This novel should appeal to young adults and adults alike. It offers a lot of action and adventure mixed with romance. Most of the story is told in two view points: Ammon and Elena (the woman who captures his heart).
The main character Ammon lives up to his name being the strong, tall, handsome Nephite prince who has renounced the throne to serve God by spreading the gospel in enemy territory.
Elena is a wonderful leading lady in this tale, who is adventurous and handy with a bow and arrow. She has a strong loyalty to family and especially her father. And, of course, she's very pretty.
I really enjoyed this book. Moore had quite a task of telling a story that many LDS people already know, but she's added wonderful layers making the tale come to life with setting and tension. I loved reading scenes based on the story in the Book of Mormon and seeing how she handled them.
As always Moore's writing is smooth and draws the reader in. I especially like how she added character thoughts that ring true. For example, in a tender scene between Elena and Ammon, Elena thinks ..."She knew he had been born a prince and was meant for something greater than defending the king's flocks, yet in her eyes, his greatest service had been making her feel valued." Moore hit a universal theme. All women want to feel valued.
I enjoyed Ammon and I highly recommend it.
The main character Ammon lives up to his name being the strong, tall, handsome Nephite prince who has renounced the throne to serve God by spreading the gospel in enemy territory.
Elena is a wonderful leading lady in this tale, who is adventurous and handy with a bow and arrow. She has a strong loyalty to family and especially her father. And, of course, she's very pretty.
I really enjoyed this book. Moore had quite a task of telling a story that many LDS people already know, but she's added wonderful layers making the tale come to life with setting and tension. I loved reading scenes based on the story in the Book of Mormon and seeing how she handled them.
As always Moore's writing is smooth and draws the reader in. I especially like how she added character thoughts that ring true. For example, in a tender scene between Elena and Ammon, Elena thinks ..."She knew he had been born a prince and was meant for something greater than defending the king's flocks, yet in her eyes, his greatest service had been making her feel valued." Moore hit a universal theme. All women want to feel valued.
I enjoyed Ammon and I highly recommend it.
May 31, 2011
I was surprised at how absorbed I became in Ammon. After all, I know this story well! But Ms. Moore’s writing of this prophet seems so effortless, it’s like we’ve really slipped back into that time period and are reading about his missionary efforts and the struggles that could have occurred as he tried to love his enemies. One thing that really struck me was, even though intellectually I knew that Ammon had given up a kingdom, for some reason this book brought it home more forcefully for me, and what sacrifices Ammon had made for the work. I just can't say enough about the quality of writing and the interwoven history and characters that come to life throughout this story.
This is a book I could not put down. I was completely pulled into the story and the people in it. There is just something so wonderful about a story that really strengthens the reality of Book of Mormon times and brings home to the reader the fact that these really were ordinary people who did extraordinary things, and they relied on the Lord to carry them through the struggles of life.
So, although my summer reading has just started, I don’t know that I will find a book to top this one on my 2011 favorites list. Ammon is incredible and is definitely a book for your must-have list!
This is a book I could not put down. I was completely pulled into the story and the people in it. There is just something so wonderful about a story that really strengthens the reality of Book of Mormon times and brings home to the reader the fact that these really were ordinary people who did extraordinary things, and they relied on the Lord to carry them through the struggles of life.
So, although my summer reading has just started, I don’t know that I will find a book to top this one on my 2011 favorites list. Ammon is incredible and is definitely a book for your must-have list!
July 9, 2011
Ammon, is a Book of Mormon story, an action/ adventure story and a romance. Who could ask for more than that?
I like the way Heather stayed true to the Book of Mormon character, while developing Ammon and the other characters, into "real people", without loosing any of the historical accuracy. I hoped and cheered for a relationship to develop between Alma and Elena- the young Nephite girl who had grown up among the Lamanites.
After Alma and Alma the Younger I didn't think it would be possible for Heather Moore to get better, but Ammon is even better than they were. I had a hard time putting it down to do necessary things , like eating and sleeping, until I finished.
I recommend this to anyone that likes action/adventure/romance. I think people both LDS and Non LDS alike will enjoy Ammon by H.B. Moore.
May 28, 2011
I loved reading the novel Ammon! Even though I know the story from the Book of Mormon, sometimes
I feel like I am reading an action/adventure novel. I love Ammon because of his courage, his humility and his undying faith. Heather has a way of bringing these Book of Mormon heros to life, while still staying true to scripture. I also enjoy how Heather develops all of her characters, whether big or small. I liked seeing the growth of the female character Elena. At the first she is a timid young girl and by the end she is a brave, confident woman. This all happens because of Ammon of course.
