A fast and smutty Sapphic romance with a simply stunning cover, quite a fun read despite a lot of minor issues and flaws. Pretty much what I was expecting; your typical cliche modern romance, not particularly realistic but makes for satisfying fiction. Mentions covid and tiktok which gives it a dated feel for me personally.
Easy reading with writing that isn’t bad but does have its errors and clunkiness, particularly in dialogue.
I did find it impressive to get across the feeling of remorse from Gen and actually manage to make it easy to forgive her for being the other woman intentionally. Usually her kind of behaviour would be irredeemable but the author manages to do a good job in making the reader empathise and forgive her.
It was quite overly obvious with telling everything at you, yet still with no real description on what they look like, aside from Matties weight, body ‘flaws’ and Gens long blonde hair.
Speaking of which brings me to that point - I really didn’t like the constant comments on Matties weight, particularly how she gained then lost a few stone after her divorce… I just feel that was a little rude and unnecessary in the way that was written in.
I am also really not a fan of the forceful lack of consent and the whole thing was a little toxic and cringe. As well as everything just getting constantly magically fixed and all better with no real explanation or journey.
Overall if you’re looking for an unserious quick and spicey lesfic, go for it, it hits the spot.