This book wasn’t good.
Why not?
The author missed the part in writing school where they talk about “show, don’t tell.” When you are showing the reader, it has to be INTERESTING. And saying that the character pushed her spoon away from herself in her soup, that isn’t remotely interesting or necessary to the reader. Everyone reading this book has seen someone eat soup, and what that looks like. So, it’s OK to just say, so and so ate their soup with relish, or enjoyment, or whatever. What the reader doesn’t know is what this character looks like, smells like, sounds like. In this entire book, we never get a detailed description of any characters’ physical features (brief exception discussed momentarily), quirks, clothing, likes, dislikes, etc. The characters are cardboard.
The setting is supposed to be Wales. In fact that’s what drew me to the book in the first place. I love England, but know nothing about Wales. Why set it in Wales at all?? The reader wants to be transported, so show me Wales. Make me not only see it, but smell it, hear it, and taste it.
This book is supposed to take place during the Christmas season, and yet no one seems to be decorating, baking, gift shopping, or doing anything at all in the frantic build-up to the big day. In fact, the home of one character is described as having no decor at all! Not even a table-top tree! Are they Jewish?
There are some big, odd red herrings that make me wonder about everyone involved. For instance, that American who shows up for a manicure? No one wonders whether she’s involved with the American who’s been murdered?
The characters are flat, boring, and lifeless. A cardboard cutout has more personality than Penny, our alleged main character. At the end of the book I knew almost as much as I did about her than when I first cracked the spine and started reading. The only character I felt like I really knew was Evelyn.