I will be writing a full review of this book and giving more insights next week. I will be blogging at "Why Not Because I Said So and at LDS Womens Book Review.
I feel like I am reading an action/adventure novel. I love Ammon because of his courage, his humility and his undying faith. Heather has a way of bringing these Book of Mormon heros to life, while still staying true to scripture. I also enjoy how Heather develops all of her characters, whether big or small. I liked seeing the growth of the female character Elena. At the first she is a timid young girl and by the end she is a brave, confident woman. This all happens because of Ammon of course.
I will be writing a full review of this book and giving more insights next week. I will be blogging at "Why Not Because I Said So and at LDS Womens Book Review.
October 30, 2011
Helped me understand the events during Ammon's ministry better, but it still feels like our modern, LDS church culture is superimposed over a meso-american backdrop. I am not an LDS historical fiction fan, so please take this with a grain of salt. I also felt like I have met Elena before, many many times over the course of reading LDS historical fiction.
August 11, 2011
Another great book by Heather Moore! I love Ammon! I really love this series, it does so much for me to relate to these awesome Book of Mormon prophets!
May 31, 2011
Amazing! Adventure/Book of Mormon story. Full combined review on www.ldswomensbookreview.com May 31, 2011.
January 6, 2012
My favorite book of the series! This one has romance, action, and history. I couldn't put it down! Loved it!!
November 29, 2011
I like these books. The stories are so intriguing that I keep reading to see what will happen. They bring the characters to life for me.
June 1, 2011
H. B. Moore succeeds at what she set out to do. In each of her novels Alma, Abinadi, Alma the Younger, and now Ammon, she has chosen four Nephite prophet-leaders whose sacrifices and inspired deeds that kept the faith of the Hebrews alive amid the excesses and atrocities of mesoamerican culture. Ammon, eldest son of Mosiah II and heir to the Nephite throne, is every little Mormon boy’s hero. He was one of the hedonistic “sons of Mosiah” who caused trouble for the church along with Alma the Younger until they experienced a “road to Damascus” type experience. Young Alma was the main target of the angel’s rebuke, but Ammon and his brothers were also converted to the cause of truth by the experience. Afterward, not only did the changed Ammon renounce his claim to the Nephite throne, but he and his brothers felt inspired to set off on a preaching mission to the wild and pagan Lamanites. Ammon’s story to this point is covered by Moore in Alma the Younger, with Ammon as a secondary character. The narrative in Ammon picks up as the brothers are entering Lamanite territory and decide to split up to appear less threatening to a people who consider them ancestral enemies.
Ammon is immediately captured and brought before King Lamoni, a junior ruler subject to his father, the High King. With patience and humility, Ammon eventually convinces Lamoni that he means no harm to his people and only wants to live among them and serve them. The crafty Lamoni, seeing a chance at a powerful political alliance, offers his daughter to Ammon, but the missionary has higher motives and refuses. This impresses Lamoni even more and earns his trust. Soon we find Ammon at the waters of Sebus, in the famous scene where he severs the arms of several marauders attempting to scatter the king’s flocks. This event raises Ammon to near godlike status among the Lamanites who witness it, and he succeeds in converting Lamoni and many of his people to the religion of the One True God. Later, as Ammon and Lamoni travel together to free Ammon’s brothers from prison in another sub-kingdom, they run into Lamoni’s father. The High King is outraged to find that his son is apparently being controlled by a Nephite. Again, Ammon’s physical strength and spiritual sensitivity combine to deliver the victory, and the High King is soon firmly in the camp of truth and righteousness.
All of this is straight from the scriptural account, but what H.B. Moore adds is her informed speculation on what the chronicler (or compiler) may have left out. A blossoming romance between Ammon and an expatriate Nephite woman in Lamoni’s kingdom is entirely Moore’s creation. Sweet as it is, it left me wondering how things would have gone if Ammon had fallen for a Lamanite woman. Is the avoidance of an interracial relationship Moore’s idea, an edit imposed by her Church-0wned publisher, or the reflection of an ancient cultural taboo? That may be an interesting question, but kudos to Moore for developing a strong female character as a match for Ammon. Besides Lehi’s wife Sariah and Abish (one of the players in this story in a much-expanded role), women are barely mentioned in The Book of Mormon. Yet we know that these prophet-leaders had relationships and spouses, because they had so many descendants!
