Once I was able to catch the rhythm of this book, figure out the characters, and keep up with the chapter/focus changes, I found that this was a good story. The concept, a couple of cousins in unfortunate circumstances who create a business matching prison inmates with women who are able to give a list of "I wants," is new and interesting. There were enough differences in the ladies that used the service that it allowed for the book to remain interesting. It's a great concept and the stories for each couple are interesting. Unfortunately, this is an example of a poorly executed manuscript.