What if Jesus didn’t die on the cross for our sins? What if it was all a ruse to gather people and raise them against Rome?
This is the premise this book is based off: Jesus did not die on the cross, He was, in fact, taken off it and then brought up to the tomb still alive. The resurrection was hence fabricated by men for a greater interest – to see Rome destroyed.
Fair warning: this review may turn controversial by the end. I have never read ‘alternative historical fiction’ before, so color me surprised when the heretical words came pouring in! Especially as I immediately did not clock the story to be that. Still, when I did, I was intrigued. I don't believe we should stay trapped in bubbles of our own making, nor did I think the author necessarily took this premise to be the truth. She simply built a story around the famous burning of Rome - that historically has been accredited to Christians, though historians still debate about what actually happened. Right...huh...? More on that later.
This event has its own mysterious aspects, as well as the resurrection also has especially for someone who lacks faith. Combining these two, the author creates a story in which historical figures from the Bible appear (almost in anonymity*, as names aren’t explicitly stated) to act alongside her own self-made characters in an espionage action book taking place during AD 64. (*For example, Jesus is never called by the name Jesus or Yeshua. He is referred as “the Galilean”; “The Galilean was everyone’s hero, even if he was the enemy. His growing band of followers drew young men from all quarters of Judaea, uniting them in hatred of Rome and its rue.” Obviously, it becomes apparent who this character is supposed to represent, but if you are not familiar with the Bible or are simply distracted, you may miss it at first).
The book features Pantera as one of, if not, the main character. When he was a child, he witnessed his father helping The Galilean, thus contributing to that ploy. In Pantera’s eyes, that constituted as deceit and betrayal, so he fled to Rome. There, under the teaching of Seneca, he became a spy. We only truly meet him, however, as an adult, in his thirties, after life and his service to the romans have treated him poorly and left him permanently scarred, though his famous spy skills have prevailed.
In an orchestrated plan by Seneca to re-encounter Pantera, we meet Math as he is tasked to follow the latter. Math… oh, that poor boy and, without a shadow of a doubt, my favorite character. At first, I believed him to be at least 13-years-old, then the book jump scared me with his actual age. He starts as a mere 9-year-old boy and ends the book with just 10y. He also fits the perfect description of a street rat, an “urchin”. In his father’s words: “He is a thief and a seller of himself” and “has learned to be an urban creature”.
Math is, of course, much more than that. He is not only a talented apprentice rider of the chariot, but he also possesses a great talent for spying, which Pantera takes immediate interest in. He also has a home to return to, although he seems to prefer to keep living the lifestyle of the “dock boys” (whoring and stealing). His lifeline truly is the care people around Math have for him. Characters like Hannah and Ajax, as well as his father, and eventually Pantera, make their priority to protect Math from himself and, eventually, from Rome (and what comes with it).
More characters like Saulos, Akakios, Seneca, and Hypatia color this story in their own way. Most importantly, they interconnect with each other, creating dynamics worth following.
At times, I found the writing convoluted. Difficult to understand, really. Just like the Bible’s names are not explicitly told to us, the plot moves without the author spelling it out to you. You just slowly realize it and let it sink in. This could be either amazingly or frustratingly done, as you may imagine. There are also a lot of horse-talks (after a quick research, I found out the author was a veterinarian), that although certainly knowledgeable, stalled the plot as well. I felt the plot particularly dragging in the middle, not due to those descriptions necessarily, but more because of the writing itself. The first part was definitely the strongest, the finale lost momentum for me. Relationships were being formed that I was quite confused about since the characters barely interacted on page and yet started to love each other? Alright.
What really is the plot? I think I have left some hints, but to summarize: it essentially follows Pantera, under the command of Emperor Nero, as he tries to put a stop to the prophecy that foretells the ruin of the city – Rome will burn. Of course, it becomes more contrived than this, with all the characters having their own path, but it is the core of the book.
Speaking of the man himself. Emperor Nero was just as detestable as he was gripping, as imposing as he was perverse. Truly portrayed how non-fiction works describe him to be. As I have mentioned before, Pantera is connected to him through his work as a spy, and unfortunately, Math will also be a subject of great interest to Nero for far more perverted reasons. As Poros puts it to Math: “Your entire team’s only here because Nero wants to bed you, not for your horses or the skill of your driver.” So yeah, as I said the cast really put their efforts to save Math from Rome (read this as Nero).
I fairly enjoyed this first book. The setting of Ancient Rome was well built, I felt like I was walking those streets, meeting characters from hundreds of years ago. The espionage and political intrigue captivated me mainly through the characters that I ended up caring about (take care Math, please).
All the characters felt like their own person with their own struggles, past lives, intelligence and with strong will to act on what they believed. As I said, I appreciated Math more than the others, maybe because he felt so vulnerable yet, so capable of himself and of growing. Pantera turns into a sort of mentor figure to him; someone he can admire and look up to. Hannah, the healer, raised and trained among Sybils, plays a central role; she is a figure that really moved the plot in more ways than one… more I won’t say. I feel like I rarely mentioned Ajax, the main driver of Math’s chariot Green team, an older brother to Math, but I also really liked him and I’m curious to see more of his character. However, I must also bring the criticism of lack of nuance (a pet peeve of mine): everything is black or white. There are good and bad characters, and that’s all the exploration they will be getting. Sigh.