Another aspect Moore develops from a dearth of information in the source material is the certain opposition Ammon and Lamoni would have faced in establishing their religion among a people steeped in the abominations of preclassical Mayan traditions (well-researched by Moore). She doesn’t shy away from human sacrifice or temple prostitution, and she makes the brother of Ammon’s love interest the principal antagonist. Again, Moore excels with the authenticity of her bad guys, an ability that really shined in Alma the Younger but is strong here as well. Not that I can sympathize with a guy who would abduct his own sister and have her imprisoned in a temple where he knew she would be ritually abused, but through Moore’s narrative I can at least comprehend his motivations in doing so. The climax of the novel has no basis in the scriptural account, which may reduce the impact for some, but is still satisfying and appropriate to the characters. Other readers might complain that Moore left out one of Ammon’s most dramatic moments, when some of his converts refuse to fight back against their enemies and are massacred (Alma 24), but that event doesn’t lend itself to a happy ending and its omission is understandable.
The writing in Ammon is neither fancy, stylistic nor lyrical. That’s not a bad thing. It’s a straightforward telling of the story that despite the sometimes harrowing subject matter meets LDS standards for fiction. Moore knows how to keep the attention off her writing and on her characters. Minimal verbiage is expended on descriptions of the settings, keeping the focus on people (albeit people in a fascinating milieu) and the spiritual impact of actions and relationships. Make no mistake, this is fiction written with a religious purpose, and the result is uplifting and faith-affirming. Highly recommended to readers of LDS fiction of any genre, even more so to young adults looking for a little romance and strong portrayals of their scriptural heroes. I sincerely hope Moore continues with this series, as I would love to see the lives of Nephi (the Apostle), Helaman, Mormon and Moroni given the same caring fictional treatment.
Ammon is immediately captured and brought before King Lamoni, a junior ruler subject to his father, the High King. With patience and humility, Ammon eventually convinces Lamoni that he means no harm to his people and only wants to live among them and serve them. The crafty Lamoni, seeing a chance at a powerful political alliance, offers his daughter to Ammon, but the missionary has higher motives and refuses. This impresses Lamoni even more and earns his trust. Soon we find Ammon at the waters of Sebus, in the famous scene where he severs the arms of several marauders attempting to scatter the king’s flocks. This event raises Ammon to near godlike status among the Lamanites who witness it, and he succeeds in converting Lamoni and many of his people to the religion of the One True God. Later, as Ammon and Lamoni travel together to free Ammon’s brothers from prison in another sub-kingdom, they run into Lamoni’s father. The High King is outraged to find that his son is apparently being controlled by a Nephite. Again, Ammon’s physical strength and spiritual sensitivity combine to deliver the victory, and the High King is soon firmly in the camp of truth and righteousness.
All of this is straight from the scriptural account, but what H.B. Moore adds is her informed speculation on what the chronicler (or compiler) may have left out. A blossoming romance between Ammon and an expatriate Nephite woman in Lamoni’s kingdom is entirely Moore’s creation. Sweet as it is, it left me wondering how things would have gone if Ammon had fallen for a Lamanite woman. Is the avoidance of an interracial relationship Moore’s idea, an edit imposed by her Church-0wned publisher, or the reflection of an ancient cultural taboo? That may be an interesting question, but kudos to Moore for developing a strong female character as a match for Ammon. Besides Lehi’s wife Sariah and Abish (one of the players in this story in a much-expanded role), women are barely mentioned in The Book of Mormon. Yet we know that these prophet-leaders had relationships and spouses, because they had so many descendants!
Another aspect Moore develops from a dearth of information in the source material is the certain opposition Ammon and Lamoni would have faced in establishing their religion among a people steeped in the abominations of preclassical Mayan traditions (well-researched by Moore). She doesn’t shy away from human sacrifice or temple prostitution, and she makes the brother of Ammon’s love interest the principal antagonist. Again, Moore excels with the authenticity of her bad guys, an ability that really shined in Alma the Younger but is strong here as well. Not that I can sympathize with a guy who would abduct his own sister and have her imprisoned in a temple where he knew she would be ritually abused, but through Moore’s narrative I can at least comprehend his motivations in doing so. The climax of the novel has no basis in the scriptural account, which may reduce the impact for some, but is still satisfying and appropriate to the characters. Other readers might complain that Moore left out one of Ammon’s most dramatic moments, when some of his converts refuse to fight back against their enemies and are massacred (Alma 24), but that event doesn’t lend itself to a happy ending and its omission is understandable.
