As a reader, there is always a certain risk when you pick up any early-story collection. This volume collects the first published stories of 19 prominent authors in the crime and mystery genres. Readers know from the outset these will likely be the rough products of inexperienced albeit talented practitioners.
My experience was that when I happened upon a story from an author I already liked (Lawrence Block, Donald Westlake, Max Allan Collins), it was fun to read the earlier work and see just how far the writing had improved. Plus, at least two authors (Susan Isaacs, Minette Walters) were already established novelists before they ever published a short story, and so their contributions seemed notably more mature.
However, when I came across early stories from authors I did not already know, well, then they were just below-average stories… It did not prompt me to seek out their later efforts.
Laud by David Black (1978)—This is a literary story, not a crime tale, about a young married man engaged in a passive aggressive fight with his aging father who ran away from home at the age of fifty-eight. The author strains to create subtext by assigning each character convoluted silent motivations, then falls into the trap of having the narrator reinterpret everyone else’s dialogue.
Double Glazing by Simon Brett (1979)—A decent story about a mentally-ill man obsessed with making sure he does not freeze to death. Simon Brett is known for his humor but this story is something of a departure as it tries to maintain a serious tone.
Public Servant by Max Allan Collins (1985)—A nasty, brutal story about a rapist-turned-cop stalking a small town. Collins has already given us series about a professional hitman (Quarry) and a professional thief (Nolan). This character could be his darkest yet.
Spring Fever by Dorothy Salisbury Davis (1952)—This author was extremely popular in the 50’s, 60’s, and 70’s for her psychological suspense stories featuring complex women characters. Here is an early example, well-crafted but feels slow and dated by today’s standards.
The Tree on Execution Hill by Loren D. Estleman (1977) – A leisurely but effective mystery built around a seemingly mundane town hall meeting.
Now’s the Time by John Harvey (1994)—A very slight but atmospheric story featuring series character Charles Resnick.
Death of a Romance Writer by Joan Hess (1988)—A (not-very-funny) satire of romance novels
Compliments of a Friend by Susan Isaacs (2000)—The heroine of Isaac’s first novel Compromising Positions returns for a second outing twenty-five years later to solve a friend’s suspicious suicide. This traditional whodunit has energy, interesting characters, and a resolution that makes perfect sense.
The Bathroom by Peter Lovesey (1973)—A light, breezy murder that mixes elements of an historical crime (the famous Brides in the Bath killings in Britain) with a modern setting.
The Death of Me by Margaret Maron (1968)—A thin clichéd tale about a bitter husband and his wife who nags him to quit smoking.
Freedom by Susan Moody (1990)—This story is set in Prague, a city I visited a three months ago, and I could perfectly envision its eerie street scenes. The ending was needlessly ambiguous, but this was still one of my favorites in the collection.
The Dripping by David Morrell (1972)—I keep encountering this author in anthologies. His stories start strong but seem to have flat endings. This one was no exception.
A Taste of Life by Sara Paretsky (1989)—An insecure supermodel mom forces her child to become dangerously fat, a black not-quite-comedy spin on the Who’s-the Fairest-of-Them-All motif.
Fan Mail by Peter Robinson (1989)—A whimsical and surprising take on a classic premise—the mystery writer is approached and asked to plan a real-life murder.
Jim and Mary G by James Sallis (1970)—Sallis cheated on the assignment by submitting his first published crime story, not his first story published. He was well-established as an experimental avant-garde science fiction writer when this was written. This story is rather confusing. It appears two parents might have murdered their child, but the reasons behind this decision are never explained.
The White Death by Justin Scott (1989)—Something is murdering dogs on the farm. This mystery can only be solved by the cat. Yes, it as bad as it sounds…
The Tinder Box by Minette Walters (1999)—This is a modern English manor house murder mystery, with a just dollop of political commentary. The setup is promising, the characters engaging and multidimensional. The plot unfortunately is rather convoluted. (Note: The first printing of this novella was a run of 300,000 copies. It has since been published in both hardback and paperback, making it closer to a novel than a short story.)
Arrest by Donald E. Westlake (1958) Maybe the final two lines were intended as a twist ending that fell flat. Just ignore that bit of inexperience because Westlake’s vintage voice is on display, and he allows the suspense to build organically.
You Can’t Lose by Lawrence Block (1958) –Published when the author was only nineteen years old. Much better than it has any right to be.