I thought the whole subplot of the h searching to learn about her late mother, only to find she's very much alive, would be intriguing, but it was so full of coincidences it just fell flat. She turns out to be the H's stepmother, happily married to the H's father, making the H and h stepbrother and stepsister, giving their already tenuous relationship a touch of incest to add to their troubles. COME ON!!!
Are we really supposed to believe that, after marrying a wealthy man with connections, the h's mother didn't make any attempt to try and get to her daughter, whom she supposedly still loved and missed so much? That instead, she contented herself with putting images of her, at different ages, in her paintings throughout the years? If that was supposed to tug at the heartstrings, mine didn't feel a thing!
Even more ridiculous is her horrible (and I mean HORRIBLE) father supposedly saying her mother's name right before he croaked. This poor excuse for a human being manipulated her into marrying him, destroyed the man she loved, treated her like crap, tried to get her to abort the h, ran her off the road when she tried to leave him, took the baby from her while she was unconscious in the car, waited for her to wake up before informing her that if she ever tried to get near the h he'd have her killed (no idle threat, coming from him), left her in the car not caring what became of her then never spoke of her again (except to lie to the h when she was older, saying she was dead) and after all that, we're supposed to believe he was calling form her as if she were his beloved that he needed by his side???
(Once again) OH, COME ON!!!
A lot of stuff was wrong with this book, including an h who turned herself into a cold boss bitch (or at least the facade of one) to please her horrible father, who she should have walked out on and worked against, instead of trying to be like him to impress this piece of crap! He got his kicks from corporate raiding, destroying other companies and the people that went with them (callously doing the same to the h's pet horse who he decided was old and useless), called her all kinds of names when he found out she was pregnant with the H's baby, demanded she have an abortion and when she refused he fired her and told her to get lost, he wanted nothing more to do with her or her kid!
The man was GARBAGE, and I would have liked a story where the h used her business skills against Daddy Dearest and fought for the companies he wanted to take over. And once her dad was feeding the worms, the h should have gone back to the company and tried to undo all the damage he did and make amends, instead of chucking it all to start a new life right away. Preggers or not, she could have worked a while more and given the company a good name, shown people she was NOT her father's daughter after all, and then turned the reins over to someone else.
The story with the H and h is another of those "overwhelmed by passion" tales, where the H and h get naked almost immediately, the h pulls a disappearing act, finds out she's pregnant and after meeting the H again, believing he regrets their night of passion and just wanted to be friends, decides not to tell him she's pregnant and go off somewhere and makes a new life for herself as a single mom.
What's silly is that at first, she was going to tell him but when she went back to where they first met (part of her quest to learn more about her mother) and he wasn't there, she thought she'd never see him again, and then when she does, and finds out he's not the humble mechanic she thought he was but a wealthy art gallery owner, she changes her mind and decides to disappear ASAP. Talk about stupid!!! For the sake of her pride (because she thinks he was just a wealthy playboy adding another notch to his belt) she plans to deprive her baby of not only its daddy but it's $$$ inheritance! (If she were farther along in her pregnancy, I'd be hoping the kid kicked her HARD!)
After this, there's a whole lot of silliness, with the H (who had been searching for her, not only for himself but for his stepmom who suddenly decided she wanted her daughter after 25 years, figure that one out) determined to get her and her mom together, tricking her into taking a job in France (where her employer turns out to be her mom), then using a friend of his (with her permission) to try and make the h jealous. Instead of telling her how he feels, he resorts to playing games. Very mature of him! (He doesn't tell her the truth until he overhears a reference to her pregnancy when she's talking to a psycho employee who was apparently fixated on her dead dad. How romantic!)
How SILLY!!!
In fact, that should have been the title of the book!
I'd say more about the story, but I think you get the idea. It's really not worth your time.