The writing in Ammon is neither fancy, stylistic nor lyrical. That’s not a bad thing. It’s a straightforward telling of the story that despite the sometimes harrowing subject matter meets LDS standards for fiction. Moore knows how to keep the attention off her writing and on her characters. Minimal verbiage is expended on descriptions of the settings, keeping the focus on people (albeit people in a fascinating milieu) and the spiritual impact of actions and relationships. Make no mistake, this is fiction written with a religious purpose, and the result is uplifting and faith-affirming. Highly recommended to readers of LDS fiction of any genre, even more so to young adults looking for a little romance and strong portrayals of their scriptural heroes. I sincerely hope Moore continues with this series, as I would love to see the lives of Nephi (the Apostle), Helaman, Mormon and Moroni given the same caring fictional treatment.
April 27, 2017
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The first thing you should know about this book is that it has a smart, well-read author behind it. I've met Heather B. Moore at a couple of signings and have always been impressed with her patience as she interacts with my young children as well as her calm presence. Before Ammon I had never read any of her books, but now you can bet I'll be reading all of them!
Heather took the man who smote off the arms of rebels attacking the King's sheep and made him come alive for me. With rich details from the ancient American Mayan culture as well as inspiring every day heroes I absolutely loved Ammon. It's the story of the sons Mosiah- a Nephite king, who renounce their life of wealth and royalty to go into neighboring enemy territory. More particularly the book focuses on Ammon, as he travels into the land Ishmael to ask to be a servant to the Lamanite King Lamoni. Upon arrival Ammon meets a girl of fair skin and Nephite lineage, Elana, her father and brother Zaman. Elana's family are employed making and designing clothing for King Lamoni as well as the richer members of society. They have left the land of the birth and renounced their belief in the religion of their inheritance. Ammon and Elana's paths cross by chance and soon Ammon's life will prove to be threatened by several of those closest to Elana. Will he be able to survive the attacks? And will his and Elana pleas be answered in time to save that which is most precious to Elana?
Readers experience the unraveling of adventure, courage and love from both Elana and Ammon's points of view. Ammon is historically based fiction but has plenty of action to keep male readers interested. The main thing that I carried away from the book was the humility and sincerity of the man Ammon as he faces so many obstacles. His unshakable belief in the mercy and deliverance of God are inspiring. I came away strengthened and more hopeful than I was when I began reading. Heather B Moore has a new fan! I can't wait to read all the other books in her series.
Content: I would recommend Ammon to readers 16 and older because of the violence as well as the references to fertility rites.
To learn more about the book, visit Heather's website at http://mywriterslair.blogspot.com/ Order Ammon online from Deseret Book online here.
The first thing you should know about this book is that it has a smart, well-read author behind it. I've met Heather B. Moore at a couple of signings and have always been impressed with her patience as she interacts with my young children as well as her calm presence. Before Ammon I had never read any of her books, but now you can bet I'll be reading all of them!
Heather took the man who smote off the arms of rebels attacking the King's sheep and made him come alive for me. With rich details from the ancient American Mayan culture as well as inspiring every day heroes I absolutely loved Ammon. It's the story of the sons Mosiah- a Nephite king, who renounce their life of wealth and royalty to go into neighboring enemy territory. More particularly the book focuses on Ammon, as he travels into the land Ishmael to ask to be a servant to the Lamanite King Lamoni. Upon arrival Ammon meets a girl of fair skin and Nephite lineage, Elana, her father and brother Zaman. Elana's family are employed making and designing clothing for King Lamoni as well as the richer members of society. They have left the land of the birth and renounced their belief in the religion of their inheritance. Ammon and Elana's paths cross by chance and soon Ammon's life will prove to be threatened by several of those closest to Elana. Will he be able to survive the attacks? And will his and Elana pleas be answered in time to save that which is most precious to Elana?
Readers experience the unraveling of adventure, courage and love from both Elana and Ammon's points of view. Ammon is historically based fiction but has plenty of action to keep male readers interested. The main thing that I carried away from the book was the humility and sincerity of the man Ammon as he faces so many obstacles. His unshakable belief in the mercy and deliverance of God are inspiring. I came away strengthened and more hopeful than I was when I began reading. Heather B Moore has a new fan! I can't wait to read all the other books in her series.
Content: I would recommend Ammon to readers 16 and older because of the violence as well as the references to fertility rites.
To learn more about the book, visit Heather's website at http://mywriterslair.blogspot.com/ Order Ammon online from Deseret Book online here.
May 3, 2011
I was immediately drawn into H.B. Moore’s story “Ammon”, based on the scriptural account of Ammon in the Book of Mormon. The action, excitement and humor of the opening chapter drew me in instantly.
