“Adventures in the Screen Trade” by William Goldman is rightly a classic of film/scriptwriting books by a classic script writer so when I saw this 457 page paperback I had to pick it up. If I ever find another copy of “Adventures in the Screen Trade” I will read it again.
As entertaining as “Adventures in the Screen Trade” and incredibly well-written this is no-bs inside dope from a writer and master who’s been around every block.
A particular pleasure was the story of how ‘The Princess Bride’ got written and the movie got maid, involving Richard Lester of ‘Three Musketeers’ fame (and deservedly so).
I’m starting to see a pattern. If I really like a book, I don’t bother writing notes about it cause I just like to read it.
This is definitely one of them. Fascinating stories about ups, downs, hits and flops, and how it affected him as a person.
Every word is riveting. I have to force myself not to devour this in a night!
I’ve gotten at least 3 movies that I have to see now that I never would have if I hadn’t read this book!
Wow! This book is amazing. It tells the kind of wisdom that can only be gained from being in the trenches. The very words and ideas and id’s that can show why it’s almost impossible to get ANYTHING good made in Hollywood. A master class.
“I’ve written this before and please tattoo it behind your eyeballs: we are all at one another’s mercy…”
OMG, I’m cracking up just reading the script for a scene in ‘What about Mary?’
“As I write this, Littleton is still very much in people’s consciousness. The usual shit, oh oh oh, violent movies did it-no, rap music-no, TV-no, the Internet-no, blank did it (fill in your own medium). May take, by the by? If those amazingly crazed young men had gone into that school, with the same murderous intent, but armed with knives and clubs, the incident would have been death-free.”
“The Brits are so different from us, there are no words; but nowhere is the difference clearer than when it comes to war: we venerate victories, they adore disasters. So the greatest battle for them in World War II was Dunkirk.”
What I love about this book is that he shows you good scripts, but he doesn’t just leave it at “Write like that!”. He also goes into the specifics of what makes it work. He also shows examples of scripts and ideas that DON’T work and explains why — at least why HE can’t make them work and that’s an important point he makes throughout the book. That there is no ‘one-true-way’ that will work for every idea and every scriptwriter.
In a really interesting twist, he fills 35 pages with a script - roughly an hour long, for the reader (and some of his friends) to critique.
I personally don’t like reading scripts, but his is much more readable than most.
This is really the most badass thing I’ve ever read in a script writing book (and I’ve read a few).
He’s written a script and he’s not just telling you to finish it, he’s showing you the thought process and the ideas about how the scenes should work. And none of it is set in stone, in the sense that he’s not saying “this works” and “that doesn’t” but a much more nuanced idea of what might work and what might not.
It’s amazingly raw but also helpful because you’re reading him go through the pain as ‘practice’ for you going through the same pain!
I don’t know if the script will be done by the end of the book — and I seriously doubt it — that’s kind of the point!
It’s what REALLY happens in a writer’s mind - I want this image and this image and I know there’s got to be this scene - but it’s all as vague and unstructured as it is in real life.
That’s the skill. Structuring it, not based on a formula exactly, but on what ‘plays’. What works.
What is wonderful about this example is that it is set up as if there is a ‘right’ or ‘wrong’ answer in how the script should continue, but it’s made very clear is that it could go ANYWAY!
There is no ‘right’ answer except the one that you feel makes it ‘play’. Makes it ‘work’ as a movie! “(I am smiling as I wrote that last sentence because you probably think I know how [the scene should go from here]. And the truth is: not a clue.)”
And then of course, while you are stewing, he kills it. He writes the scenes that work, that play well and are the most logical next steps in the movie. It may not be Oscar-bait, but it’s a film you’ll like AND YOU WILL KNOW WHY ITS WRITTEN THAT WAY.
You may even consider it predictable, but that’s a subjective view that you can only have AFTER READING THE SCRIPT. And you can always rewrite it to change it.
Now I’m at the point where I like this book so much I have to deliberately slow myself down reading it cause I want it to last longer.
It get really interesting when the people he’s sent the script too start commenting on it. Right away they have great suggestion that make the film even better.
The criticisms of his script certainly appear honest! “I know why he fell in love with her. The same reason all men fall in love with women: she’s beautiful.”
What’s wonderful about reading these critiques and learning from them is that this is what you are going to get! Both barrels! And while some of it is right, some of it is also wrong, so the critics aren’t giving you help so much as telling you, YOU’VE GOT EVEN MORE WORK TO DO!
I’ve never read a writing book, that told you that kind of truth!
WOW! Bill’s friends dump all over him - and they are absolutely right! I wish I had friends that honest!
What’s fascinating about the criticisms of the script - which I saw no problem with on first reading - is not just how correct they are about the holes in the script, but about the details that they red flag are minute (my-noot?). The little details are what completely blows the whole premise out of the water!
You might not notice them as you’re watching the movie, but they WILL come to you later - and certainly when you read reviews of the film.
I know that when I am writing I have to constantly search for those plot holes and then find ways to plug them and it’s really hard without outside help.
So more than anything else it emphasizes the need to a) have a thick skin and b) have people read your work and eviscerate it!
You want to write a screen play? THIS is how you do it!
Even to the last pages, he gives advise I’ve NEVER read in any other script writing book or any other book on writing.
I’m definitely giving this 5 stars.
I probably won’t keep it because I don’t need to tempt myself…
But I’ll bet I regret it when it’s gone…