(This will serve as my review of the entire Fionovar Tapestry- Spoiler pearl clutchers beware- there be dragons of plot and theme reveals here!)
Confession: I am a bit of a Requiem fanatic- I own several versions of the Verdi, the Mozart, the Brahms, and copies of the Cherubini, Berlioz, Dvorak, and Benjamin Britten Requiems and I am always looking for more. I am fascinated with each and every one of them personally, but when it comes time to try and explain my obsession to someone else, I always play them the one that seems to translate its meaning to everyone: Verdi’s Requiem for Alessandro Manzoni.
In order to show this to my boyfriend, I took him to a performance of the Verdi last year at the Kennedy Center. To be honest, he mostly sat there with a polite “so, when can I go to the bathroom?” look on his face through the opening Kyrie. I was starting to worry about what kind of really horrid sci-fi B movie I was going to have to sit through to make up for putting him through this- but not for very long The minute the chorus hit the Daes Irae, he practically leapt out of his chair with excitement at its awesomeness. He was a percussionist for many years, and he spent the rest of the movement happily drumming out the beats of Hell and Damnation, gasping with the screaming descent of the chorus falling into the abyss, anticipating Verdi’s next lightning strike of devilish terror.
And then the main Daes and the call to Judgment of the Tuba Mirum ended, succeeding to the soaring solos and pleading instruments of the Liber Scriptus, the Quid sum miser and so on. But he wasn’t happy until the Daes returned- sitting tense until he heard the shocking first slam on the timpani announcing the theme and then leaning forward in his seat again, as happy as a clam.
I believe the young Guy Gavriel Kay was also a Daes Irae only man.
The Fionavar Tapestry is an epic, old school style fantasy trilogy. It is not only epic, it is the most epic thing to ever epic in this whole epic universe, man! And you might think I’m making fun of the book, but that really is sort of its point. It’s meant to gather in as many (mostly Western, let’s be honest) heroic archetypes, stories, and quests as possible into one overwhelming tale that tells all the tales that have ever been told, at their peak of beauty, elegance and emotion. Hence the name, focus, and dominant images of the tale: the tapestry, the weaver, the loom, threads, snipping, spinning, binding, winding. Fionavar is known to fans of Guy Gavriel Kay’s work as the central world of all worlds there are, and is essentially Heaven on Earth. We may live many lives with many flaws, problems, and could-have-beens, but in Fionavar, we will finally live the life we were meant to (“We will meet again in Fionavar, my love, in Fionavar.”) This tale shows us the price of building that heaven.
This grand tale, however, cannot happen without five ordinary Canadian citizens who turn out to be necessary for the tale to progress. A mage named Loren Silvercloak and his source, the former dwarf king, Matt Sören, lure them to their world on the promise of two weeks of fun- and of course it turns out that they are needed for much, much more. They are lead through incredible adventure after adventure throughout the three books, finding their places in this new world as they participate in or witness incredible feats of bravery, sacrifice and heroism that pile one on top of the other in glorious succession for three books right down until nearly the very last page of conclusion.
And all that action packed, exhilarating action is essentially why I can never really adore these books the way that I adore the rest of Kay’s work: the Daes Irae (or the Hallejuah Chorus, if it happens to be a brief happy moment), being played at full volume, without pause or interlude.
Kay is just far too demanding of his readers in this book. In this epic of epics, he constantly presents us with yet another mythical figure, piece of magic, old (it must be old to be revered!) legend coming true every few pages- then spends the next few pages demanding that we stand in awe of his creations. Each character is more beautiful, more perfect, more shining than the last- or, alternately, has committed acts more dastardly and more terrifying than could ever be contemplated. It is tempting to dismiss this as merely teenage Mary-Sue writing- but I’m aware that isn’t the point. He’s trying to draw on the force of so many old legends of our own world and reach something inside us all that respond to these ancient stories by reminding us how deeply important they are. He wants to remind us why the essence of these things are so important.