Ammon and his three brothers were very rebellious, and were doing all they could to drive people away from the church of their father Mosiah, the King of Zarahemla. They were brought to repentance after an angel rebuked them, and they were determined to spread the Gospel to the Lamanites, the enemy of the Nephites. They renounced their birthright, and left their homeland to preach to the Lamanites.
“Ammon” starts as the brothers and two others are traveling in the wilderness at the beginning of their mission. They split up, in hopes that they will come across as less of a threat to the Lamanites, and will be able to teach more people. The story follows Ammon’s journey to the Land of Ishmael where King Lamoni reigns.
I love the author’s talent at bringing scriptural figures to life. Ammon is a popular character in the Book of Mormon, mostly known for his defeat of rebel Lamanites that were trying to scatter King Lamoni’s sheep. Ammon is the “arm guy”. It was intriguing to have his possible feelings brought out. I liked thinking of him as more than just a great missionary and defender of the king’s flocks.
I was somewhat torn with the romance between Ammon and Elena. Romance is definitely not a focus in the scriptures, but I love a good romance, and it added a lot to Ammon’s character to see this side of him.
At the same time, I wondered how likely it was that Ammon would have been in a position to be able to have a relationship. These concerns were addressed in the book, and I don’t know if I would have enjoyed the story as much without the romance element. But, it still left me conflicted.
It appeared that there was a lot of research behind this book, and it was well used. I had fun doing a small bit of “research” myself to look up pictures of the tapirs and quetzals that were referred to in the book.
I definitely recommend “Ammon”. Add it to your summer reading list. Maybe you’ll also be inspired to re-read the actual account in The Book of Mormon.
*I received an advanced reader copy of this book from the author.
Ammon and his three brothers were very rebellious, and were doing all they could to drive people away from the church of their father Mosiah, the King of Zarahemla. They were brought to repentance after an angel rebuked them, and they were determined to spread the Gospel to the Lamanites, the enemy of the Nephites. They renounced their birthright, and left their homeland to preach to the Lamanites.
“Ammon” starts as the brothers and two others are traveling in the wilderness at the beginning of their mission. They split up, in hopes that they will come across as less of a threat to the Lamanites, and will be able to teach more people. The story follows Ammon’s journey to the Land of Ishmael where King Lamoni reigns.
I love the author’s talent at bringing scriptural figures to life. Ammon is a popular character in the Book of Mormon, mostly known for his defeat of rebel Lamanites that were trying to scatter King Lamoni’s sheep. Ammon is the “arm guy”. It was intriguing to have his possible feelings brought out. I liked thinking of him as more than just a great missionary and defender of the king’s flocks.
I was somewhat torn with the romance between Ammon and Elena. Romance is definitely not a focus in the scriptures, but I love a good romance, and it added a lot to Ammon’s character to see this side of him.
At the same time, I wondered how likely it was that Ammon would have been in a position to be able to have a relationship. These concerns were addressed in the book, and I don’t know if I would have enjoyed the story as much without the romance element. But, it still left me conflicted.
It appeared that there was a lot of research behind this book, and it was well used. I had fun doing a small bit of “research” myself to look up pictures of the tapirs and quetzals that were referred to in the book.
I definitely recommend “Ammon”. Add it to your summer reading list. Maybe you’ll also be inspired to re-read the actual account in The Book of Mormon.
*I received an advanced reader copy of this book from the author.
May 14, 2011
For years the Nephites and Lamanites have lived in peace by drawing a line in the sand, neither straying to other’s side. But when a Nephite prince, Ammon, and his brothers give up their birthright and set off to teach their enemies about Christ, well, as one might guess, they are not welcomed with open arms.
This novel follows Ammon as he separates from his brothers and heads out on his own in search of those willing to accept the gospel. Once amongst the Lamanites, Ammon struggles to balance the necessity of defending himself against physical harm while bringing a message of peace and deliverance to a people with deep-rooted beliefs in idol worship.
When Ammon meets a family of Nephite defectors, he unexpectedly falls in love with the stubborn, yet kind-hearted, Elena. Unhappy with her betrothal to Gad, the widowed father of five children, Elena is torn between her growing affection for Ammon and her father’s insistence that her marriage to Gad will preserve her family’s means of support.
From here, the reader is whisked through a precarious labyrinth that vacillates between: Will Ammon be able to escape the deadly grasps of the unbelievers and rescue his brothers in time? To: Will Elena survive the unspeakable act of betrayal at the hands of her own family and thwart an evil bent on imprisoning her very soul?