Now… there are indeed aspects that felt a bit too wild for me and strayed completely from historical facts. You can be an atheist or follow a different religion/spirituality and still recognize the historical reality of biblical figures, knowing they were, after all, living breathing people, with life registers. That doesn’t involve faith, just research. And that’s the reason why I characterized this story as “alternative” historical fiction, and not just mere historical fiction. It leans heavily on conspiracy theories to explore “what ifs” and give, essentially, new fictional roles to these people. And that is how this story is conceived. Nonetheless, it doesn’t lose interest, I’d argue that it may gain even more. Naturally, there were things that bothered me, and especially how a certain character was portrayed. I can’t venture much without spoilers.
//SPOILERS. So, the vilification of St.Paul was a bit insane. St.Paul, or how he is called in the book, Saulos (from Saul), was left and right torturing, killing, and deceiving people to fulfill his political interest. He read as a cult leader, really. Hannah – that is a whole mess by itself, as she is portrayed as one of the three children The Galilean had with Mary Magdalene (again, no historical reality here, but the readers must roll with it) – accuses Saulos of not knowing her father and tests his credibility in front of his followers: “You know nothing about this man you claim to revere. Not a single thing about his life except his death, which you have twisted for your own ends! (…) You never met him. You never spoke to him. And you are not his apostle. You despise and are despised by the men who fought at his side (…).”
All of this can be drawn from historical facts and then twisted with the author’s own interpretation to build such story! St.Paul never met Jesus, that is a fact. He had conflicts and points of divergence with the apostles because of Torah Law, that is another fact. However, after this speech, Shimon (that is inspired by apostle Simon Peter), denies the resurrection and corroborates with Hannah on her accusations… Shimon calls for the other apostles, and they start believing that to be true: The Galilean did not resurrect (which is the truth in this book).
But now I’m confused! The apostles that met Jesus in life were the first to see, believe and preach the resurrection wayyyy before St.Paul changed his ways and started to follow Him too. As I said, besides the Hannah plot that is heavily taken from conspiracies and doesn’t stand on nothing else, the rest could be “credible” somehow. Even Saulos being a Roman agent could "match" some facts, as St.Paul indeed was, before conversion, his name known as Saul, an active persecutor of early Christians, but as a Pharisee. Obviously, OBVIOUSLY, the author had to make this plot work somehow, and things like the apostles being the first believers and agents of faith in Jesus as God HAD to be changed and taken off. How else could it work? If the closest to Him, and not only, were ready to die and be made martyr for that truth that was seen to them, how could you make it work if you did not change historical facts? END OF SPOILERS.\\
ON THE AUTHOR. I said I would speak later on what the author believes the truth to be… So, I committed the HUGE mistake of reading the author's note... She genuinely believes the most plausible explanation is that St. Paul was a Roman agent “tasked with suppressing the growing anti-Roman insurgency”. In her daring opinion she says how he was “a failed Pharisee who lacked the necessary grasp of logic to be taken on as a rabbi, the embittered Paul joined what was, in effect, the military police run by the Sadducees”.
When I read this, my face fell, I physically cringed. I couldn’t believe that the author IS a believer of conspiracy theories. It’s like reading a cool sci-fi book that explores the idea of the Earth being flat, and then at the end the author jumpscares you with her actual flat Earth beliefs. I wish it wouldn’t ruin my enjoyment, but it left a bad taste in my mouth. I mean, sure, she has the right to own an opinion on the matter, it’s the overall confidence and arrogant tone in her final notes that irks me. She holds no historian degree (or anything of the sort), to do such a bold statement and not raise my eyebrows.
Spouting ideas dismissed by academia as mere conspiracy theories is, unfortunately, entirely on brand. Manda Scott believes/practices Shamanic Dreaming (Shamanism) - a “modern extension of indigenous spiritualties” (quote from her website, she has courses for it and everything, lol). So, for more sensitive readers, keep all this in mind regarding the level of irreverence with which she overall treats Christianity and biblical figures in this book.
WILL THIS AFFECT THE RATING? Is innocence bliss? In this case, I would believe so. I deliberately tried to suspend my disbelief the best I could and keep an open mind, but the author's voice was LOUD. I am someone that absolutely disagrees that people should not read from an author they have different opinions or ideals from. It’s such a limited, small mentality. If that were the case, if I only read from people I fully align myself with, then I would barely read. So no, my rating is solely based on this author’s fictionalized story, not her beliefs. I mentioned them because I debated heavily on if that should be reflected on the rating. (And because I found it all to be a bit crazy and worth a mention).
A small reflection: If we all read a bit more outside of our bubble; if people understood that they often willingly put themselves in safe, bubbly wrapped echo chambers, that would be a great start. Isn’t the point of reading to understand different perspectives, rather than only those we are comfortable with? Different doesn’t only mean a reality foreign to your own, but a point of view you also have learned to reject. I can’t count the number of times I read a book that had predominant elements that conflicted with my personal ideals, and I was still able to find enjoyment in them. I believe that type of mentality is true open-mindedness, not the pre-curated open-mindedness that most people engage in nowadays. You are not practicing true open-mindedness if you just engage in things you already believe, agree and are comfortable with – that is selective tolerance!
Circle. All the same. Snow/Coin ahh criticism.
- Beginning: 5☆
- Middle: 3☆
- Ending: 2/2,5☆
Final rating: 3.5☆