It’s just exhausting, and unfortunately, after awhile, it does get to be a little eyeroll inducing (especially when all the Magical Objects of Power just turn up at convenient moments as Deus Ex Machina- and sometimes that’s literal! This thing is all about the plot, the plot was just embarrassing at times). Even when he’s trying to be funny, he has to surround a brief light moment with pages of stuff justifying it’s deeper meaning. He tries to use the five Canadians to show us how to react properly, with awe and respect, but it just doesn’t work for me. One of the major things that bothers me about this trilogy is how ACCEPTING everyone is of things, how REVERENT they are of this story. Everyone just seems to accept that they should drop everything for this story they’ve fallen in to- no one thinks to tell family back home when characters die in the other world. I think he missed a great opportunity to both connect people into the story and explore some cool ideas about the values of modern culture, and the stories we tell ourselves now- American Gods style, but better. I wish he had given me that way to connect to the characters, because honestly? I felt like three out of The Five weren’t even really given a personality- poor Jennifer and Kim got shafted, and Kevin was reduced to a couple of adjectives. They were taken over by what they were supposed to represent- which I understand to a certain degree, but they’re also supposed to be people. That is supposed to be the pathos of the whole thing. I can’t cry over someone if they’re just a camera angle for me- 90% of the time just telling me how awed I should be. Kay really did mostly fail at the thing that I usually love about his writing- the deeply human, inner aspect of his characters and their actions, how those things make up a resonating story.
That’s what I needed here- I need a little Ingemisco, a little Lux Aeterna in my life, I need some Chopin Nocturnes, some Bach Cello Suites. I want some variation in tone, volume, emphasis, some ambiguity in what I should be thinking and feeling while I’m reading. I want that extensive inner contemplation that shows me why a person does what he does- that’s the thing to observe reverently. It’s just as epic as any other kind of piece, but observed within, and spoken aloud in a whisper, quietly, discreetly. Then you can show me the epic battle and expect me to care about everyone involved. I only really saw this in two places in the trilogy, one major, one minor with flaws. The major one was entirely in The Summer Tree: Paul’s backstory of despair (which is why that one got four stars, and the others three), his doomed love for a talented musician named Rachel, and the endless torture he puts himself through for the tangle that their relationship became. We’re taken from the middle to the beginning to the end of his pain in such an amazingly sensitive and deeply felt way- his nights on the Summer Tree are just achingly beautiful, and you feel every reason he’s there with every line. But then that done, he seems to just give it up until the end. Then it’s all magical powers and flying unicorns, gifts of goddesses and Big Ass Swords. Plot, plot plot, things things things- who cares?
Speaking of plot, I have to mention this too: I was actually kind of disturbed by what he put Jennifer through for the sake of his plot development/giving her moral invulnerability- I’ve always thought that he used sex for interesting/good things in his books, but not here. I just can’t justify it- the showing of the unspeakably horrible things that happened to her, and especially the tone of the telling did not equal their storytelling value. Again, Kay ramped it up to full, screaming volume, and it made me close my eyes, not listen closer. It made me question the relationship of women and sex in his books all over again, and not in a good way.
But in any case, back to my major issue with the book: Eventually, I know that he came to understand the power of the inner world over the twenty-page-long sword fight, and I see the beginnings of that here- but he just hadn’t gotten there yet. He was still too in love with the stories, and not yet with the people inside the stories. I certainly understand that- these are the most amazing stories in the world for a reason, and weave spells over us accordingly. Kay has Arthur, I had my Beauty and the Beast stories. We all have that irrational attachment to stories, before we start to ask too many questions of them, or look at them in a different way. That’s Kay in these books. He’s too excited about sharing every story he knows with us to just sit down and coherently tell us one story that really matters.
I’ve always loved reading pre-masterwork pieces of my favorite authors, watching their ideas develop. I can see the beginnings of some of my favorite books here. That’s exciting. That’s wonderful.
But he just can’t… quite… hear the rest of the music properly yet.