From the start, this novel takes readers from one suspense-filled scene to another, the tension continuously building, making it impossible to put the book down. As the theme of this story unfolds, the author plainly shows that when truth and righteousness grow, so too does the evil intent on destroying it. Moore does an excellent job of showing the brutality of the time period without imposing overly horrific images of violence upon readers, while inserting compelling insight into a civilization most of us could never have imagined on our own.
And the fact that Ammon is a complete stud while sensitive to the needs of others and unquestionably devoted to the woman he loves makes the novel all the more appealing.
Enjoy!
This novel follows Ammon as he separates from his brothers and heads out on his own in search of those willing to accept the gospel. Once amongst the Lamanites, Ammon struggles to balance the necessity of defending himself against physical harm while bringing a message of peace and deliverance to a people with deep-rooted beliefs in idol worship.
When Ammon meets a family of Nephite defectors, he unexpectedly falls in love with the stubborn, yet kind-hearted, Elena. Unhappy with her betrothal to Gad, the widowed father of five children, Elena is torn between her growing affection for Ammon and her father’s insistence that her marriage to Gad will preserve her family’s means of support.
From here, the reader is whisked through a precarious labyrinth that vacillates between: Will Ammon be able to escape the deadly grasps of the unbelievers and rescue his brothers in time? To: Will Elena survive the unspeakable act of betrayal at the hands of her own family and thwart an evil bent on imprisoning her very soul?
From the start, this novel takes readers from one suspense-filled scene to another, the tension continuously building, making it impossible to put the book down. As the theme of this story unfolds, the author plainly shows that when truth and righteousness grow, so too does the evil intent on destroying it. Moore does an excellent job of showing the brutality of the time period without imposing overly horrific images of violence upon readers, while inserting compelling insight into a civilization most of us could never have imagined on our own.
And the fact that Ammon is a complete stud while sensitive to the needs of others and unquestionably devoted to the woman he loves makes the novel all the more appealing.
Enjoy!
July 21, 2011
Another fantastic addition to H.B. Moore's Book of Mormon series! As a member of the LDS church, I am very familiar with the Book of Mormon and its many characters. However, that book does not necessarily go into much detail about these characters or the intricacies of their lives. That is one of the reasons that H.B. Moore's books have been so powerful to me. These books make the characters come to life! The author gives them personalities, emotions, and weaknesses and in so doing, allows the reader to relate on a more peronsal level.
The story of Ammon in the Book of Mormon is definitely a favorite of mine (and most LDS members, I think!) This book not only added to the story but enhanced it by expounding on Ammon's life and emotions. We know from the previous book, Alma the Younger, that Ammon and his brothers have already gone through some incredible changes in their lives. Obviously they had some weaknesses to begin with but were able to repent and return to leading righteous lives. Though it may seem that from then on human weakness did not touch them, Moore reminds us that righteousness is a continual process and even men as incredible as the sons of Mosiah had to work at it every day.
As Ammon lives and works among the Lamanites he must learn to love his enemy and struggle to come to terms with the violence that is forced into his life. Even though he is much more righteous and strong in the gospel than I will ever be, I still could relate to some of his struggles. I appreciated this aspect of humanizing such an amazing figure from the Book of Mormon.
As always, a great amount of time and research was put in to the creation of this book. I absolutely love historical fiction (and always appreciate a romantic storyline as well!) I'm seriously hoping that Moore will write another one of these amazing books (maybe Abish? It is an "A" title after all!)
The story of Ammon in the Book of Mormon is definitely a favorite of mine (and most LDS members, I think!) This book not only added to the story but enhanced it by expounding on Ammon's life and emotions. We know from the previous book, Alma the Younger, that Ammon and his brothers have already gone through some incredible changes in their lives. Obviously they had some weaknesses to begin with but were able to repent and return to leading righteous lives. Though it may seem that from then on human weakness did not touch them, Moore reminds us that righteousness is a continual process and even men as incredible as the sons of Mosiah had to work at it every day.
As Ammon lives and works among the Lamanites he must learn to love his enemy and struggle to come to terms with the violence that is forced into his life. Even though he is much more righteous and strong in the gospel than I will ever be, I still could relate to some of his struggles. I appreciated this aspect of humanizing such an amazing figure from the Book of Mormon.
As always, a great amount of time and research was put in to the creation of this book. I absolutely love historical fiction (and always appreciate a romantic storyline as well!) I'm seriously hoping that Moore will write another one of these amazing books (maybe Abish? It is an "A" title after all!)
February 7, 2017
This would have more appropriately been titled, "Elena," as the book revolved around this fictional character's story. The problem with this Book of Mormon "series" is that it's really better to just read one and only one of them, not all. I loved Abinadi, and then as I read Alma, Alma the Younger, and now Ammon, I realized that central to Moore's plots is a forbidden love, a damsel in distress, and a wildly romantic streak to these Book of Mormon prophets that we revere. I'm not dismissing that these men may have had love interests of their own in real life, but the same exact love-story set up for each of these gets old. There's so much more to a person's character, especially one of these prophets-of-God, than unrequited love for a drop-dead beautiful, conveniently-single-although-almost-betrothed-to-a-troll women.
If you're looking for a cute love story, read these. If you're looking for a nice historical, fiction/non-fiction account of the Book of Mormon prophets, maybe write one. Because Moore does better than anyone else I've seen yet, but there's still something lacking.
If you're looking for a cute love story, read these. If you're looking for a nice historical, fiction/non-fiction account of the Book of Mormon prophets, maybe write one. Because Moore does better than anyone else I've seen yet, but there's still something lacking.
June 28, 2011
This book was fantastic! I didn't expect anything less though from Heather Moore.I have loved her other books in this set as well. She started with doing a historic fiction novel on Abinadi then continued the series with Alma, Alma the Younger and now Ammon! I had the rare and neat experience of being one of a select few to read and make suggestions on this book when it was in the earlier stages. I have to tell you, even when it was an early draft it was so fantastic that even though Heather Moore needed to cut it down in length it was so well written and well told that I couldn't think of even a moment in the story that could be cut- it was so good! Heather Moore brings the scriptures to life with a fast paced story of a missionary striving to redeem himself and to share his hard won knowledge of the gospel. This book has History, romance, drama & adventure. This book is one that everyone should read!
September 1, 2011
Another well written book that I truly enjoyed reading. I liked how we were kept guessing on the Ammon/Elena storyline, almost Jane Austin-like, "How will these two EVER get together?". I also like that Moore isn't afraid to address certain taboo subjects-adultery, prostitution, subjugation of women, that so many current LDS writers keep glossing over. These gross iniquities still occur today and it is the job of writers to heighten the public's awareness of them-no matter how strict the Deseret Book publishing world has become.
My only nitpicking is with the characters of Zaman and Abish. I felt Zaman got off too easy and his true motive for what he did to his own sister wasn't quite believable to me. And what about Abish, I'm glad she didn't end up with Ammon as other LDS versions of the story have done, but I can't help but ask-what's going to happen to her now? Here's hoping for a sequel.
My only nitpicking is with the characters of Zaman and Abish. I felt Zaman got off too easy and his true motive for what he did to his own sister wasn't quite believable to me. And what about Abish, I'm glad she didn't end up with Ammon as other LDS versions of the story have done, but I can't help but ask-what's going to happen to her now? Here's hoping for a sequel.
July 23, 2011
I had mixed feelings about this book. I thought it was decently written and research was obviously put in. It was a mix of several things, history, action, adventure, romance, even some hunorous parts, which I liked. However I did not initially realize this was part of a series and that made the book confusing.
Also I felt as though the author was pushing religious aspects that I do not agree with, even from a fictional stand-point. Not all this is persay bad for others, but it did affect my personal enjoyment of the book. I am torn to go back and read other books the author has written to perhaps better understand. I do not yet know at this time. The overly religious aspect (and I don't mean just the historical sense with who Ammon was). really pushed me away.
I won this book here on Goodreads as a free giveaway in the First Reads program.
Also I felt as though the author was pushing religious aspects that I do not agree with, even from a fictional stand-point. Not all this is persay bad for others, but it did affect my personal enjoyment of the book. I am torn to go back and read other books the author has written to perhaps better understand. I do not yet know at this time. The overly religious aspect (and I don't mean just the historical sense with who Ammon was). really pushed me away.
I won this book here on Goodreads as a free giveaway in the First Reads program.
May 9, 2011
I had the opportunity to preview Heather Moore's book "Ammon". I have read some of her other books about people from the Book of Mormon and have appreciated her research of the culture and traditions of the time period.
This book begins with Ammon and his brothers setting off on their missions to preach to the Lamanite people. The story focuses on Ammon and Lamoni. I was hooked from page one. Even though I knew what was going to happen to Ammon, I was drawn into the book. The familiar story of Ammon protecting the King's sheep was suspenseful.
I enjoyed this book because Ammon became real to me. She stays true to the scriptures, but his interaction with the fictional characters gave me an idea of what life could have been like for him.
This book begins with Ammon and his brothers setting off on their missions to preach to the Lamanite people. The story focuses on Ammon and Lamoni. I was hooked from page one. Even though I knew what was going to happen to Ammon, I was drawn into the book. The familiar story of Ammon protecting the King's sheep was suspenseful.
I enjoyed this book because Ammon became real to me. She stays true to the scriptures, but his interaction with the fictional characters gave me an idea of what life could have been like for him.
May 22, 2011
In this addition to the awesome series written by Heather B. Moore is the prophet Ammon, son of Mosiah.
Ammon turns down his right to be the next king of Zarahemla and chooses instead to teach the Lamanites the Gospel.
There are wonderful stories from the Book of Mormon that the author touches on while she adds a story line that keeps you turning pages. I found this particular book to be an engrossing love story between Ammon and a Nephite woman who was brought to the Lamanite land by her family.
This whole series is an easy, gripping read.
May 9, 2011
When you read a lot, it's nice to come across something that you can't put down--especially in a genre you typically don't read. That's how it was with Ammon. I wanted to read it because I love the Book of Mormon story of Ammon. What an amazing person and missionary he was. Of course, Ammon by H.B. Moore is a fictional account woven around the details from the Book of Mormon. The characters are carefully crafted and some take unexpected turns, but you can't help cheering for those who are trying to follow the promptings of the Spirit. An uplifting book perfect for the start of summer. I highly recommend it.
May 10, 2011
So sweet and touching i almost cried. The book is another of Moore's Mormon Fiction retelling of stories from the Book of Mormon, but i can be read in order or as a stand alone. The story is well written balancing the spiritual message, romance, and action well so that the story never goes too fast or slows down for too long. The reader will easily find themselves unable to put the book down.
The character of Elena particularly impressed me, as she wasn't just a flat twitter patted female, but rather had a full back story and well thought out needs and desires. I look forward to Moore's next book with anticipation!
The character of Elena particularly impressed me, as she wasn't just a flat twitter patted female, but rather had a full back story and well thought out needs and desires. I look forward to Moore's next book with anticipation!
May 17, 2011
HB Moore has taken the story of Ammon the missionary and created a novel that helps the reader see what might have actually happened. Through well-documented research Moore has tried to present the story of Ammon in a way that makes sense as a possible reality. Ammon and the other characters are brought to life through Moore's storytelling ability. The conflicts and complexities of what Ammon may have gone through are developed through Moore's writing. It is easy to visualize what life would have been like during the time of Ammon. The message of Ammon's story remains true to its source and allows the reader to think about a possible reality for the young man and his mission.
June 1, 2011
This is my second book of HB Moore. My first was Alma the Younger. I enjoyed Ammon as much as I enjoyed Alma the Younger. Sometimes there is the fine line in fictionalizing sacred events, making it too common or taking it so far out there that is diminishes the events. For me it was almost perfect. It brought the ancient missionary to life, showing the commitment and devotion Ammon had with the Lord and the Lamanite people. My ability to imagine people, places and events in history and scripture is lacking, so to have HB Moores gift bring these events to life is so exciting to me.
Great read to get a 'feel' for who Ammon could have been. I can't wait to read more by HB Moore.
Great read to get a 'feel' for who Ammon could have been. I can't wait to read more by HB Moore.
September 5, 2011
LDS Fiction
The story of Ammon is a good one, especially all gussied up with imagination. :) This was my son's favorite story when he was little. We used to read it over and over and over...
The history and traditions of the people of the early America's is very interesting. Moore has done a good job of painting me a mental picture of the places and people in her book.
The story of Ammon is a good one, especially all gussied up with imagination. :) This was my son's favorite story when he was little. We used to read it over and over and over...
The history and traditions of the people of the early America's is very interesting. Moore has done a good job of painting me a mental picture of the places and people in her book.
June 19, 2011
GOODREADS GIVEAWAY!!
Thankful that I won a copy of this because everybody been writing such good reviews about it and it made me wanna read it even more.
Never thought I would really like a religious type of book, but this isn't all about religion.
There's so much history in this and its obvious that a lot of effort was put into writing it.
Thankful that I won a copy of this because everybody been writing such good reviews about it and it made me wanna read it even more.
Never thought I would really like a religious type of book, but this isn't all about religion.
There's so much history in this and its obvious that a lot of effort was put into writing it.
November 27, 2011
This was just as good as any of Moore's other books, but I felt that this one did not have as many complex questions in it as some of her others. The characterization of Ammon is very interesting and she does explore some new angles in his story, but I felt like the book was more of a romantic suspense story than I like.
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